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關(guān)愛他人，就等同于善待自己。關(guān)愛他人本身就是一個完善自己的過程，通過關(guān)愛他人，我們能相應(yīng)地得到他人的回饋和幫助。 <A hRef=http://www.zequeka.cn/MiNifoRm.html>蘇州中小學(xué)生作文培訓(xùn)班</a>
本話題的寫作重心主要有以下三個方面:
1.關(guān)愛對象:我們需要關(guān)愛誰?是老人還是父母，亦或是其他需要關(guān)愛的人?
2.關(guān)愛原因:為何上述對象需要關(guān)愛?
3.如何關(guān)愛:我們應(yīng)該如何把關(guān)愛落實到行動層面?
相關(guān)話題寫作示例指導(dǎo)
實踐案例
題目
Please look at the two pictures below carefully，and think about what has happened.Write passage in at least 60 words on the topic "How to care for the elderly”. (請仔細(xì)觀察下列兩幅圖片，想想發(fā)生了什么，以“如何關(guān)愛老人”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文。)注意:短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息。
審題
看圖作文對初中的學(xué)生來說，是有一定難度的。 此類作文旨在考察學(xué)生的讀題能力、想象能力以及遣詞造句、語篇組織的書面表達(dá)能力。想要寫好這篇作文，就必須要注意以下幾個方面:
1.認(rèn)真閱讀提示信息:圖片、圖表等的材料作文通常都會給出一定的提示， 寫作前務(wù)必看清這些提示和寫作要求。
2.仔細(xì)分析圖片內(nèi)容:圖畫是作文的基礎(chǔ)，因此在寫作前要仔細(xì)觀察圖畫，進(jìn)行分析，了解圖畫所要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容、反映的問題、蘊(yùn)含的道理等。
3.觀察細(xì)節(jié)，展開想象:對圖畫的主題進(jìn)行展開，加以內(nèi)容的擴(kuò)充。
從這篇作文的圖片內(nèi)容來看，盡管兩位老人家中都掛著全家福，但顯然并沒有家人陪伴左右，顯得非常孤獨，需要子女的關(guān)愛和陪伴。結(jié)合圖片上方的提示信息，作文的主題應(yīng)為“關(guān)愛老人”。在寫作時，我們首先要對圖片內(nèi)容進(jìn)行簡要概述，突出重點一老人需要關(guān)愛。 接看，我們應(yīng)就如何關(guān)愛老人，提出2-3條具體的、可行的做法，并對其進(jìn)行解釋說明。
此外，這篇作文還需注意避免出現(xiàn)人稱，時態(tài)的混亂，或者對圖片進(jìn)行過度的想象，導(dǎo)
段落結(jié)構(gòu)
本文可采用“總一分一總”的寫作結(jié)構(gòu):
.第一段:用12句話簡要措給圖片中的情境和圖片所呈現(xiàn)的內(nèi)容，提出主題一 關(guān)愛老人
第二段:對文章的主題展開說明，給出2-3條關(guān)愛老人的具體做法，并解釋說明為什153g么要這么做，或者這么做能起到怎樣的效果等。
第三段:總結(jié)上述內(nèi)容，呼吁大家共同關(guān)愛老人。
核心語匯
remind sb. of sth.讓某人想起某事
respect the elderly尊敬老人
be aware of sth.意識到....
family care家庭照料
enrich one's life豐富某人的生活
focus on/ concentrate on sth.關(guān)注某事
have some trouble / difficulty (in) doing sth.做某事有困難
參考句型
Filial piety is the most important in all virtues.100百善孝為先。
Nothing is more ... than ..沒有比.........更......
no matter how ... we should無論...我們都應(yīng).....
Not only should we ... we also should ..我們不僅應(yīng)....還.....
Make sure that ...確保...
習(xí)作
How to care for the elderly
As is shown in the two pictures above, some of the elderly live alone. They feel lonely and depressed with a sense of being useless.Therefore, one of the pressing problems facing us now is how to care for the elderly. What they need most is not material comforts, but mental ones. No matter how busy we are, we should try to find time to chat with them, look after them, and accompany them. In addition, we should let them have an annual physical examination to keep them healthy. After all, nothing is more important than taking good care of the elderly and making them happy.
點評:
該生準(zhǔn)確地把握了圖片的內(nèi)容，能根據(jù)圖片的主題進(jìn)行表達(dá)。內(nèi)容充實，句子連貫，表達(dá)通順。在寫作時，“feel depressed""material comforts" 等詞匯的正確使用，展現(xiàn)了較大的詞匯量，主語從句"What they need most ...以及讓步狀語從句“No matter how...”等句子體現(xiàn)了作者較強(qiáng)的表達(dá)能力。文章最后一句話回應(yīng)了主題?？偟膩碚f，該生很好地完成了寫作任務(wù)，本文是一片層次清晰、結(jié)構(gòu)完整的佳作。
相關(guān)話題滿分作文必背
（一）
題目
Write at least 60 words about the topic "Love around me". (請以“圍繞在我身邊的愛”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的作文。)
注意：
Use the following points as a guide.
1. Is there any love around you? (Give one or two examples.)
2. How do you feel when you get love from him her 1 them?
3. What are you going to do to show your love?
范文
Love around me
Love is everywhere in my life. My parents support me and love me all the time. My friends care about me as well It is their love that helps me make progress and become better and better. When I have trouble with my studies or I fail the exams, my parents never get angry with me. Instead, they always cheer me up and give me confidence. My friends often help me with my studies. What they do makes me feel warm, touched and grateful. In order to show my love and gratitude, I will spend some of my pocket money buying gifts for them.I think they will like my gifts very much.
（二）
題目
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic "I want to volunteer in/at ”
(以“我想在 擔(dān)任志愿者”為題，寫- -篇不少于 60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)
注意
Use the following points as a reference. (以下問題僅供參考 )
1. Where do you want to volunteer?
2. Why do you want to be a volunteer there?
3. Do you have any problem with volunteering?
范文
I want to volunteer at a nursing house
I want to volunteer at a nursing house. Firstly, the old at the nursing house may be lonely, because they seldom see their children. If I am a volunteer there, I can accompany them, chat with them and make them feel happier and less lonely. In addition, caring for the old is a traditional Chinese virtue. It's our duty to look after them well. I believe I can be the best volunteer because I can do many kinds of housework. And the most important thing is, I am patient and willing to help. I'm ready to be a volunteer there!
（三）
題目
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic“Take care of the Earth together”(請以“一同愛地球”為題，寫一篇不少于60字的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格）
范文
Take care of the Earth together!
Currently. the environment is getting worse and wore. We are surrounded by different kinds of population The Earth is our only home, so it is time for us to take care of the Earth and make it better. For example, we should drive cars less often and go to school by public transportation. In this way, we can help reduce carbon mission. Moreover, we should stop polluting the river by not throwing rubbish into it. All in all, nothing is more important than taking good care of the Earth. Let's take action together!
《中考英語作文：關(guān)愛類英語作文寫作技巧》添加時間：2025-01-09；更新時間：2025-03-15
