中考英語(yǔ)作文指導(dǎo)：方法介紹英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作技巧
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一、制作方法
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范文
How to Make Tomato Juice
Tomato juice is a kind of healthy drink. It tastes very good.
To make tomato juice, we only need to follow several easy steps. First of all, try to make sure that the tomatoes are clean and fresh. Next, we should put them in the hot water for a few minutes to make the skin loosen. Then, cut them into small pieces and press the juice out of them. Finally, add the juice with a little sugar.
A glass of nice tomato juice is made. Have a drink and enjoy yourselves.
參考譯文
如何制作番茄果汁
番茄果汁是一種健康的飲料。它非常好喝。
制作番茄果汁，我們只需要進(jìn)行幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的步驟。首先，盡量確保番茄是干凈和新鮮的。接下來(lái)，我們要將它們放在熱水里幾分鐘，讓番茄皮松掉。然后，將它們切成小塊，將果汁擠壓出來(lái)。最后，往果汁里加入少量糖。
杯好喝的番茄汁就做好了。 喝口，享受下吧。
亮點(diǎn)詞匯
healthy 健康的
drink 飲料 .喝
step 步驟;臺(tái)階
first of all 首先
loosen 松弛;松開(kāi)
press .推;擠壓
出彩句型
It tastes... 它嘗起來(lái).....
We need to follow several steps.我們需要進(jìn)行幾個(gè)步驟。
Try to make sure that..盡量確保.....
add.. with.. ..........
Have a drink and enjoy yourselves.喝一口，享受一下吧。
高分點(diǎn)評(píng)
生活化的選題是本文最大的成功之處，單是題目，就緊緊抓住了讀者的眼球。文章介紹了番茄汁的制作過(guò)程，有條有理，形象生動(dòng)。文章中一系列祈使句的運(yùn)用，如"Try to make sure that.."“Cut them into small pieces"等，構(gòu)造了一種條理感 ，讀起來(lái)朗朗上口，簡(jiǎn)單易記。
二、問(wèn)題解決方法
范文
How to Protect the Environment
It's very important for us to protect the environment.Good environment can make people feel happy and fit. To
improve the environment means to improve our life.
To begin with, we shouldn't cut trees down. Instead,we should plant more trees and flowers around us.Secondly, we should stop factories from pouring waste water into the river and waste gas into the air.And whenever we see litter on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into dustbins. Never spit in public. Don't draw on public walls. We should also use shopping bags instead of plastic bags.
In a word, it's our duty to protect the environment. I hope our world will become more and more beautiful.
參考譯文
文用如何保護(hù)環(huán)境
保護(hù)環(huán)境對(duì)我們來(lái)說(shuō)是很重要的。好的環(huán)境可以讓人們感到幸福健康。改善環(huán)境意味普改善我們的生活。
首先，我們不應(yīng)該砍樹(shù)。相反地，我們應(yīng)該在我們周?chē)N更多的樹(shù)和花。其次，我們應(yīng)該陽(yáng)止工廠向河里倒廢水，向空氣里排放廢氣。無(wú)論何時(shí)我們見(jiàn)到地上有垃圾，我們都應(yīng)該檢起來(lái)，將它扔進(jìn)垃圾桶。不要在公眾場(chǎng)合吐痰。不要在公共墻上面畫(huà)。我們還應(yīng)該使用購(gòu)物袋，而不是塑料袋。
總之，保護(hù)環(huán)境是我們的責(zé)任。我希望我們的世界可以變得越來(lái)越美麗。
亮點(diǎn)詞匯
protect保護(hù)
fit適應(yīng) 健康的
to begin with首先
instead 相反地
dustbin 垃圾箱
in public在公眾場(chǎng)合
出彩句型
It's very important for us to... ....對(duì)我們來(lái)說(shuō)很重要。
To improve the environment means to improve our life.改善環(huán)境意味著改善我們的生活。
We should sop... from. ....我們應(yīng)該阻止......做......
Never spit in public不要在公眾場(chǎng)合吐痰。
We can also use... instead of..我們還應(yīng)該使用....而不是....
高分點(diǎn)評(píng)
保護(hù)環(huán)境本應(yīng)是一個(gè)大問(wèn)題， 涉及社會(huì)生活的方面面，但作者靈活地采用了以小見(jiàn)大的方法，從日常小事入手，從我們的身邊生活入手，告訴人們應(yīng)該如何保護(hù)環(huán)境，簡(jiǎn)非常具有現(xiàn)實(shí)性的文章。句型的交錯(cuò)使用，是文章出彩的另大原因，包括析使句的使用、首形式主語(yǔ)句的使用等。
三、學(xué)習(xí)方法
對(duì)學(xué)生而言，學(xué)習(xí)方法是一個(gè)十分熟悉的話題，然而在相關(guān)主題的寫(xiě)作中，學(xué)生需要對(duì)一些平時(shí)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)和做法進(jìn)行總結(jié)歸納。為了完成這類(lèi)習(xí)作，學(xué)生需要積累一定的語(yǔ)言素材和事例，來(lái)對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)方法進(jìn)行說(shuō)明和描述。
實(shí)踐案例
Write at least 60 words on the topic“How to be good English learners".
審題
這是一篇以“如何成為好的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)者”為題的全命題作文，題目明確了文章的主要內(nèi)容，即對(duì)如何學(xué)好英語(yǔ)給出一些說(shuō)明和建議。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)該圍繞"how to”展開(kāi)，對(duì)提高英語(yǔ)的具體做法進(jìn)行具體說(shuō)明。當(dāng)然，英語(yǔ)能力又可細(xì)分為listening、speaking、 reading 和writing等，在寫(xiě)作中，可選擇其中的幾個(gè)方面來(lái)依次進(jìn)行闡述，并舉例說(shuō)明。
段落結(jié)構(gòu)
本文可采用三段式，即“總一分總” 的寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu):
第一段(開(kāi)頭):引出話題，明確想要闡述的主要內(nèi)容，即學(xué)好英語(yǔ)的方法。
第二段(中心段):文章的中心部分，對(duì)文章的主題進(jìn)行具體闡述，可以圍繞兩到三個(gè)方式來(lái)展開(kāi)。在對(duì)某一個(gè)具體方式進(jìn)行閘述時(shí)， 需要提供相對(duì)應(yīng)的理由和依器，做說(shuō)明更具有說(shuō)服力。
第三段(結(jié)尾):文章的結(jié)尾段，對(duì)全文進(jìn)行總結(jié)概括或鼓勵(lì)建議，起到首尾呼應(yīng)的效果。
核心語(yǔ)匯
improve one's spoken/ written English 提高某人的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)/書(shū)寫(xiě)
practise English listening / reading skill as much as possible盡可能多地操練英語(yǔ)聽(tīng)力和閱讀
a long-term process of hard work 一個(gè)長(zhǎng)期努力的過(guò)程
pay attention to / focus on注意/關(guān)注
put in more time and effort to do ... 投人更多的時(shí)間和努力去做
.....make great progress in ..在.....上取得較大的進(jìn)步
get into/ develop a good habit of ..養(yǎng)成一....的好習(xí)慣
show great interest in .對(duì)...表現(xiàn)出很大的興趣.
have a better understanding of ..更好地理解.....
參考句型
The more I practice the language, the more likely I will improve my English.
我操練的越多，就越可能提高我的英語(yǔ)
Only in this way 1 by doing this can we improve our English.
只有通過(guò)這樣，我們才能提高英語(yǔ)。
I can not only improve my listening skills, but also have a relaxation by doing ..
通過(guò)....我不僅能提高聽(tīng)力技巧，還能放松自己。
習(xí)作1
Studying English is not easy, but we can still do something to improve it.
First of all, we should read more English stories or novels. When we meet with new words, we should keep on reading and try to guess the meaning instead of stopping to look them up. This is a good way to improve our reading skills. Besides, we should write more. It is a good idea for us to keep a diary in English. In this way, we can memorize more English words and expressions easily. Above all, we should practice speaking English as much as possible. Try to speak English with your friends or even foreigners, and you'll be more confident.
Where there is a will, there is a way. If we can keep practicing, our English will soon be greatly improved
點(diǎn)評(píng):
文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，段落完整。內(nèi)容上緊扣主題，分別從讀、寫(xiě)、說(shuō)三方面來(lái)進(jìn)行說(shuō)
明，所用的事例和論據(jù)貼合主題。用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式豐富多變，能正確使用祈使句以及狀語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句等。
習(xí)作2
I have been studying English for a long time and I always long to be a good English learner.
It's true that "interest" is the key to success, so I often watch English TV programs and movies in my spare time to cultivate my interest. In this way, I have not only practiced my listening skills but also relaxed myself. Meanwhile, to improve my speaking and pronunciation, I read many English essays and conversations and try to recite them, using a tape recorder to record them. More importantly, I find it extremely helpful to make friends with foreigners and talk with them in English. It can improve my listening and speaking skills at the same time. It also gives me more chances to think in English, which is essential in real communication.
Learning English is a long term process and I'm sure the more I practice the language,the more likely I will be better at it.
點(diǎn)評(píng):
本文結(jié)構(gòu)完整，內(nèi)容充實(shí)且貼切主題。正文部分層次清晰，所提的觀點(diǎn)和建議也不落俗套，較為出彩和新穎。作者的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力較強(qiáng)，用詞準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言生動(dòng)，句式豐富。
相關(guān)話題變式作文
題目
Write at least 60 words on the topic "I've learned a lot from ”
習(xí)作
As we all know, group work is one of the learning methods during our study in class. It is widely used by teachers and students, and I've learned a lot from group work.
It usually involves more than two students to do group work in class. The group is usually required to complete a task and make a report in the end. To complete it in time,the task will be divided into several parts at the beginning and each member is responsible for a certain part. During the process, the students should discuss the problems together.Everyone should take an active part and listen to others' opinions. It will be useful to write down some key points before they can make a report. While group work is an effective learning method, every participant should keep in mind that only by sharing and cooperation can we reach a satisfying conclusion.
Group work is especially helpful for me as I can learn a lot from others and learn how to contribute to the team.
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