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在最新的中小學(xué)生英語(yǔ)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中，初中階段的內(nèi)容與要求中所提到的基本素材，比如man and nature(人與自然)，social communication(社會(huì)交際)，social relationships(人際關(guān)系)等素材的寫(xiě)作會(huì)涉及到情感態(tài)度。
情感態(tài)度，往往通過(guò)敘事、寫(xiě)人和寫(xiě)物得以呈現(xiàn)，即以事記情、以人記情和以物記情。在寫(xiě)此類作文時(shí)，首先要明確文章所沙及的情感話題，然后再表達(dá)自己的體會(huì)成看法，最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)升華。在談看法和體會(huì)時(shí)，一般可以說(shuō)說(shuō)這 一情感態(tài)度的重要性、價(jià)值和意義，進(jìn)面談?wù)勅绾温鋵?shí)這一情感態(tài)度、 怎樣達(dá)成這情感目標(biāo)等等。寫(xiě)作時(shí)需注意，文章所傳達(dá)的態(tài)度是積極向上的。
素材儲(chǔ)備與寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)
常用表達(dá)
1.常用詞匯
nice極好的
fantastic 奇異的，難以相信的
amazed 吃驚的
annoyed 煩悶的
strict嚴(yán)肅的
smart 時(shí)尚的，聰明的
cute 可愛(ài)的
polite有禮貌的
perfect完美的
energetic 精力旺盛的
be happy I sad I upset / nervous / lonely高興/不安/緊張/孤獨(dú)
be pleased with對(duì).....感到高興
be worried about/ worry about擔(dān)心，擔(dān)
be/ get angry with sb.about sth.因某事生某人的氣
be disappointed at sb.對(duì)某人感到失望
be confident of sth./in sb.對(duì)某事/某人有信心
show love and concern for sb.愛(ài)護(hù)和關(guān)心某人
2常用句型
We are proud of..我們....為驕傲。
A friend can not only... but also...朋友不僅能....而且能....
My parents are all busy doing..all day.我的父母整日忙于......
I love my school, because it's like a big family.我們我的學(xué)校，因?yàn)樗拖駛€(gè)大家庭。
We are deeply grateful to you for your support.我們深深感謝你的支持。
It is a pity that we shall have to leave tomorrow.我們明天必須離開(kāi)，真是遺憾。
A good relationship between teachers and students is of great importance for our studies.
良好的師生關(guān)系對(duì)我們的學(xué)習(xí)很重要。
To build a good relationship, we should trust in each other.要建立良好的關(guān)系，我們應(yīng)該彼此信任。
They find it easy to communicate with their teachers.他們發(fā)覺(jué)很容易和老師溝通。
With the encouragement and support of my father, I have overcome many difficulties in our life.
在父親的鼓勵(lì)和支持下，我克服了生活中的許多困難。
二、萬(wàn)能模板
We need love. We also need to love....開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，陳述情感主題
She did a lot for me when1 was a child...以事為例，表達(dá)情感
When I grow up,I will do what I can do to make my mother happy....以將來(lái)的所作所為來(lái)感恩。
三、滿分作文
題目
母愛(ài)情深，父愛(ài)無(wú)價(jià)，師恩無(wú)限，友情可貴。在生活中，有許多值得感恩的人，請(qǐng)以Love for...
為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。(15分)
要求:
1.請(qǐng)將題目補(bǔ)充完整。
2用80-120詞寫(xiě)一篇完整的短文。描述你所感恩的人感恩的原因并列舉感恩的事例:你將為他/她做些什么來(lái)表達(dá)你的感激之情
提示:
1.開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名及其他相關(guān)真實(shí)信息。
3.凡照抄本試卷里的文章段落。 一律不得分。
Love for my mother
We need love. We also need to love others.
習(xí)作
Love for my mother
We need love. We also need to love others. The person I love most is my mother.My mother is 38 years old. She is of medium build with long black hair. She is kind2nd friendly. She is a worker in a shop. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.
She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study even though she didn't have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me. Mom is the busiest person in my family but she is always happy to do everything for us.Mum, I love you!
When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I’ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. I'll take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly,I will stay with her when I have free time. That's what she wants most, I think.
相關(guān)話題滿分作文解析
（一）
初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活讓人難忘，畢業(yè)之際，你校將舉行"感恩"為主題的英文演講比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇英文演講稿．
要點(diǎn)提示：
1．感謝父母，教我如何生活，……
2．感謝老師，教我許多知識(shí)，……
3．感謝同學(xué)，給我美好回憶，……
寫(xiě)作要求：
1．詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
2．可適當(dāng)增減詞匯，使語(yǔ)句流暢、完整；
3．文中不能透露個(gè)人真實(shí)信息．
Good morning， everyone． I'm glad to be here to speak in front of you． Here I'd like to thank everyone of you．
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That' s all． Thank you．
【寫(xiě)作思路】
在解答寫(xiě)作這類試題時(shí)，要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開(kāi)頭、展開(kāi)和結(jié)尾，設(shè)想幾個(gè)承上啟下的連詞，將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)草草記下，形成提綱，寫(xiě)時(shí)切忌結(jié)構(gòu)分散，廢話連篇，嚴(yán)重跑題．
【參考范文】
Good morning，everyone．I'm glad to be here to speak in front of you． Here I'd like to thank everyone of you．How time flies! We 'll graduate soon． I have so many words from my heart to say．At this moment，I want to say thanks to my parents，my teachers and my classmates．（開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題）
Dear dad and mom， you've taken good care of me in the past three years．When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me up．You taught me how to get on well with my classmates．（感謝父母親的關(guān)心，鼓勵(lì)……）
Dear teachers，thank you for teaching me so well．I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are．I still remember when I failed in an exam， you encouraged me to keep trying． 【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life， you told me to be brave． Because of your help，I have made much progress．（感謝老師在學(xué)習(xí)上和生活上的幫助）
Dear classmates， you've helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school．【高分句型二】 When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and give me some advice．I never forget the days when we studied together．（感謝同學(xué)的幫助，鼓勵(lì)，留下的美好回憶）
Words can't show my thanks to you!I'll remember all of you．
That' s all． Thank you．
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
（1）高分句型一：
I still remember when I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．我還記得當(dāng)我考試不及格時(shí)，你們鼓勵(lì)我繼續(xù)努力．
I still remember 后跟了賓語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句中包含了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，encourage sb to do sth鼓勵(lì)某人做某事
（2）高分句型二：
Dear classmates， you've helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school．親愛(ài)的同學(xué)們，自從我來(lái)這里以來(lái)，你們?cè)谖业膶W(xué)習(xí)中幫了我很多忙．
since自從，引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，主句用了現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時(shí)，從句用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)．
（二）
假如你叫李軍，你家于2017年被列為“精準(zhǔn)扶貧”的幫扶對(duì)象，在政府兩年的幫扶下，你家變化巨大。時(shí)值學(xué)校校報(bào)舉辦“家的變化”主題征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇70詞左右的短文，參加本次活動(dòng)。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
過(guò)去
1. 家庭貧困，房屋破舊。
2. 母親生病，為母擔(dān)憂，成績(jī)下滑。
現(xiàn)在
3. 住進(jìn)新房，母親康復(fù)，學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步。
4. 生活日趨改善。
要求: 1. 詞數(shù):70詞左右。短文開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2. 短文中必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，但不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名。
My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government, my family has changed a lot in the last two years. __________
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【參考范文】
My name is Li Jun． Thanks to the government， my family has changed a lot in the last two years． （點(diǎn)題）
My family used to be poor and we lived in a small and old house．【高分句型一】I don't have any new clothes．My grades dropped because my mother was sick and couldn't afford to see a doctor．Sometimes， I even want to leave school to support my family．（過(guò)去）Now， with the help of the government， great changes took place in our lives．【高分句型二】 We live in a new house．My mother is healthy．I can also set my mind on my study and make great progress in my study．Our life is improving day by day．（現(xiàn)在）
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
【高分句型一】
My family used to be poor and we lived in a small and old house．
我家以前很窮，我們住在一個(gè)小和舊房子．used to do sth過(guò)去常常做某事．
【高分句型二】
Now， with the help of the government， great changes took place in our lives．
現(xiàn)在，在政府的幫助下，巨大的變化發(fā)生在我們的生活．with the help of 在…的幫助下．
相關(guān)話題滿分作文必背
對(duì)父母心存感恩，因?yàn)樗麄兘o予我生命，讓我健康成長(zhǎng);對(duì)老師心存感恩，因?yàn)樗麄兘o了我教誨，讓我拋卻愚昧;對(duì)朋友心存感恩，因?yàn)樗麄兘o了我友愛(ài);對(duì)社會(huì)心存感恩，因?yàn)樯鐣?huì)給了我智慧和力量。自從國(guó)家實(shí)施義務(wù)教育以來(lái)，書(shū)本免費(fèi)，食宿免費(fèi)，而且還有貧困助學(xué)金等。面對(duì)這些，我們應(yīng)該心存感恩，感謝祖國(guó)對(duì)我們的厚望和期盼。讓我們永遠(yuǎn)記住：感謝父母、感謝老師、感謝朋友、感謝全社會(huì)!請(qǐng)以“感恩”為話題寫(xiě)一篇80—100字的作文。
參考范文
What should we thank?
The thankful great universe provides the environment of existence for us and give us sunlight, air, water and everything in keeping with us existence of space, bring storm to let us accept to toughen for us, bring to us mysterious let us look for.
The thankful parents give us the life, make us feel the merriment of the human life, feel the genuine feeling of the human life, feel the comity of the human life, feel happiness of the human life, also feel hardships and pain and sufferings of the human life!
The thankful teacher works with diligence and without fatigue everyday of teach, give us knowledge ability, and put on the wing which flies toward the ideal for us.
The thankful classmate and friend grow up with us and let us no longer stand alone in the itinerary of life.
The thankful our country provides us with free books, dormitory and food.
Whenever it is, we should keep a thankful heart towards everything existed. Only thus, can we become a useful man.
《中考英語(yǔ)作文：情感態(tài)度素材儲(chǔ)備與寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)》添加時(shí)間：2025-01-09；更新時(shí)間：2025-03-15
