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對(duì)責(zé)任的理解，通?？梢苑譃閮蓚€(gè)層面。一是個(gè)人對(duì)自己、家庭、社會(huì)應(yīng)該做的事、應(yīng)該盡的責(zé):二是個(gè)人沒(méi)有做好分內(nèi)之事面應(yīng)承擔(dān)的責(zé)任或不利后果。責(zé)任感是每個(gè)人必備的品格，它既包括對(duì)自己的責(zé)任，也包括對(duì)他人、對(duì)社會(huì)的責(zé)任。對(duì)中學(xué)生而言，努力學(xué)習(xí)、追求上進(jìn)就是對(duì)自己負(fù)責(zé)的表現(xiàn):規(guī)范自己的言行，遵守社會(huì)公約，就是對(duì)他人和社會(huì)負(fù)責(zé)的表現(xiàn)。
和責(zé)任有關(guān)的英語(yǔ)話題作文， 往往會(huì)涉及責(zé)任意識(shí)的重要性、如何提高責(zé)任心、我們的責(zé)任具體有哪些等方面，也可以事記情，即通過(guò)記敘一件事情來(lái)談?wù)剬?duì)責(zé)任心的體會(huì)。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意，對(duì)責(zé)任的態(tài)度應(yīng)該是積極的、正面的。
我們先來(lái)看一篇以責(zé)任為主題的英語(yǔ)文章，以供參考:
Responsibility and teenagers: what you need to know
During the teenage years, children's need for responsibility and autonomy gets stronger- - it's an important part of their path to young adulthood. To become capable adults,teenagers need to learn to make good decisions on their own.
The process of helping children take responsibility and make decisions is a key task for parents. You have an important role to play in training and supporting your child to be ready for more responsibility. This means you need to plan when and in what areas to let your child start making decisions.
How quickly you hand over responsibility to your teenager is up to you. It depends on many factors, including your own comfort level, your family and cultural traditions, and your child's maturity.
Ideally, you and your child should both feel comfortable with the shift of responsibility and the pace of change. Too much or too soon might leave you both feeling overwhelmed.Too little or too slow might end up with your child feeling impatient or rebellious.
相關(guān)話題作文示例指導(dǎo)
（一）
題目
Write a composition in at least 60 words on the topic Learn to be responsible". (iul“學(xué)會(huì)承擔(dān)責(zé)任”為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文。)
Questions for reference:
1. Why should we learn to be responsible?
2. What should we be responsible for?
3. How can we be responsible?
審題
這是一篇以“學(xué)會(huì)承擔(dān)責(zé)任”為題的全命題說(shuō)明文。題目的要求和指示非常清晰，即圍繞“why”、“what"和“how" 這三個(gè)問(wèn)題寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，我們需闡述責(zé)任的意義和重要性，明確責(zé)任的內(nèi)容，比如我們對(duì)家庭有哪些責(zé)任，對(duì)自已又有哪些責(zé)任，以及如何去具體地承擔(dān)、履行我們的責(zé)任。為了使行文更連貫，可以適當(dāng)使用一些過(guò)渡詞和連接詞，使文章更有層級(jí)感和邏輯性。同時(shí)也要注意時(shí)態(tài)，本文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，切忌使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)詳細(xì)敘述過(guò)去的某個(gè)事件或經(jīng)歷。
段落結(jié)構(gòu)
本文可采用三段式的寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu):
第一段(開(kāi)頭): 提出文章的主題，即作者想要闡述說(shuō)明的主要內(nèi)容。
第二段(中心段):是文章的中心部分，對(duì)文章的主題展開(kāi)說(shuō)明?？梢赃m當(dāng)使用 些過(guò)2黃渡詞，使文章層次分明， 銜接自然。
第三段(結(jié)尾):文章的結(jié)尾段，對(duì)全文進(jìn)行總結(jié)，概括事理，起到首尾呼應(yīng)的效果。
核心語(yǔ)匯
have a strong sense of responsibility有很強(qiáng)的責(zé)任感
take responsibility for sth.對(duì)....負(fù)責(zé)
be responsible for sth.對(duì)...負(fù)責(zé)
spare no efforts to do sth.不遺余力.....
be fully aware of...充分意識(shí).....
... play an important role......起重要作用
cultivate a strong sense of responsibility培養(yǎng)強(qiáng)烈的責(zé)任感
參考句型
It's your duty to do sth.....是你的責(zé)任。
The reason why .. is that ......的原因是.....
Without responsibility, we would ..沒(méi)有了責(zé)任，我們便會(huì)....
I have become more responsible by doing sth.通過(guò).....我變得更有責(zé)任心了。
We should bear it in mind that ...我們應(yīng)當(dāng)....牢記在心。
.Responsibility is one of the most important qualities that a person should have.
責(zé)任心是人所應(yīng)具備的重要品質(zhì)之一。
I didn't realize how important responsibility is until ..直到....我才意識(shí)到責(zé)任的重要性。
寫(xiě)作1
Learn to be responsible
It is an essential lesson for students to learn to be responsible.
How to learn it? In my opinion, the following two aspects are very important. First, we should learn to take some basic duties step by step from every details. Second, we should learn to admit every mistakes we have made. Because it will make us avoid making the same one next time as well as be trusted by other people.In a word, Abe responsible people means we have already grownup.
點(diǎn)評(píng):
這篇作文內(nèi)容比較完整，表達(dá)比較流暢。但是，根據(jù)題目?jī)?nèi)容和要求，寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)應(yīng)在于“why"、“what" 和“how", 而這篇作文的闡述不夠充分。此外，文中的一些語(yǔ)法問(wèn)題，比如every +名詞單數(shù)形式、because 連接原因狀語(yǔ)從句不可單獨(dú)成句，以及動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)等，可以通過(guò)檢查及時(shí)糾正。因此，建議該學(xué)生要盡量減少、更正以上語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，并對(duì)“為什么要學(xué)會(huì)承擔(dān)責(zé)任”這一問(wèn)題，進(jìn)行具體的闡述。
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習(xí)作2
Learn to be responsible
In my opinion, being responsible is the key to success. Without responsibility, we won't be considered reliable enough.
Though we are under 18 years old, we still need to learn to be responsible for ourselves. For example, we should learn to be responsible by sharing some housework in our family, such as washing the dishes, mopping the floor and so on. In this way, we can be more independent. 2In addition, we should learn to be responsible for our studies. We should work hard and try to learn from our own mistakes so that we can make greater progress.
In a word, 3it is a strong sense of responsibility that makes us trust worthy and successful.
點(diǎn)評(píng):
從結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)看，本文是典型的三段式作文，段落結(jié)構(gòu)完整，首尾呼應(yīng)。從內(nèi)容來(lái)看，本文開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山地提出了責(zé)任心的重要性，接著闡述了我們應(yīng)對(duì)什么負(fù)責(zé)，應(yīng)該如何去落實(shí)，內(nèi)容充實(shí)，層次分明。通篇時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用合理，用詞準(zhǔn)確，復(fù)合句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句的運(yùn)用使得文章句式富有變化?？偟膩?lái)說(shuō)，是一篇比較好的作文。
相關(guān)話題滿分作文必背
（一）
題目
Write at least 60 words on the topic: makes me responsible. (以“ 使我有責(zé)任心”為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)
提示:日常學(xué)習(xí)和生活中有很多事情有助于我們培養(yǎng)責(zé)任心。請(qǐng)舉個(gè)例子 加以說(shuō)明，并談?wù)勀愕捏w會(huì)。
范文
Doing housework makes me responsible
As a student, though I'm always busy with studies, doing housework is never a waste of time. It can not only make my parents less tired, but also help me become more responsible.Doing housework makes me responsible because I can learn the necessary life sill,such as cooking meals, washing clothes, tidying up the rooms. By doing housework,I can learn to be more independent, and to be responsible for myself. Besides, doing housework is a chance to show my gratitude and love to my parents. In this way, I can ease the burden of my parents, and be responsible for my family as well.
All in all, doing housework makes me responsible.
（二）
題目
Write at least 60 words about the topic "To be a responsible student!" (請(qǐng)以“做一個(gè)有擔(dān)當(dāng)?shù)膶W(xué)生!”為題，寫(xiě)篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)
(注意:短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。)
Situation:
新時(shí)代的學(xué)生都需要有責(zé)任意識(shí)，無(wú)論是在自己家中、在學(xué)校或者是在社會(huì)上都需要有擔(dān)當(dāng)。請(qǐng)你談?wù)勀愕恼J(rèn)識(shí)，并舉例說(shuō)明你的理解。
范文
To be a responsible student!
Having a strong sense of responsibility helps us to be better and better. To be a responsible student, I think we should do the following things.
First, as a student, studying is my major task. To be a responsible student, I should try my best to behave well at school. For example, I should listen to the teachers carefully, take notes when necessary and think actively in class.
Second, as a family member, I should be responsible for the family too. I should care for my father, mother and my grandparents and I should do some housework as well.
All in all, I should be responsible for not only myself but also my family members.
（三）
題目
Write at least 60 words about the topic "We should be responsible for ”以“我們應(yīng)該對(duì)
負(fù)責(zé)”為題，寫(xiě)篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。 )
范文
We should be responsible for ourselves
Since we are not little babies any more, I think we should take the responsibility for ourselves.
To begin with, we should learn to look after ourselves. We need to learn how to cook,how to wash clothes and how to manage our time and money wisely so that we can be more responsible. What's more, we need to study hard on our own. We should try hard to solve problems by ourselves instead of depending on others. We need to do homework independently.
In conclusion, as we are growing up, it is time for us to be responsible for ourselves.
《中考英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：責(zé)任英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作技巧》添加時(shí)間：2025-01-09；更新時(shí)間：2025-03-15
