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（一） <A hRef=http://www.zequeka.cn/MiNifoRm.html>蘇州作文培訓(xùn)班</a>
學(xué)校是否有必要設(shè)立“無(wú)作業(yè)日”？對(duì)此，你在班中進(jìn)行了調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇短文在英語(yǔ)課上交流，并闡述你的觀(guān)點(diǎn)和理由。 <a hRef=htTps://Www.EuZw.nE/miNifoRm.Html>蘇州初中語(yǔ)文補(bǔ)習(xí)</a>
Opinions | Reasons | |
most students | Yes | ◆have free time ◆feel relaxed |
some students | No | ◆waste time ◆get bad grades |
I | … | … |
注意：①短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；
②詞數(shù)：80-100；
③短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：無(wú)作業(yè)日 Homework-free Day
短文首句：I've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. Here are the results.
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【寫(xiě)作思路】
這是一篇材料類(lèi)作文。著重通過(guò)調(diào)查對(duì)“無(wú)作業(yè)日"學(xué)生的看法：贊成與反對(duì)及理由。主要以第三人稱(chēng)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫(xiě)作中應(yīng)適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏切關(guān)系。
【參考范文】
I've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. Here are the results. Most students think it necessary to have Homework-free Day so that they will have more free time to do what they like, such as reading their favorite books, going swimming and so on. They will also feel relaxed and join their friends in playing different games.
Some students, however, don't like it. They're afraid that they may waste time or even get bad grades. They prefer to do homework as usual.
In my view, Homework-free Day will certainly help a lot. I can choose to watch some interesting English programs, which will help improve my listening and speaking skills.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
文章中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)或句子會(huì)給文章增色。such as ，例如； Homework-free Day ，無(wú)作業(yè)日；prefer to do sth.更喜歡做某事。I've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. （介詞后接賓語(yǔ)從句）；Most students think it necessary to have Homework-free Day so that they will have more free time to do what they like.（賓語(yǔ)從句；不定式做主語(yǔ)和結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句）；I can choose to watch some interesting English programs, which will help improve my listening and speaking skills. （非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）。 還運(yùn)用了or， however 等使上下文銜接的更好。
（二）
現(xiàn)在越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生使用“作業(yè)幫”這個(gè)APP 來(lái)搜查他們不會(huì)做的題目。對(duì)此，不同的人有不同的看法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下文字的提示，并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。
優(yōu)點(diǎn) | 1. 及時(shí)幫助學(xué)生解決在學(xué)習(xí)中遇到的困難； 2. 在家就能學(xué)習(xí)，簡(jiǎn)單，方便； 3. 可以選擇自己喜歡的老師，學(xué)習(xí)興趣更濃。 |
缺點(diǎn) | 1. 有的學(xué)生假裝學(xué)習(xí)，事實(shí)上在玩游戲； 2. 有的學(xué)生不想獨(dú)立思考，直接照抄答案，他們根本不關(guān)心自己的學(xué)習(xí)，只是虛度光陰。 |
你的建議 | 聯(lián)系實(shí)際，給出自己合理的建議。 |
要求：
1. 80－100 詞。（開(kāi)頭的首句已給出，不計(jì)算在詞數(shù)內(nèi)）
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱(chēng)及其他相關(guān)信息，否則，不予評(píng)分。
參考詞匯：convenient方便的，便利的 pretend to do...假裝做…… think independently獨(dú)立思考
Today, more and more students are using the App zuoyebang. However, different people have different ideas about it. Some people think _____________________________________________________________________
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【寫(xiě)作思路】
這篇作文要求我們對(duì)介紹不同人對(duì)“作業(yè)幫”這個(gè)應(yīng)用軟件的看法，并聯(lián)系實(shí)際，發(fā)表自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。題目中利用表格的形式，列出了寫(xiě)作的主要內(nèi)容，審題可知，短文應(yīng)包括以下幾個(gè)部分：作業(yè)幫的優(yōu)點(diǎn)、缺點(diǎn)以及個(gè)人觀(guān)點(diǎn)?？梢苑譃槿畏謩e進(jìn)行敘述，各自的理由在表格中都已呈現(xiàn)，學(xué)生們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。最后一部分內(nèi)容則需要學(xué)生們聯(lián)系自己的實(shí)際生活，發(fā)揮想象力，自己來(lái)補(bǔ)充適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容。文章應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、第三人稱(chēng)和第一人稱(chēng)為主來(lái)敘述。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要將題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容都包括在作文中，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)?？梢愿鶕?jù)表達(dá)需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)、完整，但需要注意合理性，要緊貼題目要求和文章主旨。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能逐詞翻譯表格內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)的使用，提升作文檔次。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使行文連貫、自然。
【參考范文】
Today, more and more students are using the APP zuoyebang. Different people have different ideas about it. Some people think it’s useful. The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time. It’s easy and convenient for them.
They can study at home. They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying. However, others don’t think so. They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games. They don’t want to think independently, but only copy the answers. They don’t care about their studying at all. It’s a waste of time.
I think it’s good for students who are hard-working. They can study better. But for students who don’t want to study, it’s very bad.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
這是一篇優(yōu)秀是作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，把人們對(duì)“作業(yè)幫”這個(gè)應(yīng)用軟件的不同看法進(jìn)行了介紹，并在最后發(fā)表了自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)。各部分內(nèi)容之間層次清晰，敘述有條理，三段式的作文，一目了然，每一段的主題也很明確。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言得體。句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。除簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)外，短文里還使用了and連接的并列句、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句，以及動(dòng)詞不定式、動(dòng)名詞等非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)。短文中較好的句型有The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time.、They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying.、They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games.、I think it’s good for students who are hard-working等。
（三）
禮貌從我做起，從現(xiàn)在開(kāi)始，從點(diǎn)滴小事做起。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，以 “When to Say Thank You”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。
提示：1) When should we say “thank you” at home?
2) When are we supposed to say “thank you” at school?
3) ...
要求：1) 短文須包括提示中的兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)和一個(gè)補(bǔ)充要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2) 短文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。
3) 詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。(開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))
參考詞匯：wash, encourage, open
When to Say Thank You
It’s polite to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind to us. _________________________
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【寫(xiě)作思路】
這是一篇要求介紹我們?cè)诩液驮趯W(xué)校怎么做個(gè)有禮貌的人。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱(chēng)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句型：say"thank you"to sb 對(duì)某人說(shuō)"謝謝"，it's+形容詞+for sb to do sth 做某事對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)怎么樣，help sb do sth幫助某人做某事，as often as possible盡可能經(jīng)常的。
【參考范文】
When to Say Thank You
It's polite to say "thank you" when others help us or say something kind to us. Being polite is a good tradition in our country. Nobody likes a person who is impolite. It's important for us to be polite. We should say "thank you" to parents when they cook for us. We should say "thank you" when they wash clothes for us. We should also be polite at school. When the teachers help us work out questions, we should say "thank you" to them. When we get bad grades and the teachers and classmates encourage us, we should say "thank you". When someone opens the door for us, we should say "thank you". We should say "thank you"as often as possible. If everyone is polite to others, the world will be more and more beautiful.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
如果想在寫(xiě)作方面拿到高分，請(qǐng)大家關(guān)注以下幾個(gè)方面：
1. 務(wù)必保持卷面整潔，書(shū)寫(xiě)清晰，閱卷老師的第一印象極為重要。
2. 認(rèn)真審題（確定體裁，格式，人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)）-列出提綱（把所要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容按一定順序列成若干條。）-打草稿-修改-定稿的寫(xiě)作流程。
3. 學(xué)會(huì)用英語(yǔ)思維表達(dá)，適當(dāng)使用增強(qiáng)連貫性的連接詞，好詞、好句的積累，擴(kuò)句練習(xí)和改錯(cuò)練習(xí)，學(xué)以致用。
4. 加強(qiáng)練習(xí)，多寫(xiě)多練，學(xué)會(huì)升級(jí)詞匯，不用重復(fù)句型，注重從句的使用，使句子在寫(xiě)對(duì)的基礎(chǔ)上，再寫(xiě)好、寫(xiě)優(yōu)美。
（四）
Write a review（評(píng)論） of the following story in about 120 words． The review has to include the following points．（閱讀下面的故事，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示，寫(xiě)出一篇約120詞的評(píng)論）．
（1）The title of your review．（你撰寫(xiě)的評(píng)論的標(biāo)題．）
（2）Your idea（s）， examples and the reason（s） for unhappiness and happiness in the story．（你歸納的關(guān)于故事中幸福和不幸福的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，舉例子并說(shuō)明原因．）
（3）Your idea（s） of happiness， examples for happiness in your daily life．（歸納你在日常生活中關(guān)于幸福的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，并舉例說(shuō)明．）
（4）Your conclusion about happiness．（關(guān)于幸福的結(jié)論．）
（5）The words you may use．（你可能用到的詞） be satisfied with（對(duì)……滿(mǎn)意） desire n．欲望 contentment 知足 the key（關(guān)鍵） to happiness．
A long time ago， in a rich and beautiful country， there lived an unhappy king． He slept badly and didn't feel like eating． He often cried for no reason． This made the queen and his people worried． So they called a doctor to examine him．But he found nothing wrong with his body．He said what the king needed was the shirt of a happy person to wear．That would make him happy．
The prime minister was called to the palace． But when they explained the king's situation to him， he said，"Although I have a lot of power， it doesn't make me happy． I'm always worried about losing my power．"
Then the king's banker came to say， I'm afraid I'm not happy either． I have a lot of wealth， but I'm always worried about losing money． Someone tries to steal my money． Next， the palace singer was called to say， "I'm famous but I'm not happy because I'm worried about being followed by others． I can't be free．"
Finally， the top general was told to go out to find a happy man． He searched and searched but couldn't find anyone． Everyone seemed to have their own problems， and no one was truly happy． Just as he wanted to give up． he saw a poor man on the street． He was eating with his hands and singing happily to himself． The general went to him and said，"What makes you so happy？ You have no power， money， or fame．" The man said，"I have everything I want． and I don't want what I can't have． So I'm happy， and my song comes from the happiness in my heart． ""Can you give your shirt to me， I need it， "said the general．"What shirt？ I don' t have any shirts．"answered the man．
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【寫(xiě)作思路】
這是一篇要求寫(xiě)評(píng)論的文章，根據(jù)下面的故事中的相關(guān)信息寫(xiě)出一篇約120詞的評(píng)論。所提供的材料中列舉了撰寫(xiě)的評(píng)論的標(biāo)題。主要從：（1）歸納的關(guān)于故事中幸福和不幸福的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，舉例子并說(shuō)明原因。（2）歸納你在日常生活中關(guān)于幸福的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，并舉例說(shuō)明；（3）關(guān)于幸福的結(jié)論。這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)。注意評(píng)論中必須包含材料上的故事情節(jié)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。
【參考范文】
My Thoughts about Happiness
Power, wealth, and fame can't always make people happy. For example, the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poor people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have.
What can always make me happy？Happiness is always in my heart and is easy to find if I pay more attention to what I have. For instance, enjoying the beautiful sunshine after a cloudy day, getting a glass of water from mother when I am studying, getting help from my friends when I am in trouble and so on. These are the moments when I am happy.
All in all, don't think about what you can't have. Contentment is the key to happiness.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
（1）高分句型一 For example，the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poor people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have.例如，富人不快樂(lè)，因?yàn)樗麄兒ε率ュX(qián)，而窮人真正快樂(lè)是因?yàn)樗麑?duì)自己所擁有的感到滿(mǎn)足。句子because they are afraid of losing money是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句。
（2）高分句型二 All in all, don’t think about what you can't have. 總之，不要想你不能擁有的東西。句子what you can't have.作think about的賓語(yǔ)。
（五）
近年來(lái)，學(xué)生意外傷害事故頻發(fā)，給許多家庭帶來(lái)永久的傷痛。作為中學(xué)生，我們?cè)撊绾斡行У淖晕冶Ｗo(hù)，免受傷害呢? 我市正在舉行以“How to Keep Safe”為題的中學(xué)生安全知識(shí)英語(yǔ)征文比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文參賽吧。
How to Keep Safe | |
Traffic | traffic lights, electric bikes（電動(dòng)車(chē)）… |
Swimming | rivers, swimming pool… |
Internet | ID number, code(密碼）, unhealthy websites… |
…… | …… |
要求：
1.短文必須包含提示中所有內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；
4. 詞數(shù)：80-100（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, how to keep safe is very important.
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After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
【寫(xiě)作思路】
近年來(lái)，學(xué)生意外傷害事故頻發(fā)，給許多家庭帶來(lái)永久的傷痛。作為中學(xué)生，我們?cè)撊绾斡行У淖晕冶Ｗo(hù)，免受傷害呢? 我市正在舉行以“How to Keep Safe”為題的中學(xué)生安全知識(shí)英語(yǔ)征文比賽，給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
【參考范文】
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, how to keep safe is very important.
First, we should obey the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road. And we shouldn't ride the electric bicycles. Second, we shouldn't swim in the river because it's dangerous. We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool. Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet. We shouldn't surf unhealthy websites. What's more, we shouldn't go out with friends without our parents' permission. If we are in danger, we can ask for help from our parents or teachers, even police.
After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
文中用到了非常好的句型：we should obey the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road.；Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet.這些給文章增色不少。
《中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)高分作文攻略（5篇）》添加時(shí)間：2025-01-13；更新時(shí)間：2025-03-15
