中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤分析(三) 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)

【要點(diǎn)領(lǐng)悟】
        同學(xué)們?cè)趯?xiě)作時(shí),往往把重點(diǎn)放在文章的構(gòu)思和句子結(jié)構(gòu)上,有時(shí)忽略了名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)。在中考作文中,如果名詞的數(shù)使用混亂,也會(huì)導(dǎo)致較多的失分。 <a hRef=http://www.zequeka.cn/miNiform.html>蘇州作文培訓(xùn)</a>
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        假如你是吳強(qiáng),去年春天和幾位同學(xué)到東浦島野餐,以“The happiest day”為題寫(xiě)一篇80-100詞的作文。要求條理清晰、意思連貫、語(yǔ)句通順、標(biāo)點(diǎn)規(guī)范。
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                                  The happiest day <a href=http://www.zequeka.cn/miniform.html>蘇州語(yǔ)文作文閱讀培訓(xùn)</a>
       Last spring my classmate (1) and I went to Dongpu Island to have a picnic. It was March 2. The weather was fine and there was hardly a cloud in the sky. We started early that morning. We all carried something nice to eat and drink.
      We sang happily on our ways (2) there. After about one and a half hour (3), we got to the island. The water in the lake was nice and clean and we could see flowers and grasses (4) all around us. How beautiful it was! After about twenty minute’s (5) rest, we divided ourselves into four groups and cooked our lunch. Most of us did the cooking for the first time. After a while, everything was ready. We put all the food on a big piece of paper. There was meat, fish, fruit and vegetable (6). How delicious they were! We enjoyed our lunch and there was a big smile on everyone’s faces (7). <a href=http://www.zequeka.cn/miniform.html>提分快的蘇州初中作文閱讀培訓(xùn)</a>

【精講點(diǎn)撥】
(1)classmate在本句中看不出錯(cuò)誤來(lái),如果結(jié)合第二段的... four groups就可發(fā)現(xiàn)classmate要用復(fù)數(shù)形式。
(2)在on one’s way 結(jié)構(gòu)中,way 沒(méi)有復(fù)數(shù)形式。
(3)這兒不是半個(gè)小時(shí),而是一個(gè)半小時(shí),所以hour要用復(fù)數(shù)。
(4)此處指普通的草,多用單數(shù)。
(5)此處應(yīng)將minute’s改為minutes’,即twenty minutes’ rest。
(6)此處應(yīng)用vegetable的復(fù)數(shù)形式vegetables。
(7)這兒指的是每個(gè)人的臉上,應(yīng)將faces改為face。

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                                The happiest day
      Last spring my classmates and I went to Dongpu Island to have a picnic. It was March 2. The weather was fine and there was hardly a cloud in the sky. We started early that morning. We all carried something nice to eat and drink.
      We sang happily on the way there. After about one and a half hours, we got to the island. The water in the lake was nice and clean and we could see flowers and grass all around us. How beautiful it was! After about twenty minutes’ rest, we divided ourselves into four groups and cooked our lunch. Most of us did the cooking for the first time. After a while, everything was ready. We put all the food on a big piece of paper. There was meat, fish, fruit and vegetables. How delicious they were! We enjoyed our lunch and there was a big smile on everyone’s face.