中考英語(yǔ)作文指導(dǎo)：提綱類英語(yǔ)作文技巧
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相關(guān)話題題型解讀及寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)
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提鋼式作文和一般的文章不同， 提綱式作文在題目中就已經(jīng)為我們列出了提綱，確定了作文思路。提綱式作文考查作者的拓展能力、知識(shí)面、組織能力和作文能力。
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相關(guān)話題作文在寫(xiě)作時(shí)需分三步走。
1.認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)思路
認(rèn)真閱讀題目所列出的提綱，分析、揣摩出題者的用意，確立文章的要點(diǎn)，找準(zhǔn)寫(xiě)作的思路，即找到作文的突破點(diǎn)，圍繞提綱內(nèi)容盡量發(fā)散思維補(bǔ)充更多的內(nèi)容。
2.初步構(gòu)思，擬定提綱
整理、歸納能想到的信息，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并確定使用哪種體裁來(lái)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，確定人稱、時(shí)態(tài)等細(xì)節(jié)。
3.連詞成句，連句成文
根據(jù)題目所列提綱，用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語(yǔ)表達(dá)信息，再把詞語(yǔ)組成句子，最后使用適當(dāng)?shù)脑~語(yǔ)把句子串聯(lián)成文章。要注意連接順暢，適度使用過(guò)渡詞和過(guò)渡句。
相關(guān)話題寫(xiě)作素材儲(chǔ)備
寫(xiě)作模板
1.總起全文，概述題目給出的觀點(diǎn)，表明態(tài)度。
Some people argue that (觀點(diǎn)1). But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that (觀點(diǎn)2).As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.
2.證明自己的論點(diǎn)或觀點(diǎn)是正確的。
There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, (論據(jù)1).More importantly,______ (論據(jù) 2) . Most important of all, (論據(jù)3).
3.總結(jié)，提出建議或憧憬。
In summary,__ ( 總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)) .
必備詞匯
agree同意
disagree反對(duì)
in favor of支持
advantage優(yōu)點(diǎn)
reason原因
phenomenon現(xiàn)象
be concerned about擔(dān)心
solve the problem解決問(wèn)題
be aware of意識(shí)到
with the development of..隨著....的發(fā)展
必備句型
表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)
(1) .. has become 2 hot topic recently. Opinions towards it vary from person to person....近來(lái)已經(jīng)成為熱門(mén)話題，人們的看法不一。
(2) There is an argument among people concerning..人們....上各執(zhí)已見(jiàn)。
(3) Different people hold different ideas on...不同的人對(duì)....有不同的見(jiàn)解。
(4) When talking about... different people will have different answers.當(dāng)談到...時(shí)，不同的人有不同的答案。
(5) Nowadays, the majority of people think that.. Nevertheless, there are sill some people who think that...
如今絕大多數(shù)人認(rèn)為...然而，也有些人認(rèn).....
(6) Now it is commonly accepted tat... But I doubt whether..現(xiàn)在大家普遍認(rèn)為...我卻對(duì)此持懷疑態(tài)度。
(7) As far as I am concerned, I'd like to agree to the former.就我而言，我贊同前一種觀點(diǎn)。
(8) I agree to the latter opinion to some extent.在某種程度上，我同意后一一種觀點(diǎn)。
表示解釋或引出理由
(1 ) A number of factors could account for the phenomenon, but the followings are the most critical ones.
有很多因素導(dǎo)致了這種現(xiàn)象，但是下文講的因素是最重要的。
(2 ) There are many reasons responsible for this instance, and the followings are the typical ones.導(dǎo)致這種現(xiàn)象的原因有很多，以下所展示的原因是其中比較有代表性的。
(3) The causes for the problem go much deeper.
這一問(wèn)題(現(xiàn)象、趨勢(shì))背后有著更深層次的原因。
(4) There are many reasons that can explain this case.有很多原因可以解釋該問(wèn)題。
(5) 1 think there are two main reasons.我認(rèn)為有兩個(gè)主要原因。
(6) A number of factors could account for / lead to the change of..
解釋引起......變化的原因有很多。
(7) Perhaps the main / primary reason...也許，主要/根本的原......
對(duì)事件、觀點(diǎn)的總結(jié)
(1) In spite of these disadvantages, I think... does more good than harm to people,盡管有種種不好，但我認(rèn)...對(duì)人們產(chǎn)生的作用利大于弊。
(2) Comparing the two sides, there is no denying that ...has produced great effects on society. 對(duì)比兩方面，不得不....對(duì)社會(huì)產(chǎn)生了很大的影響。
(3) To conclude, I would say that..總之，我認(rèn)為.....
(4) In my opinion, we should...就我看來(lái)，我們應(yīng)......
(5) Only in this way can we...只有這樣我們才能....
(6) In my opinion, if it is in proper use, it may bring us..
在我看來(lái)，要是運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，它會(huì)帶給我們....
(7) To sum up, we should deal with it effectively總之，我們要有效率地處理它。
(8) Although there are many arguments against it, we must realize that the value of. depends on how it is used.
盡管有很多反對(duì)的意見(jiàn)，但們必須意識(shí)..的價(jià)值在于我們?nèi)绾问褂盟?/p>
(9) In a word, if everyone works together, we can make a difference to the world.總之，如果我們大家一-起努力，我們就可以對(duì)世界產(chǎn)生影響。
相關(guān)話題作文示例解析
（一）
題目
根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容提示，合理展開(kāi)想象，寫(xiě)-篇不少于80詞的文章。1.你的朋友生病了;
2.同學(xué)和我都向他表示關(guān)心;
3.你從這件事中得到的啟發(fā)。
范文
Last week, my friend Li Han was badly ill so he couldn't go to school. My classmates and I were very worried about him.
①So, we went to visit Li Han the other day. 0 We sent Li Han our good wishes and beautiful flowers. ②Since the final exam is to come, we offered to help Li Han with his lessons after his recovery so that he wouldn't fail the final exam.
Li Han was grateful for what we had done.③And what I learned from this is that the world is full of love, warmth and peace.
譯文
上周，我的朋友李漢病得很重，所以不能來(lái)上學(xué)。同學(xué)們和我都很擔(dān)心他。
所以前幾天我們?nèi)タ戳死顫h。我們給李漢帶去了我們的祝福和美麗的鮮花。因?yàn)槠谀┛荚噷⒔?，所以我們決定等李漢康復(fù)之后幫他補(bǔ)習(xí)功課，這樣他就不會(huì)在期末考試時(shí)考砸。
對(duì)于我們所做的李漢很感動(dòng)。我也從這件事中學(xué)到，世界是充滿愛(ài)、溫暖和和睦的。
滿分點(diǎn)評(píng)
本文主要按照事情發(fā)生的順序來(lái)寫(xiě)，各部分銜接得很自然，環(huán)環(huán)緊扣。①用so承接上文，同時(shí)引出下文，使段落之間過(guò)渡自然。
②since引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句，so that引導(dǎo)目的狀語(yǔ)從句。
③本句用了what引導(dǎo)介詞賓語(yǔ)從句，表示感激的內(nèi)容。
（二）
初中生活，精彩紛呈?；厥走^(guò)去你是否感到充實(shí)和快樂(lè)，展望未來(lái)你是否對(duì)高中生活充滿期待，請(qǐng)結(jié)合以下提示談?wù)勀愕母形颉?/p>
提示：1. 初中階段你有哪些收獲；
2. 初中階段你有哪些遺憾或未實(shí)現(xiàn)的愿望；
3. 你對(duì)未來(lái)的高中生活有哪些計(jì)劃或打算。
要求：1. 80-100詞，首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 字跡工整，語(yǔ)言流暢，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，邏輯清晰。
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. ____________________________________________
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【寫(xiě)作思路】
這是一篇提綱類0，初中生活，精彩紛呈?；厥走^(guò)去你是否感到充實(shí)和快樂(lè)，展望未來(lái)你是否對(duì)高中生活充滿期待，請(qǐng)結(jié)合以下提示談?wù)勀愕母形颍瑒?dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語(yǔ)，句式等問(wèn)題。通過(guò)閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問(wèn)題比較少。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫(xiě)出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
【參考范文】
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. Since I came to the junior high school, I’ve gained confidence and happiness. With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made some good friends.
However, there is still something that I feel sorry about. Because I was busy with my schoolwork, I couldn’t keep on reading. Once in a while, I felt so upset and anxious that I quarreled with my parents.
In the future, I’ll try to make good use of time and spend more free time reading books. Meanwhile, I’ll get on well with my parents. I believe I’ll have a happy and colorful life.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I've also made some good friends.等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。
（三）
每年的 6 月 6 日是我國(guó)的“愛(ài)眼日”，可見(jiàn)保護(hù)中小學(xué)生的視力非常重要，為此，學(xué)校將在英語(yǔ)文化節(jié)期間舉行一場(chǎng)“愛(ài)眼日”英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿，談?wù)勀銓?duì)保護(hù)視力重要性的認(rèn)識(shí)和建議。
內(nèi)容如下：
1. 保護(hù)視力的重要性（請(qǐng)寫(xiě) 1 點(diǎn)）；
2. 對(duì)保護(hù)視力的建議：（1）閱讀時(shí)注意用眼衛(wèi)生；（2）少用電子產(chǎn)品；（3）常看綠色植物；（4）做眼保健操；（5）多做戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)。
要求如下：
1. 結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)通順，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，書(shū)寫(xiě)清晰；
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的人名，學(xué)校名等信息；
3. 詞數(shù) 80 左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：
Sight Day 愛(ài)眼日；electronic products 電子產(chǎn)品；eye-protecting exercises 眼保健操
Dear friends,
June 6 is our country’s Sight Day. ____________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
【寫(xiě)作思路】
本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)保護(hù)視力重要性的認(rèn)識(shí)和建議。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。
【參考范文】
Dear friends,
June 6 is our country’s Sight Day. As we all know, eyes are windows of the soul. Everyone understands the importance of the eyes. But now more and more students are getting near sighted. So how to protect eyes still remains a question. Here is some advice on how to protect your eyesight.
You should not keep your eyes working for two long when reading, you should keep the book about a foot away from you. After reading for an hour or two, you’d better have a rest by working in the distance or looking at the green plants to make your eye relax. You ought to remember not to read in dim light or in the sun. Don’t read in a moving bus or in bed. Besides, try to use less electric products. What’s more, doing eye-protecting exercises will help you keep good eye sight. Last but not least, we can also try to do more exercise in our spare time.
Only by doing these simple things can we keep good eyesight.
【點(diǎn)睛】
寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：
認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。
構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān) 寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。
初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。
修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。
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