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（二）
假設(shè)Doris Smith是你的英語老師，她只有二十多歲，來自美國，中等身材，留著長長的金黃色卷發(fā)。知識(shí)淵博，對(duì)學(xué)生很有耐心，并且喜歡和學(xué)生交流，學(xué)生們都很喜歡上她的課。請(qǐng)你發(fā)揮想象，以Our foreign teacher為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（三）
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用約80個(gè)詞介紹偉大的發(fā)明家愛迪生：
1.愛提問，上小學(xué)經(jīng)常問一些奇怪的與學(xué)習(xí)無關(guān)的問題。
2.母親只好把他領(lǐng)回家，并親自教他。
3.他對(duì)科學(xué)很感興趣，做很多零活，如賣報(bào)掙錢，建了一個(gè)小實(shí)驗(yàn)室。
4.一生中有許多發(fā)明，使人們生活更方便，例如，電燈。
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（四）
中國自古就有尊師重教的優(yōu)良傳統(tǒng)，“程門立雪”就是一個(gè)典型例子。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文，講述這個(gè)故事，并簡單談?wù)勀愕目捶?。詞數(shù)60-80之間。短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯: respect 尊敬
楊時(shí)和游酢去拜見老師程頤 | → | 老師在睡覺 | → | 他們站在一旁等候 | → | 老師醒來，地上的雪已經(jīng)很厚了。 |
Long long ago, in China, there were two young men called Yang Shi and You Zuo. One day
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（五）
一天的上午，同學(xué)們?cè)趯W(xué)校大門集合去參觀農(nóng)場，農(nóng)場接待了他們，農(nóng)場領(lǐng)導(dǎo)帶領(lǐng)他們參觀了農(nóng)場，中午他們?cè)谵r(nóng)場吃了野餐，舉行了唱歌、跳舞甚至下棋等活動(dòng)，他們很開心，不知不覺到了告別農(nóng)場的時(shí)候。
要求：1. 詞數(shù)：80—100詞 2. 字跡工整，語言流暢，表達(dá)正確，邏輯清晰。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（六）
李莉生病住院了，病情嚴(yán)重，需要花很多錢。由于家庭困難不能支付醫(yī)療費(fèi)用，同學(xué)們?nèi)メt(yī)院看望她，后來有人提議給報(bào)社寫一封信，請(qǐng)求社會(huì)的幫助，后來……
請(qǐng)以此為話題寫一篇60詞左右的短文。
要求：語法正確，語句連貫，字跡工整。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
（七）
根據(jù)圖畫和所給單詞，將成語“鄭人買履”譯為英文小故事，詞數(shù)在60—80之間。
關(guān)鍵詞：measure測量; ruler尺子; advise勸告
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（八）
根據(jù)漢語提示完成一篇短文，詞數(shù)在60—80之間。
上周，比爾和媽媽一起去購物。他們買了圍巾，棉風(fēng)衣和皮鞋，后來又一起吃了日本壽司。比爾和媽媽度過了愉快的一天。
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（九）
請(qǐng)從下面描述心情的詞中選擇一個(gè)，以“I Feel These Days”為題，寫一篇小短文。
要求：1. 可選詞匯為：lonely, upset, happy, unhappy, angry, disappointed, excited, frightened
worried
2. 意思連貫、通順，詞數(shù)在60—80之間。
3. 適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意寫出為什么、怎么樣以及后來怎么樣等。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（十）
昨天晚上你看電影在回家途中目擊了一起搶劫案(robbery)。請(qǐng)就以下信息，以李華的名義寫一份給警方的書面材料，要求字?jǐn)?shù)90左右。材料的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。
案發(fā)時(shí)間 | 昨天晚上大約九點(diǎn) |
案發(fā)地點(diǎn) | 電影院附近的一條街道拐角處 |
作案人情況 | 兩個(gè)男子，一個(gè)戴著墨鏡的高個(gè)子，一個(gè)矮個(gè)子 |
受害人情況 | 一位年輕的女士，戴著一條金項(xiàng)鏈和一塊金手表 |
案發(fā)經(jīng)過 | 你正在街道上走著，突然聽到身后有人呼救。你看到兩個(gè)男子正搶劫(rob)一名女子。女子和和他們進(jìn)行了激烈的搏斗(have a fierce fight with...)。當(dāng)你趕到時(shí)，兩個(gè)劫匪(robber)已騎著他們自己的車逃跑。女子的金表被搶劫了，但幸運(yùn)的是女子沒有受傷。 |
Dear Sir / Madam,
I’m writing to report a robbery to you.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________I hope the information will help you catch the robbers.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
（十一）
李老師是對(duì)你影響最深的英語老師，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)向別人介紹她，詞數(shù)90左右。
要點(diǎn)：1.她三十多歲，在我們學(xué)校教書十多年了；
2.我們無論何時(shí)有煩惱，她都會(huì)給我們提供寶貴的建議；
3.似乎對(duì)我們比對(duì)她的家人更好；
4.她很勤勉，成功地贏得了學(xué)生的高度贊揚(yáng)；
5.去年，在她的幫助下，我的英語取得巨大的進(jìn)步；
6.我認(rèn)為她……
要求：1.文章須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順，意思連貫；
2.第6點(diǎn)請(qǐng)發(fā)揮1~2句。
Miss Li is the English teacher who ________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
參考范文：
一、
My first stay at home alone
My first stay at home alone was really memorable. When I was twelve, both of my parents were away on business. I had to stay at home all by myself for two days. My parents left early the first day, and I got up soon after they left. In the evening I turned on all the lights. And I kept the light in my bedroom on the whole night. In order not to get up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near my bed and set the alarms at 6.00, 6.10, and 6.15. To show my parents that I could take care of myself, I washed my own clothes the second day. I really felt proud of myself.
二、
Our foreign teacher
Our foreign teacher is Doris Smith. She is from America and just in her early twenties. She is of medium build with long curly blond hair. Although Miss Smith is young, she is very knowledgeable. As a teacher, she is kind and patient. She is fond of talking and playing with us. She is very active and her class is always filled with laughter. She often encourages us to study English in different ways. All of us like her very much.
三、
Thomas Edison is a great inventor. When he was a child, he always asked his teacher many strange questions which had nothing to do with his lessons. His teacher felt angry, so his mother had to take him home and taught him by herself. Edison was very interested in science, and he did lots of simple jobs, such as selling newspapers to earn money to build a small lab for himself. In his life, there were many inventions which have been making our life more convenient.
四、
Long long ago, in China, there were two young men called Yang Shi and You Zuo. One day they went to visit their teacher Cheng Yi. It was snowing heavily. Cheng Yi was sleeping then, so they waited beside him. They kept waiting until their teacher woke up. Then they found that the ground outside was already covered with thick snow!
We should learn from Yang Shi and You Zuo and respect our teachers. Good education makes a country strong!
五、
Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning, we met at the school gate and went there together The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a ten minutes' break, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes(笑話) or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. We had a good time, the time passed quickly. Before we knew it,we had to say goodbye to the workers.
六、
Li Li is my classmate. She is in hospital now because she is badly ill. We went to the hospital to see her one day. She lay in bed with a sad look. Her doctor told us that her illness was very serious and she had to stay in hospital for a long time. But her family is poor. She has no money to pay for the medicine. We decided to do something. We wrote a letter to a newspaper and asked people to help her. With the help of the doctors, Li Li is getting better and better. She said thanks to us and said that she would study harder to catch up with us.
七、
Once there was a man from Zheng State. One day, he wanted to buy a pair of shoes. So he took out a ruler and measured the size of his shoes. Then he went to the market. When he came into a shoe shop and wanted to buy shoes, he suddenly shouted, “Oh, I forgot to take my ruler. I have to go back to get my ruler. ” Then he ran away. The shopkeeper shouted, “Wait, please! You can try them on yourself. ” “No!” The man kept on running. When he got the ruler and went back to the shoe shop again, the shop was already closed.
八、
Bill’s mother likes going shopping a lot. Last Sunday she went shopping with Bill. First, they saw a beautiful scarf, so they bought it. Then they went to the Men’s Clothing Section. Bill’s mother chose a cotton windbreaker for Bill. The windbreaker made Bill look more handsome. Then they went to the Shoes and Hats Section. There they bought a pair of leather shoes for Bill’s father. After that, they went to eat Japanese sushi. They felt very tired, but they were very happy.
九、
I Feel Unhappy These Days
Last Sunday, Lin Tao and I went to the gym. When we did exercise, I fell down on the ground. I got hurt so badly that we couldn’t go on exercising. So we had to go back. Because I was hurt, I couldn’t walk, and we had to take a bus. When I got off the bus, I fell down once again. Oh, my God! In the end, I had to go to the hospital. The doctor told me that I must stay in bed for three days. My classmates came to visit me, and they brought me some flowers. They also helped me with my study. Their coming pleased me, and now I am feeling much better.
十、
Dear Sir / Madam,
I’m writing to report a robbery to you. It was at 9 p.m. Last night. The scene of the robbery was at the corner of a street near the cinema.
When the robbery happened, I was walking in the street. Suddenly I heard someone calling for help behind. I turned around and found two men were robbing a young woman. The woman put up a fierce fight with them. I ran up to them quickly, but when I got there, the robbers had been away on their own bikes, the woman’s gold watch had been robbed of, and she was lying on the ground. Luckily, she was not hurt.
The suspect were two men. One was tall with sunglasses, and the other was. I hope the information will help you catch the robbers.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
十一、
Miss Li is the English teacher who has influenced me most. She is in her thirties. She has taught English in our school for more than / over ten years. Whenever we have trouble / worries, she will always offer us some valuable suggestions. Miss Li seems to be kinder to us than to her own family. She is hard-working and has won high praise from her students successfully / has succeeded in winning high praise from her students. Last year, I made great progress in my English with her help. I think she has a heart full of love /she is the best teacher that I have ever met. I want to be a teacher like her in the future./…
書面表達(dá)專題 記敘文
（一）
假如你的父母出差不在家，你必須一個(gè)人在家呆兩天。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，以My first stay at home alone為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。
提示詞： memorable 難忘的；on business 出差；feel proud of 為……感到自豪__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（二）
假設(shè)Doris Smith是你的英語老師，她只有二十多歲，來自美國，中等身材，留著長長的金黃色卷發(fā)。知識(shí)淵博，對(duì)學(xué)生很有耐心，并且喜歡和學(xué)生交流，學(xué)生們都很喜歡上她的課。請(qǐng)你發(fā)揮想象，以Our foreign teacher為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（三）
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用約80個(gè)詞介紹偉大的發(fā)明家愛迪生：
1.愛提問，上小學(xué)經(jīng)常問一些奇怪的與學(xué)習(xí)無關(guān)的問題。
2.母親只好把他領(lǐng)回家，并親自教他。
3.他對(duì)科學(xué)很感興趣，做很多零活，如賣報(bào)掙錢，建了一個(gè)小實(shí)驗(yàn)室。
4.一生中有許多發(fā)明，使人們生活更方便，例如，電燈。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（四）
中國自古就有尊師重教的優(yōu)良傳統(tǒng)，“程門立雪”就是一個(gè)典型例子。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文，講述這個(gè)故事，并簡單談?wù)勀愕目捶?。詞數(shù)60-80之間。短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯: respect 尊敬
楊時(shí)和游酢去拜見老師程頤 | → | 老師在睡覺 | → | 他們站在一旁等候 | → | 老師醒來，地上的雪已經(jīng)很厚了。 |
Long long ago, in China, there were two young men called Yang Shi and You Zuo. One day
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（五）
一天的上午，同學(xué)們?cè)趯W(xué)校大門集合去參觀農(nóng)場，農(nóng)場接待了他們，農(nóng)場領(lǐng)導(dǎo)帶領(lǐng)他們參觀了農(nóng)場，中午他們?cè)谵r(nóng)場吃了野餐，舉行了唱歌、跳舞甚至下棋等活動(dòng)，他們很開心，不知不覺到了告別農(nóng)場的時(shí)候。
要求：1. 詞數(shù)：80—100詞 2. 字跡工整，語言流暢，表達(dá)正確，邏輯清晰。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（六）
李莉生病住院了，病情嚴(yán)重，需要花很多錢。由于家庭困難不能支付醫(yī)療費(fèi)用，同學(xué)們?nèi)メt(yī)院看望她，后來有人提議給報(bào)社寫一封信，請(qǐng)求社會(huì)的幫助，后來……
請(qǐng)以此為話題寫一篇60詞左右的短文。
要求：語法正確，語句連貫，字跡工整。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
（七）
根據(jù)圖畫和所給單詞，將成語“鄭人買履”譯為英文小故事，詞數(shù)在60—80之間。
關(guān)鍵詞：measure測量; ruler尺子; advise勸告
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（八）
根據(jù)漢語提示完成一篇短文，詞數(shù)在60—80之間。
上周，比爾和媽媽一起去購物。他們買了圍巾，棉風(fēng)衣和皮鞋，后來又一起吃了日本壽司。比爾和媽媽度過了愉快的一天。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（九）
請(qǐng)從下面描述心情的詞中選擇一個(gè)，以“I Feel These Days”為題，寫一篇小短文。
要求：1. 可選詞匯為：lonely, upset, happy, unhappy, angry, disappointed, excited, frightened
worried
2. 意思連貫、通順，詞數(shù)在60—80之間。
3. 適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意寫出為什么、怎么樣以及后來怎么樣等。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（十）
昨天晚上你看電影在回家途中目擊了一起搶劫案(robbery)。請(qǐng)就以下信息，以李華的名義寫一份給警方的書面材料，要求字?jǐn)?shù)90左右。材料的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。
案發(fā)時(shí)間 | 昨天晚上大約九點(diǎn) |
案發(fā)地點(diǎn) | 電影院附近的一條街道拐角處 |
作案人情況 | 兩個(gè)男子，一個(gè)戴著墨鏡的高個(gè)子，一個(gè)矮個(gè)子 |
受害人情況 | 一位年輕的女士，戴著一條金項(xiàng)鏈和一塊金手表 |
案發(fā)經(jīng)過 | 你正在街道上走著，突然聽到身后有人呼救。你看到兩個(gè)男子正搶劫(rob)一名女子。女子和和他們進(jìn)行了激烈的搏斗(have a fierce fight with...)。當(dāng)你趕到時(shí)，兩個(gè)劫匪(robber)已騎著他們自己的車逃跑。女子的金表被搶劫了，但幸運(yùn)的是女子沒有受傷。 |
Dear Sir / Madam,
I’m writing to report a robbery to you.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________I hope the information will help you catch the robbers.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
（十一）
李老師是對(duì)你影響最深的英語老師，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)向別人介紹她，詞數(shù)90左右。
要點(diǎn)：1.她三十多歲，在我們學(xué)校教書十多年了；
2.我們無論何時(shí)有煩惱，她都會(huì)給我們提供寶貴的建議；
3.似乎對(duì)我們比對(duì)她的家人更好；
4.她很勤勉，成功地贏得了學(xué)生的高度贊揚(yáng)；
5.去年，在她的幫助下，我的英語取得巨大的進(jìn)步；
6.我認(rèn)為她……
要求：1.文章須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順，意思連貫；
2.第6點(diǎn)請(qǐng)發(fā)揮1~2句。
Miss Li is the English teacher who ________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
參考范文：
一、
My first stay at home alone
My first stay at home alone was really memorable. When I was twelve, both of my parents were away on business. I had to stay at home all by myself for two days. My parents left early the first day, and I got up soon after they left. In the evening I turned on all the lights. And I kept the light in my bedroom on the whole night. In order not to get up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near my bed and set the alarms at 6.00, 6.10, and 6.15. To show my parents that I could take care of myself, I washed my own clothes the second day. I really felt proud of myself.
二、
Our foreign teacher
Our foreign teacher is Doris Smith. She is from America and just in her early twenties. She is of medium build with long curly blond hair. Although Miss Smith is young, she is very knowledgeable. As a teacher, she is kind and patient. She is fond of talking and playing with us. She is very active and her class is always filled with laughter. She often encourages us to study English in different ways. All of us like her very much.
三、
Thomas Edison is a great inventor. When he was a child, he always asked his teacher many strange questions which had nothing to do with his lessons. His teacher felt angry, so his mother had to take him home and taught him by herself. Edison was very interested in science, and he did lots of simple jobs, such as selling newspapers to earn money to build a small lab for himself. In his life, there were many inventions which have been making our life more convenient.
四、
Long long ago, in China, there were two young men called Yang Shi and You Zuo. One day they went to visit their teacher Cheng Yi. It was snowing heavily. Cheng Yi was sleeping then, so they waited beside him. They kept waiting until their teacher woke up. Then they found that the ground outside was already covered with thick snow!
We should learn from Yang Shi and You Zuo and respect our teachers. Good education makes a country strong!
五、
Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning, we met at the school gate and went there together The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a ten minutes' break, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes(笑話) or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. We had a good time, the time passed quickly. Before we knew it,we had to say goodbye to the workers.
六、
Li Li is my classmate. She is in hospital now because she is badly ill. We went to the hospital to see her one day. She lay in bed with a sad look. Her doctor told us that her illness was very serious and she had to stay in hospital for a long time. But her family is poor. She has no money to pay for the medicine. We decided to do something. We wrote a letter to a newspaper and asked people to help her. With the help of the doctors, Li Li is getting better and better. She said thanks to us and said that she would study harder to catch up with us.
七、
Once there was a man from Zheng State. One day, he wanted to buy a pair of shoes. So he took out a ruler and measured the size of his shoes. Then he went to the market. When he came into a shoe shop and wanted to buy shoes, he suddenly shouted, “Oh, I forgot to take my ruler. I have to go back to get my ruler. ” Then he ran away. The shopkeeper shouted, “Wait, please! You can try them on yourself. ” “No!” The man kept on running. When he got the ruler and went back to the shoe shop again, the shop was already closed.
八、
Bill’s mother likes going shopping a lot. Last Sunday she went shopping with Bill. First, they saw a beautiful scarf, so they bought it. Then they went to the Men’s Clothing Section. Bill’s mother chose a cotton windbreaker for Bill. The windbreaker made Bill look more handsome. Then they went to the Shoes and Hats Section. There they bought a pair of leather shoes for Bill’s father. After that, they went to eat Japanese sushi. They felt very tired, but they were very happy.
九、
I Feel Unhappy These Days
Last Sunday, Lin Tao and I went to the gym. When we did exercise, I fell down on the ground. I got hurt so badly that we couldn’t go on exercising. So we had to go back. Because I was hurt, I couldn’t walk, and we had to take a bus. When I got off the bus, I fell down once again. Oh, my God! In the end, I had to go to the hospital. The doctor told me that I must stay in bed for three days. My classmates came to visit me, and they brought me some flowers. They also helped me with my study. Their coming pleased me, and now I am feeling much better.
十、
Dear Sir / Madam,
I’m writing to report a robbery to you. It was at 9 p.m. Last night. The scene of the robbery was at the corner of a street near the cinema.
When the robbery happened, I was walking in the street. Suddenly I heard someone calling for help behind. I turned around and found two men were robbing a young woman. The woman put up a fierce fight with them. I ran up to them quickly, but when I got there, the robbers had been away on their own bikes, the woman’s gold watch had been robbed of, and she was lying on the ground. Luckily, she was not hurt.
The suspect were two men. One was tall with sunglasses, and the other was. I hope the information will help you catch the robbers.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
十一、
Miss Li is the English teacher who has influenced me most. She is in her thirties. She has taught English in our school for more than / over ten years. Whenever we have trouble / worries, she will always offer us some valuable suggestions. Miss Li seems to be kinder to us than to her own family. She is hard-working and has won high praise from her students successfully / has succeeded in winning high praise from her students. Last year, I made great progress in my English with her help. I think she has a heart full of love /she is the best teacher that I have ever met. I want to be a teacher like her in the future./…
