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1. 與聯(lián)系人寒暄，表明寫作意圖，引出話題。若與收信人較親密，可以直呼其名，然后簡單說明寫信目的:若與聯(lián)系人較為陌生，可以先說明自己的身份再引出寫信的目的。
2. 詳細(xì)闡述郵件內(nèi)容，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。內(nèi)容即寫信人具體要說的話。可以是通知、致謝、敘事、致賀、邀請(qǐng)、提建議等，可以是一件事，也可以是幾件事。
3.首尾呼應(yīng)，再次點(diǎn)明主旨，表示問候。簡單概括郵件的主題，表達(dá)對(duì)收信人的美好祝愿，再次表明自己的寫作意圖，呼應(yīng)開頭，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更加嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。
必備詞匯
sincerely/truly真誠地
regards問候
wishes祝愿;希望
look forward to期待
as soon as possible盡快
congratulation祝賀;恭喜
suggestion建議
advice提議;建議
inform通知
reply回信
必備句型
一、開頭常 用句式
( 1) How have you been recently? 你近來怎樣?
(2) How are you getting on with your English?你的英語學(xué)得怎么樣?
(3) I wonder if everything is going well with you.我想知道你最近是否一切順利。
(4) I haven't heard from you for ages.我很久沒有收到你的來信了。
(5) I'm writing to you for some help.我寫郵件給你是希望得到你的幫助。
(6) I am sorry for delaying the e-mail so long.耽誤了這么久才給你回郵件，我很抱歉。
(7 ) Thanks for your e-mail.謝謝你的郵件。
(8) I'm glad to receive your e-mail.很高興收到你的郵件。
(9) You must be surprised to receive my e-mail收到我的郵件你一定很意外。
二、常用于闡達(dá)事件或提出建議、邀請(qǐng)等。
(1) Something bad happened to me有件倒害事發(fā)生在我身上。
(2)1am going to tell you something serious.我想告訴你一件根戶肅的事情。
(3) 1 would like to share my success on the competition with you.
我想和你分享我比賽得獎(jiǎng)的消息。
(4) The party is on Saturday morning聚會(huì)在周六早上。
(5)1 wan to invite you to have dinner with me this Friday.這個(gè)星期五我想邀請(qǐng)你共進(jìn)晚餐。
(6) Would you like to join a in the picnic?你愿意和我們一起野餐嗎?
(7) I have got 3 pieces of advice for you, just as follows:
我有三點(diǎn)建議給你，正如下文所示:
(8) You should follow thee 3 steps. Firstly, . Secondly, ... And last, ...
你應(yīng)該按照這三個(gè)步驟，第一.......第二......第三......
?結(jié)尾常用句式
(1)1 would be grateful if you could provide me with some information.
如果你能給我提供一些信息，我會(huì)很感激的。
(2) 1 wonder if you could help me out of it.我想知道你能否幫我一把。
(3)1 hope that you can show me what t0 do next我希望你能告訴我下一步該怎么做。
(4) I'm looking forward”hearing from you我期待收到你的回信。
(5) Please write me back as soon as possible請(qǐng)盡快給我回信。
(6) I hope to see you at the party我希望能在聚會(huì)上見到你。
(7) Please take good care of yourself and have a good time請(qǐng)照顧好自己，并玩得開心。
(8) Please do let me know if you have decided it 如果你決定了，一定要讓我知道。
(9) Thank you again for your help.再次感謝你的幫助。
(10) I would appreciate it if you could write me back.如果你能回信，我會(huì)很感激的。
(11) I need to go to school, so I have to quit it.我要去學(xué)校了，所以只能擱筆了。
相關(guān)話題寫作示例指導(dǎo)
題目
根據(jù)中文提示，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯的回信。詞數(shù)在80-100之間。假如你是李明，你的美國筆友Tony給你寫了-封電子郵件說他最近過得很不錯(cuò)，希望你給他寫一一封回信，說一下你的生活近況。
內(nèi)容包括: 1.一個(gè)星期前，發(fā)燒請(qǐng)了五天假，直到期末考才回學(xué)校; 2.期末考成績不理想，心情低落，但得到了父母的安慰; 3.期待Tony的回信。
思路導(dǎo)航
第1步:例文審題
主體人稱
題目要求“你”以李明的身份來寫回信，因此主體人稱為第一人稱“"1”。
主體時(shí)態(tài)
由于回信要介紹的生活近況發(fā)生在過去，故主體時(shí)態(tài)用一一般過去時(shí)。
寫作貼士
題目要求主要包含三個(gè)方面，但這是一一封回信，因此在開頭要概括題目設(shè)定的背景內(nèi)容;第三點(diǎn)的期待回信要用一一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
第2步:列提綱
(1)簡單概括Tony寫給李明的郵件的內(nèi)容。
(2)根據(jù)題目要求詳細(xì)講述李明的生活近況。
(3)表明期待Tony的回信。
第3步:參考詞句
(1) Tony; glad; have a good time; not feel well.
(2) fever, upset; attend school; a 5-day leave; final examination; fail; prepare for...
(3) look forward to; reply...
第4步:連句成篇
Dear Tony,
I am glad to learn that you had good days recently. But I am not feeling well these days.
One week ago, I had a high fever and was unable to attend school. Therefore,| had to ask for 5 days' leave. I didn't return to school until the final exam came.It didn't surprise me that I failed my exam, but I still felt upset about it. My parents didn't blame me. Instead, they comforted me that I would do well the next time.
Please take good care of yourself. And I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
參考譯文
親愛的托尼:
我很高興知道你最近過得很開心。但是這些天我并不開心。
一個(gè)星期前， 我發(fā)高燒了，不能去上學(xué)。因此，我只好請(qǐng)了5天假。直到期末考試到了，我才回到學(xué)校?？荚嚥患案癫]有令我驚訝，但我還是對(duì)此感到難過。我的父母并沒有責(zé)備我，相反地，他們安慰我說我下次會(huì)考好的。
請(qǐng)照顧好你自己。我期待你的回信。
你真誠的，
李明
相關(guān)話題真題解析
（一）
即將畢業(yè)的你，將如何處理初中階段的各種書籍和筆記呢?假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給學(xué)校英文報(bào)寫一封電子郵件，分享你處理這些書籍和筆記的計(jì)劃與理由。
要求：
1. 參考表格內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；
3. 文章不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息（姓名，校名和地名等）；
4. 詞數(shù)：不少于70個(gè)詞，（開頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。
Dear Editor,
My name is Li Hua. I'm going to graduate soon. I'd like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.
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There are my ideas. I hope they can help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【寫作思路】
本篇作文為應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封電子郵件，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)內(nèi)容：
1. 審題：不需要寫題目，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，只需要按照給出的提示寫出自己如何處理筆記和書籍的計(jì)劃和理由，給的提示短語需要全部列出。
2. 列提綱：
第一段：開頭已給出，引入主題，第二段：詳細(xì)列出自己處理筆記和書籍的計(jì)劃和理由第三段：結(jié)尾已給出，進(jìn)行情感的升華。
3. 人稱及時(shí)態(tài)：第一人“我”為主，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)選用一般將來時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
【參考范文】
Dear Editor,
My name is Li Hua. I'm going to graduate soon. I'd like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.
First of all, I will put all my books into different kinds. Secondly, I am going to give my textbooks to my younger cousins. In this way, they can study at home during the coming summer vacation. Besides, I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices. What's more, I decide to keep the notebooks for myself. They bring me lots of sweet memories. Finally the used paper will be taken to the waste center.
There are my ideas. I hope they can help.
Yours,
Li Hua
（二）
假如你是國際學(xué)校的學(xué)生李華，你的同學(xué)Tom寫了一封郵件詢問你暑假的安排，請(qǐng)給
Tom回封郵件，告知你的計(jì)劃，并邀請(qǐng)他來黃石游玩。
內(nèi)容包括：1. 讀幾本好書；
2. 參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)；
3. 幫父母做家務(wù)；
4. 和朋友一起鍛煉；
5. 邀請(qǐng)Tom。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)信息；
4. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞忙：有意義的 meaningful 經(jīng)典文學(xué)作品classic literature works
社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)social practice activities
Dear Tom,
I'm very happy to hear from you. _____________________________________________________________
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【寫作思路】
本文屬于材料作文，寫信告訴湯姆你的暑假計(jì)劃并邀請(qǐng)湯姆來黃石玩。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。
【參考范文】
Dear Tom,
I'm very happy to hear from you. How are you going these days? Summer vacation is coming soon. Here I’d like to share my holiday plan with you. First of all, I am going to read some good books to open up my mind. What’s more, I’ll take part in some volunteer activities to raise awareness of serving the society and improve my social communication ability. Of course, exercise is must. I will run, play basketball, ride a bike and so on. Last but not least, I am about to invite you to visit my hometown, Huangshi and I really want to meet you.
How about yours? I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如would like to do, share sth with, be going to, open up one’s mind, take part in, awareness of serving the society, of course, and so on, be about to do, invite sb to do, look forward to doing以及first of all, what’s more和last but not least,增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。
（三）
假如你是李華，想?yún)⒓覥hina Daily 舉辦的以”夢想職業(yè)體驗(yàn)”為主題的2019年夏令營活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)給主辦人Mr. Smith寫一封介紹個(gè)人情況的申請(qǐng)郵件。內(nèi)容包括：1.個(gè)人信息與興趣愛好2.夢想職業(yè)與個(gè)人計(jì)劃
寫作要求；1.詞數(shù)90詞左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱與姓名。
Dear Mr. Smith,
It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you. ____________________________________________________
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I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【寫作思路】
本文屬于申請(qǐng)信，給主辦人史密斯先生寫一封介紹個(gè)人情況的申請(qǐng)郵件，包含個(gè)人信息與興趣愛好和夢想職業(yè)與個(gè)人計(jì)劃。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。
【參考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you．
My name is Li Hua．I like reading and writing．I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school．And I have a habit of keeping a dairy．I want to be a writer when I grow up．So After knowing your summer camp，I feel very excited because it's about dream job experience．If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job，I will cherish this chance．After work，I will spend more time making a summary．
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply．
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如like doing, spend+時(shí)間+doing sth, keep a diary, grow up以及If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job，I will cherish this chance中if引導(dǎo)的條件句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主句用一般將來時(shí)，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。
（四）
假如你叫陳偉，2019年6月22日和23日是你中考后的第一個(gè)周末，請(qǐng)你制定一個(gè)周末活動(dòng)計(jì)劃，并用英語給你的英國筆友Alan寫一封電子郵件，說明你的活動(dòng)安排。
主要活動(dòng)內(nèi)容包括：
1. 6月22日上午在家讀書；下午與家人和朋友外出活動(dòng)；
2. 6月23日到朋友家附近的公園撿垃圾；
3. 你對(duì)本次活動(dòng)的期待。
注意：
1. 郵件字?jǐn)?shù)：80詞左右。
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫，但郵件中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名。
3. 郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給擊，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Alan,
I'm going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend. ___________________________________________
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Yours,
Chen Wei
【寫作思路】
寫作要求以電子郵件的形式介紹自己中考后的第一個(gè)周末活動(dòng)計(jì)劃。寫作時(shí)要仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點(diǎn)：分別從時(shí)間和活動(dòng)安排來介紹，根據(jù)表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般將來時(shí)態(tài)，會(huì)用到be going to結(jié)構(gòu)，人稱為第一人稱。在時(shí)間的表達(dá)上注意介詞的正確使用，在某一天的早晨、下午、晚上用介詞on。寫作時(shí)，還需注意語句間的銜接，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。
【參考范文】
Dear Alan,
I'm going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend. On the morning of 22nd June, I'm going to get up a little late and then read an interesting storybook. In the afternoon I'm going out with my family and friends. We're going to take a walk in the country near our home or go swimming in the lake. And on 23rd June we're going to collect liter in the park near my friend's house. I think it's going to be a great weekend-busy but good fun!
Yours,
Chen Wei
（五）
假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Jack想結(jié)交更多的中國朋友。請(qǐng)用英文寫封郵件，將你的男同學(xué)陳東介紹給他。內(nèi)容包括：
年齡與外表
16歲；高大健壯
興趣與愛好
喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)、閱讀和聽音樂；最喜歡的科目是英語
性格與為人
風(fēng)趣幽默；樂于助人、容易相處
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)70左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名與校名。
參考詞匯：
高大健壯tall and strong 運(yùn)動(dòng)do sports 聽音樂listen to music
最喜歡的科目favourite subject 風(fēng)趣幽默funny and humorous
樂于做某事be ready to do sth. 相處get on with
Dear Jack,
How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.
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I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend. With my best wishes
Yours,
Li Hua
【寫作思路】
【參考范文】
Dear Jack,
How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.
Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you．He is a 16-year-old boy．He has round face ，black hair and bright eyes．He is tall and strong．He likes smiling very much．（高分句型一）（要點(diǎn)一，介紹男同學(xué)的外貌及特征．）He likes doingh sports．reading and listening to music．His favourite subject is English ．because he thinks it is very interesting．He is humorous and funny．He is ready to help others and easy to get on with others． 【要點(diǎn)二，介紹同學(xué)的性格．】He likes doing sports．reading and listening to music．His favourite subject is English．because he thinks it is very interesting．He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities．（高分句型二） He likes winter very much， because he thinks winter is a season to do many fun things，such as skating ，making snowman and so on．【要點(diǎn)三，介紹同學(xué)的喜好．】 His dream is becoming an English teacher，because he wants his students to get good grades．【要點(diǎn)四，介紹同學(xué)的理想．】 I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend．With my best wishes!（要點(diǎn)五，美好的祝愿．）
Yours,
Li Hua
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
高分句型一
He likes smiling very much．此句是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的陳述句．運(yùn)用短語like doing sth "喜歡做某事"，短語very much "非常，很"．此句可翻譯為"他很喜歡笑．"
注意like后加doing
高分句型二
He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities．此句是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的陳述句．運(yùn)用短語spend
some time （in）doing sth "花時(shí)間做某事"．短語take part in "參加"．此句可翻譯為"他還花大量時(shí)間參加課外活動(dòng)．"
