中考英語書面表達(dá)常見錯誤分析(十) 人稱和時態(tài)誤用

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        人稱和時態(tài)的誤用是英語書面表達(dá)中最為常見的錯誤。英文寫作對人稱和時態(tài)的要求很嚴(yán)格。常用的時態(tài)有八種之多,初中階段最常見有六種動詞時態(tài)。在寫作時,英語初學(xué)者要準(zhǔn)確判斷一個動作應(yīng)該用哪種時態(tài)來表示。首先要判斷動作發(fā)生的時間是現(xiàn)在、過去還是將來,注意動作是在進(jìn)行還是已經(jīng)完成等,據(jù)此確定該用什么時態(tài);然后,要熟練掌握各種時態(tài)所必須使用的謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)和詞形變化;整篇文章完成后,要檢查“時態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致”等是否正確。這樣就可以少犯錯誤。 <a hReF=http://www.zequeka.cn/miNiform.html>家長推薦的蘇州吳中作文輔導(dǎo)班</a>

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        電腦是當(dāng)代的高科技產(chǎn)品(a high-tech product),在我們的生活中越來越普及,幾乎深入到每個家庭。電腦可以幫我們處理(handle)很多事情。列舉一些事例,寫一篇關(guān)于電腦在日常生活中的用途的文章,說明電腦的利弊。 <a hReF=http://www.zequeka.cn/miNiform.hTml>家長推薦的蘇州吳中作文輔導(dǎo)班</a>

習(xí)作實(shí)況
        The computer — a high-tech product, has become so popular that they are (1) seen in almost every family. It is playing an important role in our everyday life. The computer will help (2) us handle many matters: official business, chat online, study, sending e-mails, long-distance education and entertainment such as listening to music and watching video.

But we also know that the computer was (3) bad for our eyes, especially for the young kids’. Now there are more and more children who have to wear glasses in order to see clearly. Many children become near-sighted, and they are doing worse and worse in their studies because they spend too much time playing computer games. So if you will want (4) to have beautiful and bright eyes and gain (獲取) some useful knowledge when we (5) are young, the most important thing you will do is to plan your time carefully and well. Only in this way can you have a bright future.

精講點(diǎn)撥
        (1)作者在文章開頭使用了the computer一詞,來代表電腦這一類產(chǎn)品。因此,that從句中如果使用they are,就和句首的主語the computer(單數(shù)名詞)不一致,因此應(yīng)將they are 改為it is。
        (2)眾所周知,電腦在我們的日常生活中正在起著很重要的作用。因此,不能理解成電腦將要幫助我們處理很多事務(wù),而是現(xiàn)在(每天)電腦都在幫助人們處理日常事務(wù),這種help是經(jīng)常的,反復(fù)發(fā)生的,應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時。因此,要改為 helps。
        (3)我們看到的事實(shí)是,電腦在為人們做了大量的好事的同時,也給人們帶來了麻煩。而且,這種困擾現(xiàn)在就存在,即:電腦天天在損害我們的健康和眼睛。應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時is。

(4) want一詞一般沒有將來時。另外,本句是由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句,按英語的時態(tài)規(guī)則“主句用一般將來時,從句應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時”。 將will want改為want。
        (5)將we改為you。從本句的條件句可以看出,“如果你在年輕的時候,既想學(xué)到知識,又想擁有一雙明亮的眼睛,你就記住,玩電腦可不要超越底線?！痹谶@里,前后句的人稱要保持一致。

精彩例文
         The computer — a high-tech product, has become so popular that it is seen in almost every family. It is playing an important role in our everyday life. The computer helps us handle many matters: official business, chat online, study, sending e-mails, long-distance education and entertainment such as listening to music and watching video.
         But we also know that the computer is bad for our eyes, especially for the young kids’. Now there are more and more children who have to wear glasses in order to see clearly. Many children become near-sighted, and they are doing worse and worse in their studies because they spend too much time playing computer games. So if you want to have beautiful and bright eyes and gain some useful knowledge when you are young, the most important thing you will do is to plan your time carefully and well. Only in this way can you have a bright future.