中考英語書面表達(dá)常見錯誤分析(十二) 母語干擾

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         許多同學(xué)在用英語寫作時很容易受漢語的影響而寫錯句子,即寫所謂的Chinglish。這是書面表達(dá)中常見的錯誤之一。
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         請你根據(jù)實際情況,以“My School Life”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。
【習(xí)作實況】
                                               My School Life
      I’m a middle school student. Although our school is very usual (1), but (2) it’s beautiful in my heart. The school is covered with tall trees and beautiful flowers.

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     The here (3) air is very fresh. In the morning, lots of schoolmates (4) early (5) go to school and do some exercises. Usually we have breakfast after our first class. All of the students take morning exercises on the playground after two classes. After that, someone (6) are reading in the library, others are playing and talking on the playground. We have three classes in the afternoon and do some sports that we like after school and go home at about 6:00. Oh! How colorful my school life is!
【精講點撥】
(1)作者顯然想表達(dá)“學(xué)校很一般或普通”,此處最好用common一詞,而usual意思是“通常的”。

(2)受漢語“雖然……但是……”的影響,作者將這一意思直接譯成英語“although…but…”,而在英語同一句子中只用這兩個詞的其中之一表示漢語的“雖然……但是……”。
(3)here是副詞,用來修飾名詞時應(yīng)位于被修飾詞之后。
(4)schoolmate指校友、同學(xué),通常不包含自己在內(nèi),改為students好些,指全校學(xué)生。
(5)“早早到?！钡挠⒄Z表達(dá)是go to school early, 副詞early應(yīng)位于句末。
(6)someone意思是“某人”,要改為some students。
【精品范文】
                                            My School Life
      I’m a middle school student. Although our school is very common, it’s beautiful in my heart. The school is covered with tall trees and beautiful flowers.
      The air here is very fresh. In the morning, lots of students go to school early and do some exercises. Usually we have breakfast after our first class. All the students take morning exercises on the playground after two classes. After that, some students are reading in the library, others are playing and talking on the playground. We have three classes in the afternoon and do some sports that we like after school and go home at about 6:00. Oh! How colorful my school life is!