相信很多鴨鴨面對寫作話題會“無語”，這說明寫作素材積累得不夠深刻或者不夠廣泛。在這樣的時刻怎能不用漢語寫作?要知道，用最熟悉的語言積累寫作素材的速度是非?？斓?，因為它符合我們的邏輯思維。但同時，鴨鴨也應該注意，英語和漢語之間轉(zhuǎn)化時是存在巨大差異的，尤其是在語序方面。所以積累素材的同時，也要練習語言，那么漢譯英就是非常重要的途徑。
題目：
13-02-16
Some people think lawbreakers should be sent to prison, while other people think there are some alternatives (for example, doing work which is beneficial for local community).
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
在我們現(xiàn)代和平的年代中，人們享受著生活的美好同時也遭受著一些違法人對我們的侵害。一些人認為這些違法者應該被送進監(jiān)獄得到他們應有的懲罰， 然而 還有一些人認為他們可以做一些對社會有利的事情去彌補他們的過錯。 我認為這兩種說法都各有道理。 作文能力提升，就來易優(yōu)作文,http://www.zequeka.cn
In such peaceful years, people are not only enjoying the fantastic lives but also suffering the harms from some lawbreakers at the same time. Some people think that the lawbreakers should be sent into the jail as a serious punishment. However, others claim that they can make some contributions to our community to correct their faults. In my opinion, both of these views are reasonable to certain extent.
違法者應該受到嚴重的懲罰，他們做出對社會和人民有害的事情就應該在監(jiān)獄里認真反思爭取重新做人。例如，有人在商場里吸煙導致重大火災的發(fā)生造成數(shù)十人的死亡和財產(chǎn)的重大損失。對于這種人應該得到法律的制裁并用其畢生的時間去懺悔。我認為，像上述這種忽略他人生命的人應該被送到監(jiān)獄。
Some lawbreakers should be punished by our society for the harmful incidents they made to both the community and the public. They need to have a deep consideration about their faults in the jail. For example, someone who smoked in a supermarket caused serious loses in both social economy and human lives. In such a case, they should get the punishment and have a think for their harmful behavior by spending the rest of life in prison. Personally, I think, those people ignoring other”s lives should get a serious punishment! 易優(yōu)作文網(wǎng)，中小學學生學作文的好網(wǎng)站（http://www.zequeka.cn）
然而，盡管有些人做了違法的事情并且傷害了別人。他們也應該得到機會去彌補，為社會做一些貢獻。很多人也是因為生活所迫或是不經(jīng)意間犯了錯誤，源于對法律知識的不了解。政府應該對他們有足夠的教育。我認為，人的一生短暫且寶貴，我們不應該剝奪他們?yōu)樯鐣鲐暙I的權(quán)利。我們都是平等的都有相同的權(quán)利。
Nevertheless, although some people did the bad things to others, they have rights to get the opportunity to correct their unjustified behaviors by making more contributions to society. Most people made the mistakes by accident, basing on their unknowledgeable education. The government should be in charge of this situation. In my opinion, the life of an individual is short but precious, so we shouldn”t rub their rights making contributions to the world to gain some forgives. Everyone should be treated equally with the same rights and freedom, even a prisoner. 在線批改作文，<a href=http://www.zequeka.cn/jiaoshoulanmu/>易優(yōu)名師作文批改</a>
最后，我想說上述兩種想法都很合理，然而我們應該是情況而定去原諒獲取懲罰那些違法者。我們的政府也應該更注重對公眾的法律教育以此來遏制違法事情的發(fā)生。這樣，我們的未來將一片光明。
As a result, what I want to say is that both of these ideas are reasonable. However, we should regard different events according to various situations. It is an efficient way to prevent these illegal things from happening. In this case, our future will be bright and wonderful.
記得，一定不要盲目寫英語作文 ，否則只是“錯誤”的機械重復，練得多反而傷害大。所以初始階段寫作一定要組織非常好的寫作內(nèi)容，以漢語的形式記錄下來，然后再寫成英文，慢慢形成內(nèi)容和語言并行的能力。一定可以的，鴨鴨們加油!
