中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤分析(九) 句型結(jié)構(gòu)、固定搭配錯(cuò)誤

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        馬克思生在德國(guó),他非常擅長(zhǎng)學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)言。他不僅能自如地運(yùn)用英語(yǔ),而且只用了六個(gè)月時(shí)間就掌握了足夠的俄文,能閱讀俄文版的報(bào)刊和雜志。不過(guò),他在介紹英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)時(shí),也曾訴苦說(shuō):“I am not too sure about two things, the grammar and some of the idioms.”。英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中,句型結(jié)構(gòu)和固定搭配的確是初學(xué)者的“攔路虎”。 易優(yōu)語(yǔ)文題庫(kù),同步教材，真題演練，提分就是快 https://cs.euzW.net

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        眾所周知吸煙有害健康。請(qǐng)以“Smoking is harmful to health”為題寫(xiě)一篇至少100詞的英語(yǔ)短文,來(lái)介紹一下吸煙的危害,以喚起人們戒煙。 蘇州吳中區(qū)小學(xué)生作文培訓(xùn)，就來(lái)易優(yōu)悅讀

習(xí)作實(shí)況
                                     Smoking is harmful to health
        As (1) is known to all that smoking is bad for health. In China there have (2) millions of smokers. Each year millions of people die from smoking.
        Smoking makes many people ill. Those who often smoke have black teeth. Lots of smokers cough day and night. Lung cancer is one of the most serious illnesses that are caused by smoking. Many people suffer from this terrible disease and lose their lives.

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        Smoking does harm not only to smokers themselves, but also to non-smokers, especially women and children. They may have their health harm (3) because of the smoke caused by cigarettes. 蘇州小學(xué)生語(yǔ)文培訓(xùn)，（TEl:181-1815-9898）蘇州易優(yōu)閱讀寫(xiě)作同步提升

Everyone agrees that smoking is not good for health, but it is not easy for smokers to giving up smoking (4). I hope all the smokers will stop smoking for the good of their own health and also for the people around them. Let’s enjoying (5) clean and fresh air together. 蘇州易優(yōu)語(yǔ)文培訓(xùn)，中小學(xué)閱讀寫(xiě)作同步提升 http://www.zequeka.cn/miniform.html

精講點(diǎn)撥
(1)將As改為It。“It is known to all that+從句”是一個(gè)固定結(jié)構(gòu)。意思是“眾所周知……”。 蘇州易優(yōu)語(yǔ)文培訓(xùn)，中小學(xué)閱讀寫(xiě)作同步提升 http://www.zequeka.cn/miniform.html

(2)句型there is/are表示“某地有某物”，該句型強(qiáng)調(diào)“存在”，而have/has常用來(lái)表達(dá)“某人有某物”，強(qiáng)調(diào)“所有”，其主語(yǔ)通常是人。因此，將have改為are。
(3)將harm改為harmed?！癶ave sth. done”是一個(gè)固定結(jié)構(gòu),意思是“使 / 讓某物遭受……”。本句的意思是“吸煙產(chǎn)生的毒氣很可能使他們(婦女、兒童)的健康遭受到侵害”,因?yàn)閔ealth被smoke損害,因此,要用過(guò)去分詞harmed,以表示被動(dòng)的含義。
(4)英語(yǔ)中表達(dá)“某人做某事很不容易”常用句型“It is not easy for sb. to do sth.”。 應(yīng)將giving up smoking改為give up smoking。

精彩例文
                               Smoking is harmful to health
         It is known to all that smoking is bad for health. In China there are millions of smokers. Each year millions of people die from smoking.
        Smoking makes many people ill. Those who often smoke have black teeth. Lots of smokers cough day and night. Lung cancer is one of the most serious illnesses that are caused by smoking. Many people suffer from this terrible disease and lose their lives.
        Smoking does harm not only to smokers themselves, but also to non-smokers, especially women and children. They may have their health harmed because of the smoke caused by cigarettes.
        Everyone agrees that smoking is not good for health, but it is not easy for smokers to give up smoking. I hope all the smokers will stop smoking for the good of their own health and also for the people around them. Let’s enjoy clean and fresh air together.