中考英語作文寫作指導(dǎo)：如何寫英語演講稿
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演講稿是面向聽眾、在正式的公開演講中使用的稿子。中考英語作文中一般要求寫簡(jiǎn)單的演講稿，在寫作中需要注意如下幾點(diǎn):
第一，演講稿的結(jié)構(gòu)。演講稿包括稱呼、開頭、正文、結(jié)尾幾部分。稱呼語通常有“Dear ..”.“Good morning, everyone”， 或"Hello, ladies and gentlemen"等?？忌鷳?yīng)根據(jù)給定情境選擇合適的稱呼語。開頭部分點(diǎn)明演講主題，吸引聽眾。正文部分圍繞主題做闡述，使聽眾了解演講。結(jié)尾部分包括概括演講內(nèi)容或提出呼吁，以及結(jié)束語。結(jié)束語通常有“That's all, thank you"，或“Wish you a good time"等。
第二，演講稿的語言。由于演講是一一種口頭交際，因此所用語言盡量簡(jiǎn)短、直白，少用書面語或長(zhǎng)難句。為了加強(qiáng)演講時(shí)的語氣，可適當(dāng)使用排比句。
第三，演講稿的內(nèi)容。首先要充分讀題，了解假設(shè)的情境、演講者的身份和演講的對(duì)象。在此基礎(chǔ)上，有針對(duì)性地構(gòu)架演講內(nèi)容。另外，演講是為了向聽眾做介紹或說服聽眾，因此發(fā)言內(nèi)容要條理清晰，舉例說明要有說服力，表達(dá)上除了以理服人外，還要注意以情動(dòng)人。
相關(guān)話題寫作樣例與常用句式:
Hello, ladies and gentlemen! (開場(chǎng)稱呼)
表明演講目的/亮明觀點(diǎn):
It's my great honor to deliver a speech here. Today 'd like to say something about ..在此演講我深感榮幸。今天我想談一.談.....
Today, I’d love to share with you something about...今天我非常樂意與你們分享關(guān)于...的內(nèi)容。
It's nice to speak about ... here.在這里談- .談....很有益。
We should keep ... in mind.我們要牢記.....
具體介紹/證明觀點(diǎn)/詳述建議
結(jié)束語:
I am sure ..我確信....
Let's make joint efforts to ...讓我們共同努力去......
Let's try our best to ...讓我們盡力去....
Don't forget to .. in your life.別忘了在日常生活中....
Do you agree with me?你們同意我的觀點(diǎn)嗎?
具體實(shí)踐案例寫作指導(dǎo)
題目
學(xué)校正在提倡“光盤行動(dòng)”，號(hào)召同學(xué)們節(jié)約糧食、抵制浪費(fèi)。 假設(shè)學(xué)校請(qǐng)你在升旗儀式上做-次相關(guān)主題發(fā)言，請(qǐng)寫-篇不少于60個(gè)詞的主題發(fā)言稿，包括以下要點(diǎn):
1.校園中存在浪費(fèi)糧食的現(xiàn)象。
2.作為一名 中學(xué)生如何從我做起，在日常生活中踐行節(jié)約，抵制浪費(fèi)糧食。
這篇演講稿的主題是食物浪費(fèi)，寫作內(nèi)容應(yīng)當(dāng)緊扣要點(diǎn)，先描寫至少兩個(gè)校園中的食物浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象，再針對(duì)這些現(xiàn)象，列舉至少兩條抵制浪費(fèi)食物的具體建議。為了讓聽眾清楚地了解發(fā)言內(nèi)容，講稿的條理要清晰，可使用一些表示順序的連接詞。同時(shí)還要注意演講稿的特點(diǎn)，語言要簡(jiǎn)短有力，在結(jié)尾呼吁號(hào)召，動(dòng)員大家行動(dòng)起來，抵制浪費(fèi)。
段落結(jié)構(gòu)
這篇演講稿可以分為四段:
第一段(開頭):開場(chǎng)稱呼，并介紹演講主題一 節(jié)約糧食、抵制浪費(fèi)。
第二段(說明現(xiàn)象):舉2-3個(gè)具體例子，說明校園中存在的糧食浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象，譬如剩飯剩菜多，點(diǎn)的食物超過能吃下的量等。
第三段(提出建議):針對(duì)浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象，列舉23條措施，具體說明同學(xué)們應(yīng)該如何抵制浪費(fèi)食物。
第四段(號(hào)召、 結(jié)尾):號(hào)召同學(xué)們行動(dòng)起來，從現(xiàn)在做起節(jié)約糧食。
核心詞匯
the 'Clean Plate Campaign'光盤行動(dòng)
raise awareness of saving food提高節(jié)約糧食的意識(shí)
build an economized society建設(shè)節(jié)約型社會(huì)
call on sb. to do sth.呼吁某人做某事
do one's parts to .盡某人所能做....
It's time for us to ...是時(shí)候我們要......
It's important for us to ..做......對(duì)我們來說很重要
Let's start with the things around us!讓我們從身邊小事做起
習(xí)作
Good morning, teachers and students! The topic of my speech today is 'saving food'.In our school, food waste can be seen everywhere. Some students throw away much food after meals. Some students only eat what they like and leave what they don't like on the table. Some students waste food at lunch because they eat many snacks.
The phenomenon must be changed in no time. We shouldn't waste food any longer.When we have lunch in the canteen, we had better eat up all the food in our plates. If you don't feel hungry at lunch time, you can take less food.
I hope we can try our best to save food in our school! Thanks for listening.
點(diǎn)評(píng)
這篇演講稿內(nèi)容較完整，符合題干要求，語言較流暢，句式較豐富。但在內(nèi)容上有幾點(diǎn)問題:第一，講稿中缺少背景信息， 即學(xué)校正在開展“光盤行動(dòng)“
加上該要點(diǎn)。第二，第二段現(xiàn)象闡述中的第三點(diǎn)在解釋浪費(fèi)食物的原因，，應(yīng)在第二段開頭
而非說明浪費(fèi)的現(xiàn)
象。建議可以把這一點(diǎn)稍作修改， 變?yōu)槿绾尾焕速M(fèi)食物的建議，歸人第三段，在請(qǐng)賣的現(xiàn)還有兩點(diǎn)可以改進(jìn):首先，演講的語言力度需要加強(qiáng)，比如結(jié)尾的號(hào)召采用Lets.，等句式可加強(qiáng)號(hào)召的力度。其次， 在建議措施中可增加連接詞，如firstly, in addition等，使各條要點(diǎn)突出。
范文
Good morning, dear teachers and students! Today, I'd love to share with you something about saving food.
As we all know, the 'Clean Plate Campaign' is being held in our school. Students are called on to save food. However, wasting food is still a serious problem on our campus. We saw students order much food but eat only a little. We found bread which was not eaten up in trash bins.
I's time for us to raise students' awareness of saving food. I think we can start with the things around us. First, we should take food in moderation instead of asking for more than what we can eat in the canteen. Second, we'd better eat up what we order. Last, if you see someone throw food away after meals, tell him the importance of saving food and persuade him not to do so next time.
My fellow schoolmates, let's do what we can to save food. Let's do it from now on!Thank you! !
點(diǎn)評(píng)
這篇演講稿內(nèi)容豐富、邏輯連貫、語言有力，符合演講的要求，是- -篇成功的演講稿。開篇用一句話“I'd love to share with you something about saving food"點(diǎn)明了演講主題，簡(jiǎn)短而清晰。第二段先介紹了演講的背景基于學(xué)校的“光盤行動(dòng)”，要求大家不浪費(fèi)食物。"However” 的一句轉(zhuǎn)折，自然地引出學(xué)校還存在的浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象?！癢e saw ...”,”We found ..”.兩句句式相仿的句子，具體且有力地指出了浪費(fèi)食物的問題。第三段針對(duì)現(xiàn)象告訴同學(xué)們?cè)撛趺醋?，三個(gè)建議層層遞進(jìn)，并用序數(shù)詞使層次清晰。結(jié)尾呼吁大家行動(dòng)起來，節(jié)約食物，明確有力。
相關(guān)話題滿分作文解析
（1）
“人生沒有彩排，生命沒有重來”，你平安、健康、快樂地成長(zhǎng)是父母最大的心愿。今年6月下旬學(xué)校將舉辦一場(chǎng)以“Keep away from the danger!” 為主題的英文演講比賽。假如你是王雷同學(xué)，大家推選你參加這次比賽。請(qǐng)跟進(jìn)以下思維導(dǎo)圖提示，寫一篇英文演講稿。
寫作提示：
寫作要求：
1. 不得使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名；
2. 所有的提示詞都須用上，包含以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫：
3. 字跡工整，語言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清楚：
4. 詞數(shù)100詞左右。(演講稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。)
Keep away from the danger!
Hello! Everyone, I’m Wang Lei. The danger is around us. So we must learn how to keep away from the danger, First, we mustn’t go swimming without our parents’ or teachers’ permission.
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In a word, we must try our best to keep away from the danger!
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
【寫作思路】
這篇作文要求我們以Keep away from the danger為題，寫一篇演講稿。審題可知，題目中利用思維導(dǎo)圖的形式，列舉了這篇文章中應(yīng)該包括的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)。觀察這個(gè)思維導(dǎo)圖可知，短文應(yīng)該從游泳、交通、交友、飲食、學(xué)校安全以及毒品等六個(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述，每個(gè)方面都給出了一些提示詞，學(xué)生們可以利用這些提示詞來組織語言，用完整的句子表達(dá)出來。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、第一人稱為主來敘述。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先題目中給出的所有提示詞以及要點(diǎn)都應(yīng)包括在內(nèi)，不要有所遺漏?？梢愿鶕?jù)表達(dá)需要進(jìn)行拓展，使文章內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)。但應(yīng)注意拓展內(nèi)容應(yīng)與文章主題緊密相連，不要寫沒有用的東西。其次應(yīng)注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不要根據(jù)漢語思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句式的正確結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，選擇適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~、短語和句型。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，提升文章檔次。同時(shí)語句之間應(yīng)使用一些銜接成分，注意敘述的層次性，條理清楚，行為連貫。
【參考范文】
Keep away from the danger!
Hello! Everyone, I’m Wang Lei. The danger is around us. So we must learn how to keep away from the danger. First, we mustn’t go swimming without our parents’ or teachers’ permission. When we go swimming, we must wear life jackets. Second, we must obey the traffic rules. We should walk on the pavement. When we cross the street, we mustn’t look at the mobile phones. Third, we may have some friends on line, but we mustn’t believe whatever they say. Besides, don’t meet online friends alone. Fourth, we must wash our hands before having meals. Don’t eat food that goes bad because it is bad for our health. Fifth, when we are in school, we can’t run on the hallways. You should get on well with your classmates and don’t fight with them. If someone threatens you, call for help. Last but not the least, never try drugs. If you see someone selling drugs, call 110 at once.
In a word, we must try our best to keep away from the danger!
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，給我們介紹了生活中應(yīng)如何遠(yuǎn)離危險(xiǎn)，保證我們的安全。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，提示詞都使用上了。文章中從六個(gè)方面進(jìn)行了具體的介紹，每個(gè)方面前都有表示順序的詞First, Second… Last but not least等，使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)非常清晰，敘述有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。文章中使用了簡(jiǎn)單句、賓語從句、狀語從句、定語從句、祈使句等結(jié)構(gòu)，句式多變，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、清楚。文章中使用了一些較好的短語和句型，如When we cross the street, we mustn't look at the mobile phones、Third, we may have some friends on line, but we mustn't believe whatever they say、Fourth, we must wash our hands before having meals.、You should get on well with your classmates and don't fight with them.、If someone threatens you, call for help.、Last but not the least, never try drugs. If you see someone selling drugs, call 110 at once.等。
（2）
每個(gè)人的生命只有一次，一定要珍愛自己的生命。該怎樣安全自救？請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，以How to Protect Ourselves為標(biāo)題寫一篇發(fā)言稿。
安全對(duì)每個(gè)人都很重要
交通：外出時(shí)遵守交通規(guī)則
食品：吃健康食物，少吃垃圾食品
活動(dòng)：體育鍛煉時(shí)，不要弄傷自己
不私自下河游泳
自救是重要的技能之一
交友需謹(jǐn)慎
遠(yuǎn)離危險(xiǎn)之人
遇到危險(xiǎn)保持冷靜
然后要及時(shí)報(bào)警或向老師、家長(zhǎng)求助
盡可能避免受傷害
保證自己的安全
要求：1. 語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫、通順。
2. 短文應(yīng)包括所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯。
3. 詞數(shù)80左右。文章開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。
Dear friends,
Everyone has only one life, we should treasure our lives. But how can we protect ourselves?
Here are some suggestions. _____________________________________________________________________
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In a word, we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives.
That’s all. Thank you!
【寫作思路】
本文是根據(jù)材料提示寫作，所以分析所給材料之后，首先要在頭腦中確定文章的整體結(jié)構(gòu)，然后逐步細(xì)化．就像蓋房子一樣，先有整體框架，然后是房間，最后是室內(nèi)裝修．
【參考范文】
Dear friends，
Everyone has only one life， we should treasure our lives． But how can we protect ourselves？
Here are some suggestions．
On the one hand， we should realize the importance of safety and know what to do． First，when we go out， we must follow traffic rules． If we walk，we must use sidewalks and mustn't run a red light；If we ride bikes，we must ride along the right side and shouldn't carry others；Second， we should develop a healthy eating habits． Eat regular meals every day and try not to eat junk food or eat less．When food smells bad， don't eat it．Third，when we play sports or games， be careful not to hurt ourselves．Fourth，we mustn't swim in rivers without our parents or other adults around．
On the other hand， we should learn to protect ousrselves， which is one of the most important living skills． We must be careful when making friends especially online．Some person online are not honest．They are dangerous， so we must keep away from them． If we happen to have trouble， we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents， teachers or police for help so that we can protect ourselvs from danger or being hurt．
In a word， we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives．
That's all． Thank you !
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
高分句型一： we should realize the importance of safety and know what to do. 我們應(yīng)該意識(shí)到安全的重要性，并且知道如何去做。短語the importance of，what to do結(jié)構(gòu)；
高分句型二：when we go out，we must follow traffic rules. 當(dāng)我們外出時(shí)，必須遵守交通規(guī)則。狀語從句，情態(tài)動(dòng)詞；
高分句型三：we should learn to protect ourselves，which is one of the most important living skills．我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)保護(hù)自己，這是最重要的生存能力之一。定語從句；
高分句型四：we must keep away from them．我們必須遠(yuǎn)離他們。keep away from 短語
高分句型五： we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents，teachers or police for help so that we can protect ourselves from danger or being hurt．
我們應(yīng)該保持冷靜，并且記住及時(shí)向家長(zhǎng)，老師或警察求助。以便于保護(hù)自己遠(yuǎn)離危險(xiǎn)，避免受傷害。remember to do結(jié)構(gòu)，ask...for help，in time短語；so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句，protect.. from...短語。
（3）
假設(shè)你叫李文，是無錫陽光中學(xué)(Wuxi Sunshine Middle School)的一名學(xué)生。今天暑期，你將代表你校赴瑞士參加“模擬聯(lián)合國(guó)”會(huì)議并發(fā)言，此次會(huì)議的主題是A Green World。你草擬了發(fā)言流程圖，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖寫一篇英文發(fā)言稿。
注意事項(xiàng)：
1. 發(fā)言稿須根據(jù)流程圖自擬，要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；
2. 流程圖中包括部分非限定性內(nèi)容，僅供參考；
3. 詞數(shù)在 90 個(gè)左右，發(fā)言稿的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。
4. 發(fā)言稿中不得使用真實(shí)的個(gè)人及學(xué)校信息。
5. 發(fā)言稿必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。
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【寫作思路】
這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)李文的發(fā)言流程圖寫一篇英文發(fā)言稿。主題是A Green World。因?yàn)榻裉焓钇?，你將代表你校赴瑞士參加“模擬聯(lián)合國(guó)”會(huì)議并發(fā)言，主要從介紹自己、中國(guó)為“綠色世界”已經(jīng)做的和“我”是怎樣做得。這三個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般將來時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。
【參考范文】
Ladies and gentlemen!
My name is Li Wen. I’m a student of Wuxi Sunshine Middle School. This year, I am fifteen years old. China has made its own efforts for the green world. Many factories have met the discharge standards. We have made use of many new energy sources. For example: wind, solar and hydroelectric power. What should we do as middle school students? First of all, we should turn off the lights in time. Secondly, when we take a shower, we should save water. Third, when we go shopping, we should use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. If so, we have made our due efforts for environmental protection.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
【高分句型一】
China has made its own efforts for the green world. 中國(guó)為綠色世界做出了自己的努力。
Many factories have met the discharge standards. 許多工廠的排污都達(dá)到了排放標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。
We have made use of many new energy sources. 我們利用了許多新能源。
這三句話，簡(jiǎn)短而有力量，體現(xiàn)了作者的語言功底深厚。
【高分句型二】
Third, when we go shopping, we should use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. 第三，我們?nèi)ベ徫飼r(shí)，應(yīng)該用布袋代替塑料袋。句子when we go shopping,是由when 引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句。
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假如你是李華，英國(guó)某中學(xué)與你所在的學(xué)校是姐妹學(xué)校。該校校長(zhǎng)讀到以上這篇短文后，對(duì)廣東文化產(chǎn)生興趣，準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生來你的校進(jìn)行關(guān)于廣東傳統(tǒng)文化的研學(xué)交流。請(qǐng)你寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在歡迎晚會(huì)上向他們介紹研學(xué)活動(dòng)的相關(guān)安排。
內(nèi)容包括：
1. 推薦晚會(huì)上的兩種廣東傳統(tǒng)食物。
2. 介紹兩項(xiàng)廣東傳統(tǒng)文化活動(dòng)的安排。(包括活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和內(nèi)容)
參考活動(dòng)：欣賞粵劇(Cantonese opera)，體驗(yàn)功夫(kung fu)，參加廣東歷史講座等。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。
2. 語句連貫，詞數(shù)80左右。作文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，也不必抄寫在答題卡上。
Good evening, everyone. I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students Union. I am very pleased to welcome you to the party. _______________________________________________________________________________________
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I hope you'll enjoy your stay here!
【寫作思路】
這是一篇要求向來你校進(jìn)行關(guān)于廣東傳統(tǒng)文化的研學(xué)交流的學(xué)生介紹研學(xué)活動(dòng)的相關(guān)安排。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般將來時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。
【參考范文】
Good evening, everyone. I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students Union. I am very pleased to welcome you to the party. In Guangdong, you can enjoy many traditional foods. Such as shrimp dumplings, beef or fish balls, chicken feet and so on. Especially fish balls and chicken feet are really very delicious.I think you will love them. Tomorrow, in the morning, we'll go to the biggest theatre in Guangzhou. You are going to enjoy Cantonese opera there. We will go to Zhongshan Park in the afternoon. You can experience Chinese Kung fu there. It is amazing. We will attend a lecture on history of Guangdong in the evening.
I hope you' ll enjoy your stay here!
《中考英語作文寫作指導(dǎo)：如何寫英語演講稿》添加時(shí)間：2025-01-10；更新時(shí)間：2025-03-15
