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1.關(guān)愛(ài)對(duì)象:我們需要關(guān)愛(ài)誰(shuí)?是老人還是父母，亦或是其他需要關(guān)愛(ài)的人?
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2.關(guān)愛(ài)原因:為何上述對(duì)象需要關(guān)愛(ài)?
3.如何關(guān)愛(ài):我們應(yīng)該如何把關(guān)愛(ài)落實(shí)到行動(dòng)層面?
相關(guān)話題寫(xiě)作示例指導(dǎo)
實(shí)踐案例
題目
Please look at the two pictures below carefully，and think about what has happened.Write passage in at least 60 words on the topic "How to care for the elderly”. (請(qǐng)仔細(xì)觀察下列兩幅圖片，想想發(fā)生了什么，以“如何關(guān)愛(ài)老人”為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文。)注意:短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息。
審題
看圖作文對(duì)初中的學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)，是有一定難度的。 此類作文旨在考察學(xué)生的讀題能力、想象能力以及遣詞造句、語(yǔ)篇組織的書(shū)面表達(dá)能力。想要寫(xiě)好這篇作文，就必須要注意以下幾個(gè)方面:
1.認(rèn)真閱讀提示信息:圖片、圖表等的材料作文通常都會(huì)給出一定的提示， 寫(xiě)作前務(wù)必看清這些提示和寫(xiě)作要求。
2.仔細(xì)分析圖片內(nèi)容:圖畫(huà)是作文的基礎(chǔ)，因此在寫(xiě)作前要仔細(xì)觀察圖畫(huà)，進(jìn)行分析，了解圖畫(huà)所要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容、反映的問(wèn)題、蘊(yùn)含的道理等。
3.觀察細(xì)節(jié)，展開(kāi)想象:對(duì)圖畫(huà)的主題進(jìn)行展開(kāi)，加以內(nèi)容的擴(kuò)充。
從這篇作文的圖片內(nèi)容來(lái)看，盡管兩位老人家中都掛著全家福，但顯然并沒(méi)有家人陪伴左右，顯得非常孤獨(dú)，需要子女的關(guān)愛(ài)和陪伴。結(jié)合圖片上方的提示信息，作文的主題應(yīng)為“關(guān)愛(ài)老人”。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，我們首先要對(duì)圖片內(nèi)容進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)要概述，突出重點(diǎn)一老人需要關(guān)愛(ài)。 接看，我們應(yīng)就如何關(guān)愛(ài)老人，提出2-3條具體的、可行的做法，并對(duì)其進(jìn)行解釋說(shuō)明。
此外，這篇作文還需注意避免出現(xiàn)人稱，時(shí)態(tài)的混亂，或者對(duì)圖片進(jìn)行過(guò)度的想象，導(dǎo)
段落結(jié)構(gòu)
本文可采用“總一分一總”的寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu):
.第一段:用12句話簡(jiǎn)要措給圖片中的情境和圖片所呈現(xiàn)的內(nèi)容，提出主題一 關(guān)愛(ài)老人
第二段:對(duì)文章的主題展開(kāi)說(shuō)明，給出2-3條關(guān)愛(ài)老人的具體做法，并解釋說(shuō)明為什153g么要這么做，或者這么做能起到怎樣的效果等。
第三段:總結(jié)上述內(nèi)容，呼吁大家共同關(guān)愛(ài)老人。
核心語(yǔ)匯
remind sb. of sth.讓某人想起某事
respect the elderly尊敬老人
be aware of sth.意識(shí)到....
family care家庭照料
enrich one's life豐富某人的生活
focus on/ concentrate on sth.關(guān)注某事
have some trouble / difficulty (in) doing sth.做某事有困難
參考句型
Filial piety is the most important in all virtues.100百善孝為先。
Nothing is more ... than ..沒(méi)有比.........更......
no matter how ... we should無(wú)論...我們都應(yīng).....
Not only should we ... we also should ..我們不僅應(yīng)....還.....
Make sure that ...確保...
習(xí)作
How to care for the elderly
As is shown in the two pictures above, some of the elderly live alone. They feel lonely and depressed with a sense of being useless.Therefore, one of the pressing problems facing us now is how to care for the elderly. What they need most is not material comforts, but mental ones. No matter how busy we are, we should try to find time to chat with them, look after them, and accompany them. In addition, we should let them have an annual physical examination to keep them healthy. After all, nothing is more important than taking good care of the elderly and making them happy.
點(diǎn)評(píng):
該生準(zhǔn)確地把握了圖片的內(nèi)容，能根據(jù)圖片的主題進(jìn)行表達(dá)。內(nèi)容充實(shí)，句子連貫，表達(dá)通順。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，“feel depressed""material comforts" 等詞匯的正確使用，展現(xiàn)了較大的詞匯量，主語(yǔ)從句"What they need most ...以及讓步狀語(yǔ)從句“No matter how...”等句子體現(xiàn)了作者較強(qiáng)的表達(dá)能力。文章最后一句話回應(yīng)了主題?？偟膩?lái)說(shuō)，該生很好地完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)，本文是一片層次清晰、結(jié)構(gòu)完整的佳作。
相關(guān)話題滿分作文必背
（一）
題目
Write at least 60 words about the topic "Love around me". (請(qǐng)以“圍繞在我身邊的愛(ài)”為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的作文。)
注意：
Use the following points as a guide.
1. Is there any love around you? (Give one or two examples.)
2. How do you feel when you get love from him her 1 them?
3. What are you going to do to show your love?
范文
Love around me
Love is everywhere in my life. My parents support me and love me all the time. My friends care about me as well It is their love that helps me make progress and become better and better. When I have trouble with my studies or I fail the exams, my parents never get angry with me. Instead, they always cheer me up and give me confidence. My friends often help me with my studies. What they do makes me feel warm, touched and grateful. In order to show my love and gratitude, I will spend some of my pocket money buying gifts for them.I think they will like my gifts very much.
（二）
題目
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic "I want to volunteer in/at ”
(以“我想在 擔(dān)任志愿者”為題，寫(xiě)- -篇不少于 60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)
注意
Use the following points as a reference. (以下問(wèn)題僅供參考 )
1. Where do you want to volunteer?
2. Why do you want to be a volunteer there?
3. Do you have any problem with volunteering?
范文
I want to volunteer at a nursing house
I want to volunteer at a nursing house. Firstly, the old at the nursing house may be lonely, because they seldom see their children. If I am a volunteer there, I can accompany them, chat with them and make them feel happier and less lonely. In addition, caring for the old is a traditional Chinese virtue. It's our duty to look after them well. I believe I can be the best volunteer because I can do many kinds of housework. And the most important thing is, I am patient and willing to help. I'm ready to be a volunteer there!
（三）
題目
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic“Take care of the Earth together”(請(qǐng)以“一同愛(ài)地球”為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60字的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）
范文
Take care of the Earth together!
Currently. the environment is getting worse and wore. We are surrounded by different kinds of population The Earth is our only home, so it is time for us to take care of the Earth and make it better. For example, we should drive cars less often and go to school by public transportation. In this way, we can help reduce carbon mission. Moreover, we should stop polluting the river by not throwing rubbish into it. All in all, nothing is more important than taking good care of the Earth. Let's take action together!
