中考英語作文指導：如何寫感恩類英語作文
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感恩，不僅僅指感謝他人的大恩大德。感恩，可以是一種積極向上的生活態(tài)度，簡單來說，就是對他人給予的幫助、支持等心存感激，并能有所回饋，將感恩之心付諸行動。在我 <a href=http://www.zequeka.cn/miniform.html>提分快的蘇州初中作文閱讀培訓</a>
導、朋友的關心和幫助等等。上述這些內容 都可以作為本話題的寫作素材。感恩之情源于內心深處，因此這類作文一-定要體現(xiàn)出真情實意。
相關話題寫作示例指導
實踐案例
題目
Write at least 60 words about the topic "I want to say thank you to ”. (請以“我想對
說聲謝謝”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文。)
Questions for reference:
1. Who do you want to say thank you to?
2. Why do you want to thank him / her?
3. How will you express your gratitude?
審題
這一題目的命題形式是半命題，需要由學生將題目補充完整之后再寫作。相較于命題作文的過多限制，半命題作文既能體現(xiàn)命題的中心，又給學生留下了一定的寫作空間，寫作自由度比較高。根據題目的內容，這篇作文的主題為感謝，題目中需要補全的，是感謝的對象，那么這個對象可以是父母、朋友，也可以是老師等。在寫作時，可以參考題目下方的提示問題，從感謝對象、感謝她/他的原因以及如何感謝她/他而層層鋪開。
段落結構
本文可采用“總一分”的寫作結構:
總:開頭部分簡要提出文章的主題或中心，即所感謝的對象。
分: 分層敘述，對文章的主題展開說明，包括為何想感謝她他，以及如何回饋她/他等。注意，在總分結構中，分總之間必須有緊密的內在聯(lián)系，總述部分應是分述的總綱;分述部分要圍繞總述的中心進行。情感類的寫作，一 定要能體現(xiàn)出真情實感。
核心語匯
.thank sb. for (doing) sth. ....感謝某人
be grateful to sb.感激、感謝某人
express one's gratitude表達某人的感謝之情
be proud of sb.為某人感到自豪
buy sth. for sb./ buy sb. sth.為某人買某物
prepare sth. for sb.為某人準備某物
參考句型
Gratitude is the least of virtues; ingratitude the worst of vices.感恩是小德，忘恩是大惡。
I'm truly grateful for your help.我非常感激你的幫助。
I couldn't have done it without you.若是沒有你，我不可能做到。
My parents are all busy doing ... all day.我的父母整日忙......
There's no doubt that ......是毫無疑向的。
We cannot emphasize the importance of ... too much.
我們再怎么強調...的重要性也不為過。
習作1
題目
I want to say thank you to my class teacher
I want to say thank you to my class teacher. She is also my English teacher. She is a very kindness and dedicated teacher. She often help me to improve my English after class and encourages me not to give up helps when I get low marks in exams. Because of her support, I always keep my motivation for my studies. Now I want to express my thanks by sending her a postcard and tell her how much I am thankful to her.
注：
1.文中kindness應該為kind
2.文中help應該為helps
點評:
該生能依據題目的要求展開寫作，對三個提示問題“who"“"why"和"how"依次進行說明，文章的結構和內容較為完整，是一篇符合要求、完成度不錯的習作。不過文中有些語法錯誤需改正，如:“"she is a very kindness teacher"中的"kindness" 應改為"kind" ，“"she often help me to improve my English"這一句子中"help" 應加“s" 。
寫作2
題目
1 want to say thank you to my mother
Nothing is more powerful than mothers' love in the world. I want to say thank you to my mother from the bottom of my heart.①It is Mom who brought me to the world. It is Mom who brings me up and looks
after me well no matter how tired she is.②Whenever I get into trouble or desperately need a hand, it is Mom who always supports me and gives me encouragement. I'm so lucky that I grow up with her constant care and love. I would like to express my sincere gratitude by writing a thank-you letter to her and sending her a bunch of flowers,③which is her favorite. I'm sure she will like it.
注：
①此處使用了兩個強調句型
②此處使用了狀語從句
③此處使用了定語從句
點評:
這篇習作脈絡清楚，銜接自然，該生的詞法和句法使用都準確到位，顯示了扎實深厚的語言功底。尤其值得借鑒的是，本習作的語言表達豐富，并運用了許多復雜的句式，比如強調句"it is Mom who brought me to the world" ;讓步狀語從句“.... no matter how tired she is" ;定語從句“Which is her favorite"等。這些語句的使用讓文章的句式更多樣化，增加了可讀性。
相關話題滿分作文必背
（一）
題目
In your life, there must be someone who helps you, supports you or cheers you up and you are really thankful to him / her. Please write a passage with at least 60 words according to the topic "Because of you". (在你的生活中，一定有一 一個幫助你、 支持你、使你振作的人。你一定很感激她/他。請以“因為你”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)。
Use the following points as reference.
1. Who are you really thankful to?
2. How did he/ she help you? Please give at least one example.
3. What will you do to him / her in return?
范文
Because of you
It is lucky for me to have a wonderful English teacher. Because of her, I have made great progress in English learning. I would never forget the time I met her at the beginning of the semester. She smiled at me. It seemed like a kind of encouragement to me. Every time I made a mistake or failed the exam, she always corrected my mistakes patiently, taught me English again and again and encouraged me to try harder. Because of her, I was no longer afraid of learning English. Because of her, I made progress gradually. Because of her, I realized that hard work would pay off. For me, the best way to thank her is to learn English well to let her be proud of me. I will keep working hard to achieve it!
（二）
題目
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic“I want to give a gift". (以
“我想送給____份禮物” 為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)在過去的日子里，你一定體驗過收到禮物的欣喜和愉悅。新年伊始，你最想給誰送一份禮物，并談談為什么要送這份禮物。
注意:
1. 在答題紙上將題目補充完整。
2.短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。)
The following is for reference only. (以下問題僅供參考。)
1. I want to give him/ her the gift because ...
2. It will be useful / necessary / helpful to ...
范文
I want to give my best friend Ellen a gift
At the beginning of this year, I would like to send a gift to my best friend Ellen. I want to give her the gift, because I want to thank her for everything she has done for me. During my school days, she always helps me with my studies and tells me funny stories to make me happy when I feel upset. During the weekends and holidays, she often plays with me so that my life becomes more colorful I have chosen her favorite CD as the New Year gift. I'm sure she will be very surprised and she will love it very much because it is what she wants for along time.
（三）
題目
Mother's Day is coming. It is a great chance for us to express our love and gratitude to our mother. How will you celebrate Mother's Day? Please write a passage with at least 60words according to the topic "The coming Mother's Day". (母親節(jié)即將到來，這是我們想母親表達愛意和感激之情的絕佳機會。你會如何過母親節(jié)?請以“即將來臨的母親節(jié)”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文）
范文
The coming Mother's Day
I’m so lucky because I have a great mother. She takes good care of me no mater how tired she is " She always supports me when 1 am upset. She is always on my side if1 need her. In fact, there are too few things to do to pay back her love. However.,Mothers Day is coming. I would like to take the chance to express how much I love her and how much I am thankful to her. On that day, I will cook lunch for her. Usually, my mother prepares meals for me and I want to do that for her in return. Besides, I will prepare a bunch of flowers as a gift. She loves flowers. What's more, I would like to take a family photo to record the happy moment. I hope my mother will enjoy an unforgettable Mother's Day.
《中考英語作文指導：如何寫感恩類英語作文》添加時間：2025-01-09；更新時間：2025-03-15
