中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)常見錯(cuò)誤分析(八) 詞匯使用錯(cuò)誤

要點(diǎn)領(lǐng)悟
        很多考生在中考書面表達(dá)中,常常會(huì)錯(cuò)用一些詞語(yǔ),使得評(píng)卷老師不知其所云,得分自然不會(huì)高。因此,我們?cè)谄綍r(shí)的習(xí)作訓(xùn)練中就要特別留意詞匯的正確使用。

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        李小莉的一個(gè)名叫Mary Baker的筆友給她回了一封電子郵件,談到她對(duì)中國(guó)的喜愛和向往。請(qǐng)以“An e-mail from an American pen pal”為標(biāo)題寫一封電子郵件。郵件的開頭已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
From: marybaker0892@yahoo.com
To: lixiaolibjcn@163.com

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Subject: My wish
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要求:
 1. 意思連貫、符合邏輯、書寫工整;
 2. 詞數(shù):85左右。

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From: marybaker0892@yahoo.com
To: lixiaolibjcn@163.com
Subject: My wish
Dear Li Xiaoli,
         I’m glad to receive your e-mail. I’ve showed it to my friends. Everyone (1) of us thinks China is one of the greatest countries in the world. We’ve known much about your country for years, but we have not chance (2) to go there. We often watch the Great Wall and beautiful Beijing on TV. So I think China is worth to visit(3). I bought a book on China and study it when I’m free. I hope I can visit your country one day, and I also hope you to visit (4) our country sometimes (5) in the future.
                                                                                               Truly yours,
                                                                                               Mary Baker

精講點(diǎn)撥
 1. everyone是不定代詞,它可以用作主語(yǔ),但不能和含of的介詞短語(yǔ)連用。此處應(yīng)把Everyone分開,即Every one,或者用Each來(lái)替換它。但要注意,這里不能用Every,因?yàn)樗荒苡米髦髡Z(yǔ)。

2. chance表示“機(jī)會(huì)”的意思講時(shí)是可數(shù)名詞,須和冠詞連用。由于該句是否定句,如果在它前面加上any,它需要變成復(fù)數(shù)。最便捷的辦法是,把not換成no,表示not a,如果no后接的名詞是復(fù)數(shù),它則表示not any。
       3. 考生對(duì)worth一詞的用法顯然不清楚。worth常用于be worth doing這一結(jié)構(gòu)。be worth后不能接動(dòng)詞不定式,而要接V-ing形式。因此,應(yīng)當(dāng)把to visit改為visiting。
      4. hope一詞不能用于hope sb. to do sth.結(jié)構(gòu),如果要表達(dá)“希望某人做某事”要用hope接that從句。因此要將you to visit改為you can visit。 
      5. 應(yīng)將sometimes改為sometime。sometimes意為“有時(shí)”,而sometime 的意思是“某個(gè)時(shí)間”,指某個(gè)不確定或未說明的時(shí)間。

精彩例文
From: marybaker0892@yahoo.com
To: lixiaolibjcn@163.com
Subject: My wish

Dear Li Xiaoli,
         I’m glad to receive your e-mail. I’ve showed it to my friends. Every one of us thinks China is one of the greatest countries. We’ve known much about your country for years, but we have no chance to go there. We often watch the Great Wall and beautiful Beijing on TV. So I think China is worth visiting. I bought a book on China and study it when I’m free. I hope I can visit your country one day, and I also hope you can visit our country sometime in the future.
                                                                                                Truly yours,
                                                        Mary Baker