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地點介紹類的寫作對象涉及公園、博物館等具體的場所，也包括城市、國家等。對一般性的場所進行介紹，首先要注意安排好介紹順序。空間順序使用居多，常用的有：從外到內(nèi)，從左到右，由遠及近，由高到低，從整體到局部等。也可以以參觀者的行蹤為順序進行介紹。而對于城市、國家等，介紹層面通常包括位置、歷史、名勝古跡、今昔變化等。不論是哪種類型，最后在結尾處通常都需要作者發(fā)表一下個人觀點或意見。
【實例講解】
假如下圖是你學校的平面建筑示意圖。請你根據(jù)所給提示，以"My School" 為題，寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文，介紹你學校的建筑布局情況并談談你對學校的看法。
【分析】
該寫作任務要求介紹學校的建筑布局，屬于地點介紹類的說明文。寫作前先確定介紹順序，可以從校門開始，按照從前到后、從左到右的順序依次介紹。談談對學校的看法是寫作任務中明確要求的，可以表達自己的喜愛之情，也可以表達不滿或意見等。
My School
This is a map of my school. Walking into the school gate, you can see a big playground in the middle of the school. Behind it is the teaching building. On the left side of the playground, you can see the office building. A stadium is to the north of it.In the northwest corner is the dining hall. On the right side of the playground,there is the science building. And the library is located in the northeast corner.
I love my school. It's the best school I have ever seen.
高分突破:
My School
This is a map of my school. The school gate faces the south. Two lines of big tall trees stand on each side of the gate, welcoming every student. Right in front of the gate is a big playground. It is a center for fun. Behind the playground is the teaching building where I study. On the left side of the playground, you can see the office building.
And a stadium is to the north of it. In the northwest corner stands the dining hall. Now let's turn to the right side of the playground. As you can see, there are two buildings. The science building is near the school gate and the library is located in the northeast corner.
I love my school. It is not only a place for learning, but also a place for fun.
【高分揭秘】
1. 習作按照從前到后、從左到右的順序依次介紹了學校的建筑布局，結構緊湊，層次合
理。
2. 習作中用了不同的詞語來描寫位置關系，避免了單調(diào)和重復，如in front of, behind, to the north, in the northwest corner, near the school gate等。
3. 習作不僅介紹了建筑布局，也穿插了一些個性化的、情感化的表達，使習作生動有
趣，如welcoming every student, a center for fun等。
【素材積累】
1. 詞匯
位置：on the right / left, in front of, behind, at the foot of, on the top of, near, next to, close to, inside, outside, across, through
存在：be, lie, stand, locate
特征：large, small, huge, deep, long, modern, ancient, popular, attractive
2. 句子
★ I like my school very much and I am proud that I belong to it.
★ My favorite thing about my city is the fact that it has so many wonderful parks.
★ The museum is just like a huge book to tell you the history of China.
★ My hometown has left many soft and sweet memories in my heart.
★ It's beauty is beyond words. I really hope you could get a chance to come and experience it for yourself.
相關話題寫作模擬練習
（一）
每年的六一兒童節(jié)都會有很多孩子前往上海迪斯尼樂園游玩。假如你是一名樂園的志愿者，請你根據(jù)下列表格中的要點提示，用英語向孩子們介紹樂園并提醒他們文明游園。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2. 短文須包括所有要點，不要逐詞解釋，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；
3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息。
參考詞匯：theme n.主題；firework n.煙火
Good morning, children!
As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland, I'd like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it.
The park is worth your visit. I hope you will have fun.
習作范文
Good morning, children!
As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland. I'd like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it.
The Disneyland is in the east of Shanghai. You can get there by underground. It's made up of six theme parks. You can join in different kinds of activities there, such as enjoying wonderful musicals or plays. Also, there' re lots of nice presents in the shopping area for you to choose. At night, you can watch fireworks.
However, it's important to behave well in the park. Littering isn't allowed. You should keep the park clean. Remember to wait for your turn anytime. Moreover, it's impolite to shout loudly in public.
The park is worth your visit. I hope you will have fun.
（二）
假如你是李強，有一天在上學路上，你看到趙王河公園河岸邊的道路損壞嚴重，一些彩磚不見去向，影響人們的出行。請用英語給China Daily 山東菏澤頻道寫一封信，反映這一問題，并提出你的看法和建議。
(一)參考詞匯destroy毀壞；color bricks彩磚；disappear消失；repair修復；take measures采取措施；protect保護；public facilities公共設施
(二)其他要求：100字左右，開頭和結尾己給出，不計入總字數(shù)。
Dear Editor,
I'm a high school student.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Qiang
習作范文
Dear Editor,
I'm a high school student. I'm writing to tell you something bad about Zhaogonghe Park. One day, on my way to school, I found that the road along the bank of Zhaogonghe Park was destroyed badly. Some color bricks disappeared. It is said that some bricks were thrown into the river and some were taken home by villagers nearby. The road has had a bad influence on people's coming and going. I think it should be repaired as soon as possible. We should take measure to protect the road. It is important and necessary to take good care of the public facilities in the park.
I hope China Daily can care about the matter and give us some advice on how to protect the park.
Li Qiang
相關話題滿分作文解析
（一）
Dear Laura,
Thanks for your letter.
Now I'll tell you something about our school and our school
life. Our school is very big, with over 2, 500 students and about
200 teachers. There are many high buildings in it. On the campus,
you can see many green trees and beautiful flowers. In our school, there are many clubs. Every afternoon, we can take part in all kinds of activities, such as basketball, table tennis, and painting. We can read newspapers and books in the school library. And we can also go online in the school computer labs. I've been in the school for more than two years. I am deeply attracted by everything in the school.
Yours,
Vera
參考譯文
親愛的勞拉:
謝謝你的來信。
現(xiàn)在我將跟你說說我們的學校和校園生活。我們的學校很大，有超過2500名學生和大約200位老師。學校里有很多高的建筑物。在校園里，你可以看到很多綠樹和美麗的花朵。在我們的學校，有很多社團。每天下午，我們可以參加各種各樣的活動，比如說籃球、乒乓球和畫面。我們可以在學校圖書館里看報紙和書。我們還可以在學校的電腦房上網(wǎng)。我已經(jīng)在這個學校超過兩年了。我被學校里的一切深深地吸引著。
你的，
薇拉
亮點詞匯
building 建筑物
campus .校園
take part in參加
go online上網(wǎng)
出彩句型
I'll tell you something about..我要告訴你一些關.....
There are many buildings in it.校園里有很多高的建筑物。
We can take part in all kinds of activities. 我們可以參加各種各樣的活動。
I am deeply attracted by...我被...深深地吸引著。
高分點評
本文采取動靜結合的描述手法，向讀者展現(xiàn)了“我” 的校園的美麗風光以及豐富多彩的校園生活，條理清晰，清楚具體。此外，句式、短語的多樣運用，也是一大成功之處。
（二）
Australia
Australia lies on the west of the Pacific Ocean. It covers an area of 7.6 million square kilometers. And it has a population of over 10 million.
Most of them live in the east of the country by the sea,because the weather in those places is more favorable and comfortable. In the center of Australia, there is a large area of desert, Canberra, the capital of Australia, is a beautiful city. Sydney is one of the biggest cities in Australia. It has many places of interest. The Sydney Opera House is famous all over the world.
If you ever visit Australia, you will be fascinated by it.
參考譯文
澳大利亞
澳大利亞位于太平洋的西邊。它有著760萬平方公里的面積。它還有著超過一千萬的人口。
很多人住在澳大利亞東面的海邊，因為那些地方的天(更加適宜和舒服。在澳大利亞的中部，有很大面積的沙漠?？芭嗬拇罄麃喌氖锥?，是一個漂亮的城市。悉尼是澳大利亞最大的城市之-。它有很多風景名勝。悉尼歌劇院就聞名于全世界。
如果你游覽過澳大利亞，你就會被它吸引。
亮點詞匯
Pacific Ocean太平洋
cover覆蓋
favorable討人喜歡的
desert.沙漠
places of interest鳳景名勝
出彩句型
It covers an area of.它有....的面積。
It has a population of...它有...的人口
The weather in those places is more favorable and comfortable.那些地方的天氣更加適宜和舒服。
In the center of Australia, there is.在澳大利亞的中部，有.....
Sydney s one of the biggest cities in Australia.悉尼是澳大利亞最大的城市之一。
高分點評
本交選取了澳大利亞作為介紹的主體，其中采取了由面到點的敘述手法，將澳大利亞的位置、面積、氣候、人文風情一呈現(xiàn)在了我們面前。 值得提的是， 作者的寫作語言非常地道，原汁原味，如面積的表達“covers an area of..，又如人口的表達“It has a population of over 10 million"等。
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