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Dolphin
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The dolphins live in the ocean. And they are cute and beautiful. They not only swim fast, they are also smart, They are often in gray color. Besides, they are good at swimming and jumping in the ocean. They are also friendly animals. They look like fish, but they actually are mammals. Because they are able to learn things very quickly, dolphins can be trained by people. So now, we can often see the dolphin show in the aquarium, 蘇州易優(yōu)吳老師中考語(yǔ)文閱讀寫(xiě)作培訓(xùn)（TEL:181-1815-9898）
They are so friendly. I love them very much.
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海豚
你見(jiàn)過(guò)海豚嗎?你有沒(méi)有被它們吸引呢?
海豚生活在海洋里。它們又可愛(ài)，又美麗。它們不僅游得快，而且很聰明。它們通常是灰色的。除此之外，它們擅長(zhǎng)在海洋里游泳和跳躍。它們也是一一種友好的動(dòng)物。 它們看起來(lái)像魚(yú)，但它們是哺乳動(dòng)物。因?yàn)樗鼈儗W(xué)東西很快，人們可以訓(xùn)練海豚。 所以現(xiàn)在，我們可以經(jīng)常在水族館看到海豚表演。
它們非常友好。我非常喜歡它們。
亮點(diǎn)詞匯
fascinate 使著迷;吸引
ocean大海;海洋
smart聰明的;機(jī)智的
mammal哺乳動(dòng)物
aquarium 水族館
出彩句型
Are you fascinated by them?你被它們吸引了嗎?
They not only...，but also...他們不......而.....
They are often in.. color.它們通常......色。
They are good at... 它們擅長(zhǎng).....
They look lek...它們看起來(lái)像......
高分點(diǎn)評(píng)
本文描寫(xiě)的是海豚這一種動(dòng)物， 主要抓住了它的活動(dòng)方式進(jìn)行展開(kāi)，顯示出了海豚可愛(ài)、可人的特點(diǎn)。文章的開(kāi)頭別具-格， 使用了兩個(gè)問(wèn)句，吸引讀者注意力的同時(shí)，拉近了與讀者的距離。其次，文章的邏輯承接較好，如"besides" "because”"so"等詞的使用，將句與句之間的關(guān)系清楚地體現(xiàn)了出來(lái)。
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Tortoise
Tortoise is a cute animal. It doesn't walk very fast, but it always attracts people' s attention.
It has a short tail, four short feet, a little head and a hard shell. They like to play in the water. When they are afraid of something, they would shrink their heads into the shells quickly. Their favorite food is fish. They have a good knack for catching fish.Firstly, they have a fake sleep. When the fish swim near their mouth, they catch the fish at once and bite the fish's head. In winter, they usually sleep in the sand.
I love the tortoise because of its cuteness.
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烏龜
烏龜是非?？蓯?ài)的動(dòng)物。它爬得不是很快，但是它總能吸引人們的注意。
它有一一條短尾巴、四條短腿、一個(gè)小腦袋和一一個(gè)硬殼。它們喜歡在水里玩。當(dāng)它們害怕某樣?xùn)|西時(shí)，它們會(huì)迅速將腦袋縮進(jìn)硬殼里。它們最喜歡的食物是魚(yú)。它們非常擅長(zhǎng)于抓魚(yú)。首先，它們會(huì)假裝睡覺(jué)。當(dāng)魚(yú)游近它們的嘴巴時(shí)，它們馬上抓住魚(yú)，并咬住魚(yú)的腦袋。冬天的時(shí)候，它們通常會(huì)在沙子里睡覺(jué)。
我喜歡烏龜，因?yàn)樗芸蓯?ài)。
亮點(diǎn)詞匯
shell殼;硬殼
shrink 縮;縮水
fake假裝 偽造的
bite咬
出彩句型
It always attracts people' s attention.它總能吸引人們的注意。
They are afraid of...它們害.....
They have a good knack fr..它們擅長(zhǎng).....
They have a fake sleep.它們假裝睡覺(jué)。
shell 亮，硬殼
高分點(diǎn)評(píng)
本文著重描寫(xiě)了烏龜?shù)耐庑我约捌渥ヴ~(yú)的經(jīng)過(guò)，尤其是對(duì)其抓魚(yú)過(guò)程的描述非常生動(dòng)具體，刻畫(huà)得入木三分。作者對(duì)烏龜?shù)挠^察可謂細(xì)致入微，將其遇到危險(xiǎn)時(shí)的舉動(dòng)描寫(xiě)得惟妙惟肖。除此以外，豐富的詞組，貼切的運(yùn)用，如“attract people's attention" "have a good knack for"等，無(wú)疑都為文章添加了不少閃光點(diǎn)。
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相關(guān)話題滿分作文必背
（一）
I have a dog, it is lovely, it is called Mimi. Every time I go home from school, Mimi always cruising around me, I will go to the kitchen to get a piece of meat to it, it lay on the floor to eat. My legs and then jump to bark "Wang "called, so I picked up Mimi, it is the opportunity to lick my hand, making me laugh.
I like Mimi, like puppies.
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我有一條小狗，它很可愛(ài)，它叫咪咪。每當(dāng)我放學(xué)回家時(shí)，咪咪總是圍著我繞圈I我便去廚房拿一片肉給它，它就趴在地板上吃。然后跳到我腿上汪汪汪地叫，于是我抱起咪咪，它就乘機(jī)舔我的手，逗得我哈哈大笑。
我喜歡咪咪，喜歡小狗。
（二）
Dolphin is my favourite animal.
It is one of the most precious animals. Their bodies are very long, about one zhang (it).Dolphins live in the sea. They live on fish, shrimps and so on.
Dolphins are very friendly and peaceful. They never attack people. Instead, they have saved many people in danger in the past years. How helpful the dolphins are!
Dolphins are very clever. People often train them so that they can give a dolphin show which brings people a lot of happiness and joy.
Unluckily, the number of dolphins is getting smaller and smaller. Because of water pollution, there is less and less space for dolphins. Many people make money by hunting dolphins. 1f we don' t protect them, maybe we' I lose our good friends one day. As a student, I hope more and more people should take actions to protect dolphins.
海豚是我最喜歡的動(dòng)物。
這是最珍貴的動(dòng)物之一。他們的身體很長(zhǎng)，約1張(丈)。海豚生活在海里。他們住在魚(yú)、蝦等。
海豚是很友好和和平。他們從不襲擊人。相反,他們挽救了許多人的危險(xiǎn)。多么有用的海豚!
海豚是非常聰明的。人們常常訓(xùn)練他們，這樣他們就可以給海豚表演這讓人們大量的幸福和快樂(lè)。
不巧的是，海豚的數(shù)量正變得越來(lái)越小。因?yàn)樗廴?/span>,海豚有越來(lái)越少的空間。許多人通過(guò)捕獵海豚賺錢(qián)。如果我們不保護(hù)他們，也許有- -天我們就會(huì)失去我們的好朋友。作為一名學(xué)生，我希望越來(lái)越多的人應(yīng)該采取措施來(lái)保護(hù)海豚。
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My Favorite Animal
Last year, my father bought a lovely pet for me.
She has four white paws and a white and yellow tail. She has two small ears, two green eyes and eight whiskers on her face. Her name is Sally and she is one year old.
Do you know what it is? A cat? Yes, it is a cat. She has very short fur and she is quite small. She weighs about 2 kilograms. She is usually very friendly and quiet. We never frighten her or pull her tail or ears. She likes walking around me and playing with me.
If she is hungry, she will miaow. Usually, she eats food from a tin,but her favorite food is fish. She likes juice if it is not too cold. She likes to chase and catch mice and sometimes she plays with butterflies. Sally often plays with balls and pieces of string. She does not like dogs and she hates the rain. She likes sitting on the sofa and watching TV.
Sally is a very good friend, but she is quite lazy! She never worries because we take good care of her. She is always a happy cat.
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我最喜歡的動(dòng)物
去年，我父親給我買(mǎi)了一只可愛(ài)的寵物。
她有四只白爪子和一條白黃相間的尾巴。她有兩只小耳朵，她臉上長(zhǎng)有兩只綠眼睛和八只胡須。她叫莎莉，今年一歲了。
你知道她是什么嗎?一只貓?是的，它是一只貓。她的皮毛很短，她很小。她大約2公斤重。她通常非常友好、安靜。我們從不嚇?biāo)蛘叱端奈舶突蚨洹Ｋ矚g在我周?chē)邅?lái)走去，和我玩。
如果她餓了，她會(huì)喵喵叫。通常，她吃罐頭食物，但是她最喜歡的食物是魚(yú)。如果天氣不太冷的話，她喜歡喝果汁。她喜歡追老鼠和捉老鼠有時(shí)她和蝴蝶一起玩耍。莎莉經(jīng)常玩球和繩子。她不喜歡狗，她討厭下雨。她喜歡坐在沙發(fā)上看電視。
莎莉是個(gè)很好的朋友，但她很懶!她從來(lái)不擔(dān)心是因?yàn)槲覀冋疹櫟煤芎?。她是一只總是快?lè)的貓。
