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同情是仁愛之心的具體體現(xiàn)，是一個人對他人不幸遭遇的感同身受，也是互助原則的具體行為。擁有了同情心，我們才能對他人伸出援助之手。通過同情去理解別人的痛苦，減輕別人的痛苦，自己的內(nèi)心也能更豐富。為他人送去溫暖，為自己帶來收獲。 <a hRef=http://www.zequeka.cn/miNifoRm.html>蘇州小學生作文培訓</a>
如何把同情這一情感轉化為行動， 是這一主題中主要會涉及到的寫作內(nèi)容。因此，該主題通常會和幫助、鼓勵他人等內(nèi)容相聯(lián)系，比如如何幫助災區(qū)人民，如何為慈普活動出一份力等。寫作時要注意，無論是記敘文還是說明文，在這一主題的寫作中，需要傳遞出正能量。
相關話題作文寫作示例指導
實踐案例
題目
Write a composition in at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根據(jù)所給情最寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文。)
Suppose you are a member of the volunteer club in your school. You plan to go to are mote area this winter holiday for a few days to help and encourage the poor kids there.What will you do there and why do you want to do it?
審題
這是一篇材料作文。在落筆前，要認真審閱所給的材料。材料作文的審題正確與否，將直接影響到文章的質(zhì)量。所以材料作文的寫作關鍵是仔細、全面地理解材料內(nèi)容，把握主題，從而組織材料。根據(jù)情境信息來闡述內(nèi)容。
題目所設定的情境為:寒假中你要去偏遠地區(qū)，鼓勵幫助那里的孩子，為他們做些什么。根據(jù)材料信息，寫作的關鍵點在于對"what"和"why"這兩個問題的說明和闡述。那么學生寫作時。首先需要說明:打算為這些偏遠地區(qū)的孩子做些什么?比如送孩子一些日用品、衣物等:然后，還需要對此進行解釋說明，即為什么要這樣做。寫作時需要注意時態(tài)。大文應體用一般將來時的動作和狀態(tài)。
段落結構
本文可采用三段式，即“總一分總" 的寫作結構:
第一段:文章的總起，拋出文章的主題和中心內(nèi)容，即打算利用假期去幫助貧苦的孩子。
第二段:分層敘述，對文章的主題展開說明，具體闡述要為孩子做些什么事，為什么打算做這些。
第三段:文章的收尾，對之前闡述的內(nèi)容做個總結和提升，也可以呼吁大家一起幫
助這些孩子。
“總一分總”的段落結構能使文章的脈絡互相貫通，各部分各有特點又緊密聯(lián)系。
核心語匯
have pity on sb.同情、憐憫某人
feel sorry for sb.同情;惋惜;為....而難過
cheer sb. up鼓舞某人;使某人振作
provide sb. with sth.為某人提供某物
encouragement and support鼓勵和支持
help sb to do sth./with sth.幫助某人某事
prepare sth for sb. 為某人準備某物
參考句型
It's urgent that........是緊急的。
Every time I think of ... I can't help doing sch.每當我想到...我都忍不住....
I will .. in the following ways.我將用下列方法.....
We should make every effort to do sth.我們應不遺余力地做某事。
It is obvious I clear that....是顯而易見的。
習作
In this coming winter holiday, I will go to the remote area to do something for the poor kids there.①As those kids are in poor condition, they may be short of clothes, shoes or books. Thus, I plan to provide them with some of my books and clothes. I believe they can learn more knowledge from the books, and the clothes can keep them warm. During my stay there, I will also play with them and talk to them to let them feel happier. ②What's more, I would like to take some photos for them so that I can call on more people to help them on the Internet I'm really looking forward to the trip.
注
① be in poor condition和be short of兩個短語用得好。
② 長短句的交替使用，使得文章的句式較為豐富多變。
點評:
本文思路清晰，內(nèi)容完整，句意連貫，語言規(guī)范。該生通過仔細審題，把握住了題目的重點內(nèi)容和關鍵信息，用較為扎實的語言功底，流暢地將習作內(nèi)容呈現(xiàn)出來。這篇習作的時態(tài)運用得當，且文中出現(xiàn)了定的好詞好句， 比如be short of, in poor condition等，值得借鑒。
相關話題滿分作文必背
（一）
題目
Write at least 60 words on the topic "When I see an old person fall down in the street,1... (以“當我看到老人在街上摔倒，....為題，寫-篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）
Reference words (Use at least two of them):
a traditional virtue (美德); in favor of/ against; calm; get along with; care for
范文
Helping others is a traditional virtue. When I see an old person fall down in the street,I will run towards him at once to help him without hesitation. First of ll, I will keep calm and check whether he is injured or not. Then, if necessary, I will dial 120 so that he can betaken to the hospital immediately. Besides, I will also help him to call his family member to come and accompany him. I decide to help him, because I was taught to help others with my efforts since I was a little boy. When an old person falls down, he must be very scared and feel helpless. Therefore, helping him is something I must do.
（二）
題目
假設你參加了一個志愿者項目，暑假去偏遠地區(qū)(a remote area)和小朋友們生活一段時間。出發(fā)之前，你希望得到更多關于項目的信息。你列了張表，請確定你最希望了解的1-2個關鍵問題，然后寫-封信給組織者Mr. Prince,請求他的幫助。信件格式已給，標點符號不占格，至少60個字。
My list
Things I can do with the children Weather
Things I need to prepare Medical care
Basic information of the children there Food
范文
Dear Mr. Prince,
It is my great honor to be a member of the volunteer program. I will appreciate it a lot if you can provide me with more detailed information. First, I want to have a clear picture of the basic information of the children there, such as their hobbies, their age and their living conditions. The more I know about the children, the better I can do. Second,the information of the weather condition there is of great importance to me, as I want to prepare proper clothes to avoid getting ill. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon and I will try my best to help the children.
Yours Sincerely,
Allen
（三）
題目
Write a letter with at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根據(jù)所給情景，寫一封不少于60個詞的信，標點符號不占格。)
Situation:
Your friend Tom has broken his leg recently. He has to stay at home in bed for at least one month. He feels very upset and worries about his studies a lot. Please write a letter to him to express your sympathy and cheer him up.
范文
Dear Tom,
I'm really sorry to hear that you have broken your leg. It must be very painful. Now in order to get well soon, you have to stay in bed for some time. It must be very boring but you'd better take the doctor's advice. I know you are worried about your studies, but take it easy,I will help you with your studies as soon as you get well. So you don't have to worry too much.
The most important thing for you is to stay in bed and try to recover. I believe you will be better soon!
Yours Sincerely,
Allen
《中考英語作文指導：如何寫同情的英語作文》添加時間：2025-01-09；更新時間：2025-03-15
