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假如你是陽(yáng)光中學(xué)的李華，每周五下午你校開設(shè)校本必修課(required course)與選修課(elective course),請(qǐng)介紹必修課Travel of Science, 根據(jù)個(gè)人情況選擇一門選修課并說(shuō)明理由；同時(shí)，對(duì)你的選擇的課程提出建議。 <a hRef=http://www.zequeka.cn/miNiform.html>蘇州作文培訓(xùn)</a>
Required course | Elective Course | |||
Subject | Travel of science l introducing scientists and inventions | Subject | Photography l taking photos | Gardening l growing flowers |
Teacher | a professor | Teacher | a young reporter | 4:00 p.m.-4:45 p.m. School’s garden |
Time & Place | l 2:30 p .m.- 3:15 p.m. l school hall | Time & Place | l 4:00 p.m.-4:45 p.m. l City Park | An old gardener |
Tip | take notebooks and pens | Tip | Take cameras | tools offered by school |
要求：
1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括必修課及一門選修課的所有信息；
2. 對(duì)你所選擇的一門選修課說(shuō)明理由，并對(duì)其提出建議；
3. 文章不少于90詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
4. 語(yǔ)意通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；
5. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等信息。
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【寫作思路】
這篇作文要求我們對(duì)學(xué)校周五下午安排的必修課和選修課程進(jìn)行介紹。審題可知，短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱為主來(lái)敘述。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個(gè)方面：首先介紹必修課程Travel of science，題目中利用表格的形式展示了這個(gè)課程的主要內(nèi)容、老師、上課的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)以及小提示，學(xué)生們根據(jù)表格用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)即可；接下來(lái)應(yīng)根據(jù)個(gè)人情況，從表格中提供的兩門選修課中選擇一個(gè)，闡述自己的理由，并對(duì)該課程提出一些建議。這一部分需要學(xué)生們展開想象，結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際生活，補(bǔ)充具體的內(nèi)容，再用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先短文應(yīng)包括題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，而且注意分清層次和結(jié)構(gòu)，使敘述清晰、完整、有條理。合理安排各部分內(nèi)容，主次分明。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫完整的句子?？梢院?jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式和結(jié)構(gòu)，提升作文檔次。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、表達(dá)自然。
【參考范文】
Every Friday afternoon, our school offers required and elective courses. Travel of science is a required course. We can learn about some scientists and their inventions. I think it will be interesting. The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture. So you mustn't miss it. The course is from 2:30 p.m. to 3:15 p.m. in the school hall. You'd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points. There are two elective courses, Photography and Gardening. I would like to choose the former because I like taking photos. I think I can learn more skills in the class. The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter. So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other. I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了學(xué)校開設(shè)的校本必修課程，并從兩個(gè)選修課中選擇了自己喜歡的一個(gè)，介紹了自己選擇這門課程的原因，并對(duì)該課程提出了自己的建議。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，符合題目要求，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。敘述清晰、有條理，理由充分、合情理。提出的建議也比較中肯，符合該情景。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，短文中用到了簡(jiǎn)單句、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)，增強(qiáng)了文章的表現(xiàn)力。文中較好的短語(yǔ)和句式有We can learn about some scientists and their inventions.、The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture.、You'd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points、The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter.、 So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other.、 I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors.等等。
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"你養(yǎng)我長(zhǎng)大，我陪你變老．"父母親一直在為我們的成長(zhǎng)默默付出，成長(zhǎng)要學(xué)會(huì)感受愛、回報(bào)愛．今天你即將畢業(yè)是向父母表達(dá)感激的好機(jī)會(huì)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下所給要點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文．
要點(diǎn)：
（1）給我生命，一直照顧我成長(zhǎng)；
（2）努力工作，為我提供良好的生活和教育條件；
（3）擁有愛心，教我學(xué)會(huì)……；
（4）今天，我要為你們……（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點(diǎn)）．
注意事項(xiàng)：
（1）詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名、人名等信息．
You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth. __
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【寫作思路】
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You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth．You give me life and take care of me all the time．（給我生命，一直照顧我成長(zhǎng)） When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me． 【高分句型一】 In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education，you always work hard from morning till night． （努力工作，為我提供良好的生活和教育條件）Everyone knows you are the persons full of love．You are ready to help people in need．It is you who teach me to be a kind person．【高分句型二】（擁有愛心，教我做慈愛的人）
Dad and mum，today I'll cook dinner for you．I'll go for a walk with you after dinner．（今天要為父母做的兩件事）I hope you will be happy and healthy forever!
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
【高分句型一】
When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me．當(dāng)我的學(xué)習(xí)和生活有問(wèn)題時(shí)，你總是耐心地幫助我，鼓勵(lì)我．
when當(dāng)……時(shí)候，引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，adj +enough +to do sth 足夠地……可以做某事，
【高分句型二】
It is you who teach me to be a kind person．是你教會(huì)我做一個(gè)善良的人．
本句使用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句It is +被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that/who …
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哈佛大學(xué)的一項(xiàng)研究表明，愛做家務(wù)的孩子更容易體驗(yàn)到幸福感，更有前途．請(qǐng)你以"Help with Some Housework"為題寫一篇8o詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，描述你平時(shí)所做的家務(wù)以及你對(duì)做家務(wù)的看法．
參考詞匯：
Chores | take out the rubbish sweep the floor wash the clothes do the dishes water the flowers cook breakfast/lunch … … |
Opinions | Pros：develop our independence take care of ourselves … Cons：a waste of time no need to … … |
注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名．
Help with Some Housework
It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy． As for me， I ___________________________________________________________________________________________
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【參考范文】
Help with Some Housework
It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy． As for me， I often help them do housework． I take out the rubbish away and sweep the floor in the morning． I help my mother cook the lunch．I always wash clothes and do the dishes
for my family． My parents are very happy． Besides， Watering the flowers is also my duty． I like them very much and take good care of them． After supper， I always wash dishes．（平時(shí)所作家務(wù)）
I think it can develop our independence and take good care of ourselves．【高分句型一】 In a word， the more housework I do， the happier my parents will be．（家務(wù)的看法）【高分句型二】
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每年十月份，越來(lái)越多的游客來(lái)本溪賞楓葉．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，說(shuō)說(shuō)如何給游客可留下"景美人更美"的好印象，從自身做起，做文明本溪人！
提示詞：beautiful views美麗的景色
要求：
1．語(yǔ)意連貫，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范．
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名與校名．
3． 短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
How to be a polite citizen
Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves （楓葉） in October．________________________________
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【參考范文】
How to be a polite citizen
Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves （楓葉） in October．Let's leave the visitors a good impression not only for the beautiful views ，but also as a Benxi citizen．How to be a polite citizen？（開篇點(diǎn)明題意）
First， We must be friendly．Use"please，OK，welcome" with smile when you talk with visitors． Besides， we should be ready to help others（高分句型一）．Try to be a helpful person． If visitors need us，we should help them．What's more， we should follow the rules． For example，we mustn't step on the grass or pick flowers． We mustn't drop litter carelessly．At last ，we also need to behave well in public．We stand for our city Benxi in public．So it needs our good manners．（從四個(gè)方面展開對(duì)成為文明市民的論述）
Why not do as above points？Let's try our best to be a polite citizen（高分句型二）．（結(jié)尾倡議大家成為文明市民）
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假定你是李華，收到英國(guó)筆友 Harry 的郵件，獲悉他在機(jī)器人制作比賽中獲獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容給他回復(fù)。詞數(shù) 80 左右。
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參考詞匯：congratulation
祝賀注意事項(xiàng)：
1. 回復(fù)郵件時(shí)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，郵件格式已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；
3. 請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Harry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【寫作思路】
此類觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)和原因說(shuō)明類的作文，在我們?nèi)喌闹锌紡?fù)習(xí)中進(jìn)行過(guò)系統(tǒng)的訓(xùn)練。 學(xué)生可根據(jù)日常所授的寫作模板，對(duì)全文內(nèi)容及結(jié)構(gòu)進(jìn)行合理安排。
（1）結(jié)構(gòu)：開頭表示祝賀，使用所給提示詞；
（2）正文要點(diǎn)：表達(dá)興趣并說(shuō)明原因，至少兩點(diǎn)（如熱點(diǎn)科技，對(duì)科技創(chuàng)新的興趣，對(duì)生活的改變，對(duì)醫(yī)療、救援 的幫助等）；
寫作時(shí)從單詞拼寫到句子結(jié)構(gòu)，從時(shí)態(tài)到語(yǔ)態(tài)，都應(yīng)該注意統(tǒng)一。在打草稿時(shí)把需要用到的關(guān)鍵詞、高級(jí)句式、關(guān)鍵結(jié)構(gòu)甚至注意事項(xiàng)等簡(jiǎn)單地寫在題目旁邊，以盡量規(guī)避錯(cuò)誤。
【參考范文】
Dear Harry,
Congratulations！How glad I am to share your good news!
I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future, they will play more important roles in our daily life. Plus, I am dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home. You see, my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.
Hoping you will make greater progress.
Yours,
Li Hua
《中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)高分作文攻略》添加時(shí)間：2025-01-13；更新時(shí)間：2025-03-15
