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【母題來(lái)源1】
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61. 假如你叫李華，你們學(xué)校剛剛開(kāi)學(xué)，正在開(kāi)展 “Happy Month”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你以 “Learn to BeHappy”為題，給學(xué)校英語(yǔ)廣播站寫(xiě)一篇廣播稿，號(hào)召同學(xué)們返校后快樂(lè)生活。 語(yǔ)文成績(jī)好，書(shū)法少不了，學(xué)書(shū)法，推薦<A http://www.zequeka.cn/miniform/type_3.html>易優(yōu)少兒書(shū)法培訓(xùn)</a>
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1.新冠疫情使學(xué)校延遲開(kāi)學(xué);
中小學(xué)生作文投稿，中小學(xué)生作文點(diǎn)評(píng)與打分系統(tǒng)，<a href=http://www.zequeka.cn/jiaOshoulanmu/>易優(yōu)作文批改</A>
2.通過(guò)上網(wǎng)課學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)文、數(shù)學(xué)和英語(yǔ)等課程;
3.“Happy, Month”活動(dòng)和你的心情:
4.如何快樂(lè)生活(至少2點(diǎn))。
寫(xiě)作要求:
1.結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)通順，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，書(shū)寫(xiě)清晰;
2.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的人名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)等信息；
3.詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：新型冠狀病毒COVID—19
Learn to Be Happy
Good morning, everyone! We’re very happy to be back to school.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope all of us can live happily in this school. Thank you for your listening!
【寫(xiě)作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文，假如你是李華，學(xué)校剛剛開(kāi)學(xué)，正在開(kāi)展 “Happy Month”活動(dòng)，要求你以 “Learn to Be Happy”為題，題干內(nèi)容提示，給學(xué)校英語(yǔ)廣播站寫(xiě)一篇廣播稿，號(hào)召同學(xué)們返校后快樂(lè)生活。首先要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。
【參考范文】
Learn to Be Happy
Good morning ,everyone! I'm very happy to be back to school.
To prevent the Corid-19, our school has delayed (put off) the opening of this term. But we didn't stop studying. Our school gave us online courses such as Chinese, Math, English and so on. We were very happy.
Now our school is carrying out the plan“happy Month”. How to be happy? First, I think we should have life aims ,with life aims, we can live a happy and meaningful life. Then, we must keep healthy. What’s more, we should be ready to help others.
I hope all of us can live happily in this school. Thank you for your listening!
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
1.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本例文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明。根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書(shū)面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。
2.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：put off，such as，so on，keep healthy，be ready to。
句型：I think we should have life aims. 我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該有生活目標(biāo)。I think后接賓語(yǔ)從句。
What’s more, we should be ready to help others. 更重要的是，我們應(yīng)該準(zhǔn)備好幫助別人。be ready to do sth.準(zhǔn)備好做某事。
【母題來(lái)源2】
80.假如你是中學(xué)生李平，曾經(jīng)在你們班學(xué)習(xí)的交換生Peter看了你發(fā)布的朋友圈，他對(duì)你們班上周舉行的主題班會(huì)很感興趣。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息給他寫(xiě)一封信，向他介紹班會(huì)的情況并和他交流一下中學(xué)生如何才能實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想。
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1.班會(huì)的主題：我的理想
2.介紹你和幾名同學(xué)的理想：
（1）趙勇：想成為一名勇敢的警察；
（2）張紅：想做一名志愿者；
（3）你：想成為一名優(yōu)秀的醫(yī)生。
3.說(shuō)說(shuō)中學(xué)生如何才能實(shí)現(xiàn)（realize）自己的理想（ideal）。
寫(xiě)作要求：
1.不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。
2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。
3.字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。
4.至少80詞。
Dear peter,
I'm writing to tell you something about the class meeting held last week. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【寫(xiě)作思路】
這是一篇話題作文，介紹班會(huì)
情況，班會(huì)的主題是談?wù)摾硐?，通過(guò)分析可知，除了短文開(kāi)頭介紹上周班會(huì)情況，我們應(yīng)該使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，其他內(nèi)容可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要隨著時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)的變化而改變。
【參考范文】
Dear peter,
I'm writing to tell you something about the class meeting held last week. The theme of it was “My Ideal”. Our monitor hosted the meeting. During it, all of us took an active part in the discussion and shared our opinions with each other.
Zhao Yong is going to be a brave policeman. He hopes to help people in danger. Zhang Hong wants to be a volunteer, she will help people in need especially the disabled and the homeless. My dream is to be an excellent doctor, I think it’s a meaningful job, because I can save people’s lives and help them out of danger.
To realize our ideals, I have some opinions. Firstly, we must try to work harder from now on and learn as much knowledge as possible. Secondly, we should believe ourselves, because confidence is the key to success. Besides, it’s also important to find out how successfully people did it so that we can learn from them.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
1.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用分段式，文中銜接流暢，在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候選擇了一些相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也運(yùn)用多種句型，句式豐富多彩，避免單一化，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)，潤(rùn)色了文章的內(nèi)容。
2.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：host the meeting；take an active part in；in danger；a meaningful job；from now on；learn from。
句型：① I think it’s a meaningful job, because I can save people’s lives and help them out of danger.
②Secondly, we should believe ourselves, because confidence is the key to success.
③Besides, it’s also important to find out how successfully people did it so that we can learn from them.
【母題來(lái)源3】
81.為加強(qiáng)機(jī)場(chǎng)服務(wù)工作，現(xiàn)面向社會(huì)招募志愿者，若你具備以下條件，請(qǐng)致電：63688881。
1）身體健康；2）性格善良、有耐心；3）擅長(zhǎng)與人溝通；4）會(huì)講漢語(yǔ)和英語(yǔ)。
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上信息，用5-6句話寫(xiě)一份招聘廣告。
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【參考范文】
Volunteers wanted
We need volunteers at the airport. Are you in good health? Are you kind and patient? Are you good at communicating with people? Can you speak both Chinese and English? Please call us at 63688881.
【母題來(lái)源4】
83.仔細(xì)觀察圖片描述，展開(kāi)合理想象，然后寫(xiě)一篇短文。
12 3.45.
提示詞：mask（口罩）；keep a certain distance（保持一定距離）
要求：1. 話題作文或圖示作文任選其一。
2. 詞數(shù)：80-100之間。
3. 字跡工整，語(yǔ)法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
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【寫(xiě)作思路】
本題屬于圖畫(huà)作文。要求觀察圖片，展開(kāi)合理想象來(lái)寫(xiě)一篇作文。觀察圖片及提示詞可知這里是五條關(guān)于預(yù)防新型冠狀病毒肺炎的建議。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要緊扣圖片內(nèi)容并進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。適當(dāng)使用副詞和連詞等增加亮點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)好時(shí)，再閱讀一遍，減少語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，不要犯單詞拼寫(xiě)上的錯(cuò)誤。
【參考范文】
Novel coronavirus is spreading around the world and many countries are fighting against it. We should do something to avoid it.
Here is my advice for everyone. Firstly, if we have to go out, we must wear masks to protect ourselves. Secondly, we should always wash hands to keep germs away. Thirdly, we need to open the windows very often to let the fresh air in. Fouthly, we should take our temperature often and if we have a fever we should go to the doctor in time. Finally, keeping a certain distance with others is also very important.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
1. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的例文。例文緊扣題目要求，從圖片內(nèi)容延伸出5條預(yù)防新型冠狀病毒肺炎的建議，用上了所給提示詞并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。例文簡(jiǎn)明扼要，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)到位。
2. 高分亮點(diǎn)：
單詞和短語(yǔ)：spread；around the world；fight against；avoid；wear masks；keep germs away；take one's temperature；have a fever；in time；keep a certain distance。
句型：and連接的并列句；以here開(kāi)頭的倒裝句；if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句。
【母題來(lái)源5】
61.假設(shè)你是Angelica的朋友Alan，請(qǐng)根據(jù)第二節(jié)（回答問(wèn)題）材料并按照提示給Angelica回信：1. 恭喜喬遷并簡(jiǎn)單評(píng)述其新居。2. 回復(fù)能否參加聚會(huì)。3. 若能參加聚會(huì)，你會(huì)準(zhǔn)備什么節(jié)目，對(duì)整個(gè)活動(dòng)有什么建議等；若不能參會(huì)，說(shuō)明原因，表達(dá)自己的心情等。注意：1. 80詞以上，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 不得出現(xiàn)人名和校名等真實(shí)信息。
Dear Angelica,
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Alan
【寫(xiě)作思路】
這是一篇書(shū)信作文。本文要求按照提示要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一封回信，寫(xiě)作中注意要包含所有的提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱(chēng)是第一人稱(chēng)。
【參考范文】
Dear Angelica,
I’m glad to receive your letter last time. First of all, congratulations on your settlement to the new house，which is so warm and comfortable that I’d like to have a look at once. The small independent garden is the best design in the house, and also a good place to relax. Secondly, I really appreciate your invitation of the housewarming party. I’d love to, but I can’t. As you know, the National Piano Grading Test is coming, my course schedule on these days is already full. I have to devote myself to the preparation until the end of the test. At last, it’s a great pity that I can’t come to your party. But I’ve prepared a gift for you and I hope you will like it.
May your party be a great success and enjoy yourself that day!
Yours,
Alan
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
1.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文采用兩段式，第一段：（1）恭喜對(duì)方喬遷之喜；（2）告訴對(duì)方因?yàn)橐獪?zhǔn)備鋼琴等級(jí)考試無(wú)法參加聚會(huì)；（3）表示很遺憾并準(zhǔn)備了禮物；第二段以祝福結(jié)尾。文章緊扣題目要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)到位。
2.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：be glad to；so…that…；would like (love) to；have a look；at once；have to；devote myself to；prepare for；the end of；enjoy yourself。
句型：First of all…Secondly…At last…；which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；so…that…引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句；and并列句；but并列復(fù)合句；As you know…；it’s +名詞+ that從句。
【命題意圖】
考查學(xué)生的基礎(chǔ)英語(yǔ)和邏輯寫(xiě)作能力。
【考試方向】
說(shuō)明介紹類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)。
【得分要點(diǎn)】
寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：
認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。
構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。
初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。
修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。
【母題1】【來(lái)源】
減負(fù)之后，同學(xué)們有了更多的課余時(shí)間。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下圖提示，以"How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?"為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文(100詞左右)。短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。
How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?
Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?
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【答案】One possible version:
How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?
Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?
In my opinion, it's good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we will know more about the world by reading. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves. I think sports have become more and more important in people's life. We can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What's more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those who are in need.
In a word, let's make full use of our spare time and make it more meaningful.
【解析】
【詳解】1. 題干解讀：文章是一篇話題作文。主要以“How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful”為主題展開(kāi)的描寫(xiě)，根據(jù)題目中給出的圖片提示具體的描寫(xiě)，要包括每一個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)，同時(shí)還要有自己的意見(jiàn)，要注意文章的層次以及語(yǔ)言的邏輯性。
2. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章分三段描寫(xiě)。第一段總體拋出文章的主題“該如何利用業(yè)余時(shí)間”；第二段具體的從各個(gè)方面介紹業(yè)余時(shí)間要做的事情；第三段總結(jié)要充分利用業(yè)余時(shí)間。整個(gè)文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，思路清晰，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，用詞恰當(dāng)合理，意思明確易懂。
3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：in my opinion；get close to；do sports；What’s more；in a word；make full use of。
句型：I think+賓語(yǔ)從句；who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句；let’s祈使句。
【母題2】【來(lái)源】
一個(gè)人可以非常清貧、困頓、低微，但是不可以沒(méi)有夢(mèng)想。只要夢(mèng)想一天，只要夢(mèng)想存在一天， 就可以改變自己的處境。——奧普拉
初中三年，你一定遇到過(guò)很多困難，但最終夢(mèng)想給了你勇氣，幫助你戰(zhàn)勝了困難。某英文報(bào)社以“夢(mèng)想的力量”為話題展開(kāi)征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你用英文寫(xiě)篇短文給報(bào)社投稿，談?wù)勀阍趬?mèng)想的力量下戰(zhàn)勝困難的一次經(jīng)歷，以及你的收獲感受。
提示詞語(yǔ)： dream, power, remember, defeat, proud
提示問(wèn)題：
●What was your dream?
●How did your dream help you to overcome a difficulty?
●What have you learnt from the experience?
Everybody has a big dream. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Everybody has a big dream. A life without a dream is a life without a sun. Therefore, in no circumstances can we give up our dream. Unquestionably, dreams are of great importance.
My dream is to be a reporter. To achieve my dream, I have to work hard to enter the best high school in my town. I still remember when I failed my math exam last month, I was so sad and upset that I was ready to give up my math. In my mind, I was a stupid girl who wasn’t good at it, it was so difficult for me to work out the problems. Luckily, my dream encouraged me to walk further and cheered me up. It is like a good friend and always gives me a lot of energy and power to defeat the failure.
I realize no matter how difficult the road is, I should try my best to keep walking to reach the end of the road. And my dream is always guiding me correctly.
【解析】
【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題屬于材料寫(xiě)作。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意問(wèn)題信息要寫(xiě)齊全。
2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式，第一大段說(shuō)夢(mèng)想的重要性；第二大段陳述我的夢(mèng)想是什么，夢(mèng)想在一次經(jīng)歷中給我的力量；第三大段陳述從這次事件中的收獲，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，段落分明。用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作分析；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主。
3.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：give up，work hard，be ready to，encourage sb. to do sth.，cheer me up，work out。
句型：so ... that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句，who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。
【母題3】【來(lái)源】
2020年春節(jié)期間，“新型冠狀病毒肺炎”爆發(fā),全國(guó)展開(kāi)了抗擊病毒的斗爭(zhēng)，你們班就此召開(kāi)了一次主題班會(huì)討論如何預(yù)防“新型冠狀病毒肺炎”，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹新型冠狀病毒肺炎的癥狀及預(yù)防方法。
要求：1.文中需包含參考詞匯中的主要內(nèi)容；
2.句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確、連貫,書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
3.可做適量拓展；
4.文中不得提及考生個(gè)人的相關(guān)信息,如人名、校名或地名等；
5.詞數(shù):100詞左右。(開(kāi)頭需抄寫(xiě)在答題卡對(duì)應(yīng)作答區(qū)域,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))
6. 參考詞匯：新型冠狀病毒 COVID19; 口罩mask; 疾病 disease; 感染 infect
be infected by COVID-19：have a sore throat； have a high fever and cough ；hard to breathe
protect ourselves：stay at home；take temperature every day; wear a mask；wash our hands; have a healthy diet; do more exercise
During the Spring Festival of 2020, a very serious disease caused by COVID-19 spread around China, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
During the Spring Festival of 2020, a very serious disease caused by COVID-19 spread around China. If you are infected by COVID-19, you may have a sore throat, have a high fever and cough, or you may feel hard to breathe. It’s urgent for you to seek medical attention, and follow the directions of your local health official. How to keep ourselves safe from COVID19？ Here are some ways.
First, don’t go to places full of people, such as hospitals, railway stations and airports. Wear a mask if transport or movement is necessary. Second, wash our hands frequently and properly. It’s necessary to wash hands with soap and running water thoroughly for at least 15 seconds. Third, we’d better stay at home and take temperature every day. Finally, we can have a healthy diet and do more exercise. Regular exercise is one of the most important ways to keep infection at bay.
【解析】
【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于說(shuō)明文寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)緊接開(kāi)頭繼續(xù)寫(xiě)作，根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示介紹新型冠狀病毒肺炎的癥狀及預(yù)防方法。
2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文主要用第一人稱(chēng)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě)作。介紹預(yù)防方法分四點(diǎn)來(lái)寫(xiě)，敘述完整且條理清晰。
3.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：are infected by；have a sore throat；have a high fever；seek medical attention；keep ourselves safe from；full of；at least；stay at home; take temperature; have a healthy diet; do more exercise; keep infection at bay。
句型：it做形式主語(yǔ)的句子；if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句；and表示并列的句子。
【母題4】【來(lái)源】
假如你即將在學(xué)校英語(yǔ)興趣小組的活動(dòng)中發(fā)言，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。
要點(diǎn) 提示如下：
1.幾個(gè)月前，奶奶晚飯后去跳廣場(chǎng)舞。
2.從那時(shí)起，奶奶喜歡上了廣場(chǎng)舞。
3.現(xiàn)在，奶奶比以前更健康了，有很多朋友。
4.有些鄰居有意見(jiàn)，認(rèn)為音樂(lè)很吵，無(wú)法入睡。
5.你認(rèn)為人們可以跳廣場(chǎng)舞，但------
參考詞匯：
跳廣場(chǎng)舞 do square dancing （對(duì)某人）有意見(jiàn) have a complaint (against sb.)
寫(xiě)作要求：1.詞數(shù)：80-100 個(gè)
2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3.要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
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【答案】例文
Boys and girls
I'm very happy to speak here and I'd like to talk about my grandma.
A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What's more, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can't fall asleep at night.
In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn't make a lot of noise.
That's all. Thank you!
【解析】
【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文。內(nèi)容是根據(jù)下面提供的材料就“奶奶跳廣場(chǎng)舞”這一問(wèn)題寫(xiě)發(fā)言稿，在興趣活動(dòng)小組里發(fā)言。我們可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1. 先介紹奶奶喜歡廣場(chǎng)舞及跳舞后的變化。2. 然后寫(xiě)跳廣場(chǎng)舞缺點(diǎn)。3. 發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。4. 注意一些過(guò)渡詞 since then, however, in my opinion, but等。
2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用四段式；時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱(chēng)主要為第三人稱(chēng)。第一段介紹奶奶喜歡廣場(chǎng)舞及跳舞后的變化。第二段介紹跳廣場(chǎng)舞缺點(diǎn)。第三段發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。最后致謝。
3.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：be in love with；What’s more；have a complaint；a good way to do…；keep healthy；make a lot of noise。
句型：1. Now, she is much healthier than before. 現(xiàn)在，她比以前健康多了。
由比較連詞than，可知這是一個(gè)含有比較級(jí)的句子。much+形容詞比較級(jí)+than+比較的對(duì)象。
2. They think that the music is so loud that they can't fall asleep at night.
他們認(rèn)為音樂(lè)如此大聲，他們不能在晚上入睡。
本句主要運(yùn)用了so…that…句型。表示：如此……以至于……，引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句。
3. they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn't make a lot of noise.
他們應(yīng)該考慮別人的感受，他們不應(yīng)該制造太多的噪音。
and 連接兩個(gè)并列分句，分別敘述了應(yīng)該怎樣做，不應(yīng)該怎樣做。
【母題5】【來(lái)源】
假如你是李華，你有一個(gè)出生成長(zhǎng)在美國(guó)的小堂弟李小華，他在上次的電子郵件中請(qǐng)求你給他講一個(gè)中國(guó)民間故事以幫助他完成一項(xiàng)作業(yè)，故請(qǐng)你給李小華回復(fù)一封電子郵件,郵件內(nèi)容應(yīng)該包括以下內(nèi)容：
1、講述一個(gè)趣味中國(guó)民間故事:
2、告訴他你從這個(gè)故事中學(xué)到的東西;
3、鼓勵(lì)他學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)和傳播中華傳統(tǒng)文化。
要求:
1、語(yǔ)句通順、語(yǔ)法正確、句式多樣;
2、100 詞左右(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
Dear cousin Xiaohua,
How's it going with you in America? At your request, I will tell you an interesting Chinese folk story.
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Your sincere cousin,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear cousin Xiaohua,
How's it going with you in America? At your request, I will tell you an interesting Chinese folk story.
Thousands of years ago, there was a farmer in China. He did the farm work very hard every day. However, he gained little. One day, when he was on the farm, suddenly, a rabbit ran into a tree nearby, then died. He got a rabbit for supper without any work. So he decided to wait for more and more rabbits to come and run into the tree. Finally, he waited and waited and watched. His field lay waste, but he never got a second rabbit. This story tells us that no pains, no gains. One can’t own fortune all the time, if you want to get something, you must make your efforts.
Our great traditional culture makes a difference to the world, nowadays, our country is becoming stronger and stronger. You should learn Chinese well and spread Chinese traditional culture to the world. Do you think so? I’m looking forward to your e-mail.
Your sincere cousin,
Li Hua
【解析】1.題干解讀：這是一篇書(shū)信作文，要求回復(fù)一封電子郵件，根據(jù)題目要求內(nèi)容要包括三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，這樣寫(xiě)作才能要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)通順。另外，講述故事部分應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，其余部分要根據(jù)寫(xiě)作的內(nèi)容選用恰當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。
2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文包含了所有要點(diǎn)，時(shí)態(tài)使用正確，表達(dá)有條理，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，使用了一些固定句式。
3.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：thousands of years ago； on the farm；run into a tree；without any work；wait for；all the time；make a difference；look forward to。
句型：①賓語(yǔ)從句 This story tells us that no pains, no gains.
②條件狀語(yǔ)從句 One can’t own fortune all the time, if you want to get something, you must make your efforts.
