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感恩，不僅僅指感謝他人的大恩大德。感恩，可以是一種積極向上的生活態(tài)度，簡(jiǎn)單來(lái)說(shuō)，就是對(duì)他人給予的幫助、支持等心存感激，并能有所回饋，將感恩之心付諸行動(dòng)。在我 作文培訓(xùn)，就來(lái)蘇州易優(yōu)作文 http://www.zequeka.cn/miniForm.html
導(dǎo)、朋友的關(guān)心和幫助等等。上述這些內(nèi)容 都可以作為本話題的寫作素材。感恩之情源于內(nèi)心深處，因此這類作文一-定要體現(xiàn)出真情實(shí)意。 易優(yōu)作文網(wǎng)，中小學(xué)學(xué)生學(xué)作文的好網(wǎng)站（http://www.zequeka.cn）
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相關(guān)話題寫作示例指導(dǎo)
實(shí)踐案例
題目
Write at least 60 words about the topic "I want to say thank you to ”. (請(qǐng)以“我想對(duì)
說(shuō)聲謝謝”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文。)
Questions for reference:
1. Who do you want to say thank you to?
2. Why do you want to thank him / her?
3. How will you express your gratitude?
審題
這一題目的命題形式是半命題，需要由學(xué)生將題目補(bǔ)充完整之后再寫作。相較于命題作文的過(guò)多限制，半命題作文既能體現(xiàn)命題的中心，又給學(xué)生留下了一定的寫作空間，寫作自由度比較高。根據(jù)題目的內(nèi)容，這篇作文的主題為感謝，題目中需要補(bǔ)全的，是感謝的對(duì)象，那么這個(gè)對(duì)象可以是父母、朋友，也可以是老師等。在寫作時(shí)，可以參考題目下方的提示問(wèn)題，從感謝對(duì)象、感謝她/他的原因以及如何感謝她/他而層層鋪開。
段落結(jié)構(gòu)
本文可采用“總一分”的寫作結(jié)構(gòu):
總:開頭部分簡(jiǎn)要提出文章的主題或中心，即所感謝的對(duì)象。
分: 分層敘述，對(duì)文章的主題展開說(shuō)明，包括為何想感謝她他，以及如何回饋她/他等。注意，在總分結(jié)構(gòu)中，分總之間必須有緊密的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系，總述部分應(yīng)是分述的總綱;分述部分要圍繞總述的中心進(jìn)行。情感類的寫作，一 定要能體現(xiàn)出真情實(shí)感。
核心語(yǔ)匯
.thank sb. for (doing) sth. ....感謝某人
be grateful to sb.感激、感謝某人
express one's gratitude表達(dá)某人的感謝之情
be proud of sb.為某人感到自豪
buy sth. for sb./ buy sb. sth.為某人買某物
prepare sth. for sb.為某人準(zhǔn)備某物
參考句型
Gratitude is the least of virtues; ingratitude the worst of vices.感恩是小德，忘恩是大惡。
I'm truly grateful for your help.我非常感激你的幫助。
I couldn't have done it without you.若是沒(méi)有你，我不可能做到。
My parents are all busy doing ... all day.我的父母整日忙......
There's no doubt that ......是毫無(wú)疑向的。
We cannot emphasize the importance of ... too much.
我們?cè)僭趺磸?qiáng)調(diào)...的重要性也不為過(guò)。
習(xí)作1
題目
I want to say thank you to my class teacher
I want to say thank you to my class teacher. She is also my English teacher. She is a very kindness and dedicated teacher. She often help me to improve my English after class and encourages me not to give up helps when I get low marks in exams. Because of her support, I always keep my motivation for my studies. Now I want to express my thanks by sending her a postcard and tell her how much I am thankful to her.
注：
1.文中kindness應(yīng)該為kind
2.文中help應(yīng)該為helps
點(diǎn)評(píng):
該生能依據(jù)題目的要求展開寫作，對(duì)三個(gè)提示問(wèn)題“who"“"why"和"how"依次進(jìn)行說(shuō)明，文章的結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容較為完整，是一篇符合要求、完成度不錯(cuò)的習(xí)作。不過(guò)文中有些語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤需改正，如:“"she is a very kindness teacher"中的"kindness" 應(yīng)改為"kind" ，“"she often help me to improve my English"這一句子中"help" 應(yīng)加“s" 。
寫作2
題目
1 want to say thank you to my mother
Nothing is more powerful than mothers' love in the world. I want to say thank you to my mother from the bottom of my heart.①It is Mom who brought me to the world. It is Mom who brings me up and looks
after me well no matter how tired she is.②Whenever I get into trouble or desperately need a hand, it is Mom who always supports me and gives me encouragement. I'm so lucky that I grow up with her constant care and love. I would like to express my sincere gratitude by writing a thank-you letter to her and sending her a bunch of flowers,③which is her favorite. I'm sure she will like it.
注：
①此處使用了兩個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句型
②此處使用了狀語(yǔ)從句
③此處使用了定語(yǔ)從句
點(diǎn)評(píng):
這篇習(xí)作脈絡(luò)清楚，銜接自然，該生的詞法和句法使用都準(zhǔn)確到位，顯示了扎實(shí)深厚的語(yǔ)言功底。尤其值得借鑒的是，本習(xí)作的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)豐富，并運(yùn)用了許多復(fù)雜的句式，比如強(qiáng)調(diào)句"it is Mom who brought me to the world" ;讓步狀語(yǔ)從句“.... no matter how tired she is" ;定語(yǔ)從句“Which is her favorite"等。這些語(yǔ)句的使用讓文章的句式更多樣化，增加了可讀性。
相關(guān)話題滿分作文必背
（一）
題目
In your life, there must be someone who helps you, supports you or cheers you up and you are really thankful to him / her. Please write a passage with at least 60 words according to the topic "Because of you". (在你的生活中，一定有一 一個(gè)幫助你、 支持你、使你振作的人。你一定很感激她/他。請(qǐng)以“因?yàn)槟恪睘轭}，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)。
Use the following points as reference.
1. Who are you really thankful to?
2. How did he/ she help you? Please give at least one example.
3. What will you do to him / her in return?
范文
Because of you
It is lucky for me to have a wonderful English teacher. Because of her, I have made great progress in English learning. I would never forget the time I met her at the beginning of the semester. She smiled at me. It seemed like a kind of encouragement to me. Every time I made a mistake or failed the exam, she always corrected my mistakes patiently, taught me English again and again and encouraged me to try harder. Because of her, I was no longer afraid of learning English. Because of her, I made progress gradually. Because of her, I realized that hard work would pay off. For me, the best way to thank her is to learn English well to let her be proud of me. I will keep working hard to achieve it!
（二）
題目
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic“I want to give a gift". (以
“我想送給____份禮物” 為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)在過(guò)去的日子里，你一定體驗(yàn)過(guò)收到禮物的欣喜和愉悅。新年伊始，你最想給誰(shuí)送一份禮物，并談?wù)劄槭裁匆瓦@份禮物。
注意:
1. 在答題紙上將題目補(bǔ)充完整。
2.短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。)
The following is for reference only. (以下問(wèn)題僅供參考。)
1. I want to give him/ her the gift because ...
2. It will be useful / necessary / helpful to ...
范文
I want to give my best friend Ellen a gift
At the beginning of this year, I would like to send a gift to my best friend Ellen. I want to give her the gift, because I want to thank her for everything she has done for me. During my school days, she always helps me with my studies and tells me funny stories to make me happy when I feel upset. During the weekends and holidays, she often plays with me so that my life becomes more colorful I have chosen her favorite CD as the New Year gift. I'm sure she will be very surprised and she will love it very much because it is what she wants for along time.
（三）
題目
Mother's Day is coming. It is a great chance for us to express our love and gratitude to our mother. How will you celebrate Mother's Day? Please write a passage with at least 60words according to the topic "The coming Mother's Day". (母親節(jié)即將到來(lái)，這是我們想母親表達(dá)愛(ài)意和感激之情的絕佳機(jī)會(huì)。你會(huì)如何過(guò)母親節(jié)?請(qǐng)以“即將來(lái)臨的母親節(jié)”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文）
范文
The coming Mother's Day
I’m so lucky because I have a great mother. She takes good care of me no mater how tired she is " She always supports me when 1 am upset. She is always on my side if1 need her. In fact, there are too few things to do to pay back her love. However.,Mothers Day is coming. I would like to take the chance to express how much I love her and how much I am thankful to her. On that day, I will cook lunch for her. Usually, my mother prepares meals for me and I want to do that for her in return. Besides, I will prepare a bunch of flowers as a gift. She loves flowers. What's more, I would like to take a family photo to record the happy moment. I hope my mother will enjoy an unforgettable Mother's Day.
