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中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤分析(五) 用詞不當(dāng)

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        文章構(gòu)思新穎、結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)固然重要,但它只是文章的骨架。要充實(shí)內(nèi)容,就得有一定的遣詞造句的功力,在此基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)就顯得尤為重要了。
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        李華平時(shí)總是忙于功課,很少做家務(wù)。母親節(jié)這一天,她想幫媽媽做飯,卻不小心切了手指,本想讓媽媽在節(jié)日期間好好休息,卻未能如愿。以“On Mother’s Day”為題寫一篇詞數(shù)為80-100的短文。要求條理清晰、意思連貫、語(yǔ)句通順、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確。
【習(xí)作實(shí)況】
                                            On Mother's Day
      I'm usually busy with my studies and do few (1) housework when I come back from school. It was Mother's Day yesterday. I wanted Mum to have a good rest and I did all instead (2) her. I got up early yesterday morning and bought a lot of vegetables, fish and meat in the market. I washed them and then began to cook. I was sure I could do as well like (3) Mum. Bad luck! I cut one of my fingers and cried out. Mum and Dad rushed into (4) and Mum asked Dad to take me to the hospital. When we came back, dinner (5) ready. I felt sorry and said, “Mum had a busy Mother's Day again!”
【精講點(diǎn)撥】
(1)housework是不可數(shù)名詞,應(yīng)用little來(lái)修飾。(2)instead是副詞,后不能接賓語(yǔ),這兒應(yīng)該用instead of。

(3)like雖然可用作介詞,意為“像”,但這兒是as... as...結(jié)構(gòu),因此此處應(yīng)改為as well as...。
(4)into是介詞,其后要接賓語(yǔ),但句中無(wú)賓語(yǔ),所以改為副詞in。
(5)ready是形容詞,不能單獨(dú)作謂語(yǔ),所以其前要加was。
【精品范文】
                                       On Mother’s Day
I'm usually busy with my studies and do little housework when I come back from school. It was Mother's Day yesterday. I wanted Mum to have a good rest and I did all instead of her. I got up early yesterday morning and bought a lot of vegetables, fish and meat in the market. I washed them and then began to cook. I was sure I could do as well as Mum. Bad luck! I cut one of my fingers and cried out. Mum and Dad rushed in and Mum asked Dad to take me to the hospital. When we came back, dinner was ready. I felt sorry and said, “Mum had a busy Mother's Day again!”