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近年來，學生意外傷害事故頻發(fā)，給許多家庭帶來永久的傷痛。作為中學生，我們該如何有效的自我保護，免受傷害呢? 我市正在舉行以“How to Keep Safe”為題的中學生安全知識英語征文比賽，請你根據(jù)下表提示，寫一篇短文參賽吧。 <a hRef=htTps://Www.EuZw.nE/miNifoRm.Html>蘇州初中語文補習</a>
How to Keep Safe | |
Traffic | traffic lights, electric bikes（電動車）… |
Swimming | rivers, swimming pool… |
Internet | ID number, code(密碼）, unhealthy websites… |
…… | …… |
要求：
1.短文必須包含提示中所有內(nèi)容，并適當發(fā)揮；
2. 語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名或地名；
4. 詞數(shù)：80-100（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, how to keep safe is very important.
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After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
【寫作思路】
近年來，學生意外傷害事故頻發(fā)，給許多家庭帶來永久的傷痛。作為中學生，我們該如何有效的自我保護，免受傷害呢? 我市正在舉行以“How to Keep Safe”為題的中學生安全知識英語征文比賽，給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達的事情確定句子的人稱時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。
【參考范文】
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, how to keep safe is very important.
First, we should obey the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road. And we shouldn't ride the electric bicycles. Second, we shouldn't swim in the river because it's dangerous. We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool. Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet. We shouldn't surf unhealthy websites. What's more, we shouldn't go out with friends without our parents' permission. If we are in danger, we can ask for help from our parents or teachers, even police.
After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
文中用到了非常好的句型：we should obey the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road.；Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet.這些給文章增色不少。
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為了讓學生吃到更加營養(yǎng)、安全的食品，政府出臺了陪餐制，要求從 4 月 1 日起，學校領(lǐng)導陪同學生用餐。請你根據(jù)以下要點，給校報英語專欄寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/span>
1. 學生吃得健康、安全；
2. 及時發(fā)現(xiàn)就餐問題；
3. 食堂提供食品多樣；
4. 父母更加放心。
注意：1.詞數(shù) 80 詞左右；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 參考詞匯:規(guī)定 regulation (n.)；食堂 cafeteria (n.)；營養(yǎng)的 nutritious (adj.)
A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools. It asks the school managers to eat with students in their cafeterias.
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【寫作思路】
本文屬于材料作文，就政府出臺的“陪餐制度”談?wù)勀愕目捶?。根?jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。
亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如thanks to, take place, be able to, provide sth for sb, in other words, worry about, not...at all, carry on, first, second以及also，增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。
【參考范文】
A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools. It asks the school managers to eat with students in their cafeterias.
Thanks to the regulation, something great has taken place in our school. First, we eat healthier and safer than before. Second, if there is any problem about food safety or other, our school leaders are able to know and solve it quickly. Also, the cafeteria workers are trying to provide different kinds of food for us. In other words, our parents needn’t worry about our diet any more.
We teenagers are still young and need to grow healthy, so I think the new regulation is really good and necessary. I hope it will be carried on forever.
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根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李華，你們學校正在開展“安全月”宣傳活動，倡議大家制作關(guān)于安全教育的主題海報，你們班交換生Peter給你發(fā)郵件詢問相關(guān)事情。請用英語回復一封郵件，告訴他海報上交的時間，并分享你設(shè)計海報的一些想法。
提示詞語：design，safety rule，careful，protect，picture
提示問題：When should you hand in the poster?
What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster?
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email _______________________________________________________________
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If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【寫作思路】
這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給Peter寫一封郵件，告訴他關(guān)于制作關(guān)于安全教育的主題海報的相關(guān)事宜。由題目中給出的提示問題可知，短文中應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：首先告訴Peter海報上交的時間；然后和他分享一些設(shè)計海報的想法。第二個內(nèi)容應(yīng)該是短文的主體。題目中并沒有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，學生們應(yīng)聯(lián)系自己的實際生活，展開合理的想象，將這些內(nèi)容補充完整后，用正確的英語表達出來，這是寫作中的一個難點。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主、第一、二人稱來敘述。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先要合理安排短文內(nèi)容，敘述應(yīng)有層次、有條理?？梢允褂靡恍┍硎鞠群箜樞虻脑~或短語，如First, Second, Last but not least等等。題目中給出的提示詞應(yīng)該在短文中用上。其次應(yīng)注意文章的表達，英語句式的結(jié)構(gòu)與漢語是不同的，因此不能根據(jù)漢語思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)該從句式的整體考慮，先確定主干結(jié)構(gòu)，然后添加修飾成分。為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)注意使用一些高級詞匯、短語以及復合句、非謂語動詞等復雜結(jié)構(gòu)。同時語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意上下連貫，表達流暢。
【參考范文】
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. As it is required，you are supposed to hand in the poster before next Friday.
Being your close friend，I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you. First and foremost，the basic safety rules are of great importance，which should be included in your poster. In the second place，following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school. Last but by no means least，if I were you，I would add a few suggestions about safety awareness，considering that better safe than sorry. In addition，it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.
If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，給Peter寫郵件，告訴他制作主題海報的一些事情。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合題目要求。除題目中給出的開頭和結(jié)尾，短文主要包括兩個內(nèi)容：第一段用一句話告訴Peter上交海報的時間；文章的中心和重點是放在了第二段上，這一段中作者和Peter分享了一些制作海報的想法。主要從四個方面進行闡述，內(nèi)容非常詳實，并使用了First and foremost, In the second place, Last but by no means least, In addition等短語，分清了這一段的層次，敘述非常有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，并使用了較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，表現(xiàn)了作者較強的語言運用能力。短文中較好的句型有：Being your close friend，I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you.、In the second place，following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school、In addition，it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.等。
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每個人的生命只有一次，一定要珍愛自己的生命。該怎樣安全自救？請根據(jù)以下提示，以How to Protect Ourselves為標題寫一篇發(fā)言稿。
安全對每個人都很重要 | 交通：外出時遵守交通規(guī)則 | |||
食品：吃健康食物，少吃垃圾食品 | ||||
活動：體育鍛煉時，不要弄傷自己 | 不私自下河游泳 | |||
自救是重要的技能之一 | 交友需謹慎 | 遠離危險之人 | ||
遇到危險保持冷靜 | 然后要及時報警或向老師、家長求助 | 盡可能避免受傷害 保證自己的安全 | ||
要求：1. 語言表達準確，短文連貫、通順。
2. 短文應(yīng)包括所有內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯。
3. 詞數(shù)80左右。文章開頭部分已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。
Dear friends,
Everyone has only one life, we should treasure our lives. But how can we protect ourselves?
Here are some suggestions. _____________________________________________________________________
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In a word, we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives.
That’s all. Thank you!
【寫作思路】
本文是根據(jù)材料提示寫作，所以分析所給材料之后，首先要在頭腦中確定文章的整體結(jié)構(gòu)，然后逐步細化．就像蓋房子一樣，先有整體框架，然后是房間，最后是室內(nèi)裝修．
【參考范文】
Dear friends，
Everyone has only one life， we should treasure our lives． But how can we protect ourselves？
Here are some suggestions．
On the one hand， we should realize the importance of safety and know what to do． First，when we go out， we must follow traffic rules． If we walk，we must use sidewalks and mustn't run a red light；If we ride bikes，we must ride along the right side and shouldn't carry others；Second， we should develop a healthy eating habits． Eat regular meals every day and try not to eat junk food or eat less．When food smells bad， don't eat it．Third，when we play sports or games， be careful not to hurt ourselves．Fourth，we mustn't swim in rivers without our parents or other adults around．
On the other hand， we should learn to protect ourselves， which is one of the most important living skills． We must be careful when making friends especially online．Some person online are not honest．They are dangerous， so we must keep away from them． If we happen to have trouble， we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents， teachers or police for help so that we can protect ourselves from danger or being hurt．
In a word， we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives．
That's all． Thank you !
點評
高分句型一： we should realize the importance of safety and know what to do. 我們應(yīng)該意識到安全的重要性，并且知道如何去做。短語the importance of，what to do結(jié)構(gòu)；
高分句型二：when we go out，we must follow traffic rules. 當我們外出時，必須遵守交通規(guī)則。狀語從句，情態(tài)動詞；
高分句型三：we should learn to protect ourselves，which is one of the most important living skills．我們應(yīng)該學會保護自己，這是最重要的生存能力之一。定語從句；
高分句型四：we must keep away from them．我們必須遠離他們。keep away from 短語
高分句型五： we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents，teachers or police for help so that we can protect ourselves from danger or being hurt．
我們應(yīng)該保持冷靜，并且記住及時向家長，老師或警察求助。以便于保護自己遠離危險，避免受傷害。remember to do結(jié)構(gòu)，ask...for help，in time短語；so that引導的目的狀語從句，protect.. from...短語。
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請你根據(jù)上面五個問題的內(nèi)容及你的回答，結(jié)合以下提示，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?”為題，寫一篇80-100詞的英語短文。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名和人名。
提示：
1. 謹慎交友。
2. 不參與打架斗毆。
3. 面對校園欺凌怎樣自我保護。
參考詞匯：1. self-protection（自我保護） 2. bully(n./v.欺凌）
3. personal safety（人身安全）4. have violent behaviors(打架斗毆）
How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?
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【寫作思路】
這是一篇話題作文，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?”為題，寫一篇80-100詞的英語短文。本文人稱主要第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時。仔細閱讀所給材料，認真審題，確定主題，確定要點，根據(jù)要點適當發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容。字數(shù)80-100詞。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。根據(jù)提示要點，列出本文的寫作提綱。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標點、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。
【參考范文】
How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?
School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school, we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt, so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school.
We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. For example, we should stay calm before a bullying behavior happens. We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly, we will learn how to have a self-protection because our personal safety is the most important. Secondly, we should be peaceful with others at all times and can't have any violent behavior. Finally, obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.
I'm hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future, do you think so?
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每年三月的最后一個星期一是"全國中小學生安全教育日"．為了提高同學們的安全意識，學校決定在畢業(yè)前再舉行一次以安全教育為主題的班會．請根據(jù)所給提示，就日常生活中需要注意的安全寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿．
提示：1．上學、放學途中的安全；
2．校園里的安全；
3．家里的安全．
要求：1． 80詞左右，開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2．語法正確，語句通順、流暢；
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名．
Hello， everyone! The last Monday in March every year is National Safety Education Day of Primary and Middle School Students． As middle school students， we should _____________________________________
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Safety is very important． We should always keep it in mind．
Thank you!
【參考范文】
Hello， everyone! The last Monday in March every year is National Safety Education Day of Primary and Middle School Students． As middle school students， we should pay more attention to safety．To be safe，we must follow rules．
When we go to school or go home from school，we must follow the traffic rules．For example，we must walk on walk-side．When we cross zebra﹣crossing，stop and look right and left，then go across the road fast．
【高分句型一】We mustn't run through red lights when crossing the road．Don't play football on the road．（上學、放學途中的安全）
At school，don't push when we go upstairs or downstairs，or we may hurt ourselves or others．Never use sharp things like the knife when we play with our classmates．We should get on well with our classmates．Don't fight with them，or we'll be hurt．（上學、放學途中的安全）
At home，we should be careful when we use electricity．If there is a fire or a thief，we should call the police for help in time．（家里的安全．）Also，food satety is important．Never eat the food that goes bad．
【高分句型二】
Safety is very important． We should always keep it in mind．
Thank you!
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根據(jù)一項新的調(diào)查，學生安全已經(jīng)成為一個大的問題。假設(shè)你是一名老師，對學生進行以“自我保護”為主題的消防安全教育，請以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”為題，提出你的建議。
要求：
1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名。
2. 書寫工整，語句通順，連貫，詞數(shù)不少于80.
參考詞匯： cover v. 遮蓋 take the lift 乘坐電梯 exit n. 出口 towel n. 毛巾shut off 切斷
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【寫作思路】
根據(jù)一項新的調(diào)查，學生安全已經(jīng)成為一個大的問題。假設(shè)你是一名老師，對學生進行以“自我保護”為主題的消防安全教育，請以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”為題，提出你的建議?？忌紫纫J真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【參考范文】
How to Protect Yourself in a Fire
According to a new survey, student safety has become a big problem. You should know some ways to protect yourself .It will help to keep you safe in the fire. First, you should shut off the electricity. You should cover your mouth with the wet towel. You mustn't take the lift or jump off a window, you should find the exit. The most important thing is to keep calm. If you can't go in the house, the safest place is close to water, like washroom .If the fire is serious, you should call 119 for help. These may help us.
這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如First, You should shut off the electricity. You should cover your mouth with the wet towel等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。
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建設(shè)平安校園是我們每個人的責任與義務(wù)。作為一名學生，我們更應(yīng)該珍惜自己的生命，更應(yīng)該注意自己的人身安全。假如你是Li Hua，并擔任校學生會主席，請你就安全問題，向全校學生發(fā)出倡議，寫一封安全倡議書。
內(nèi)容提示：(1)不帶管制刀具到學校;(2)不私自下河洗澡;(3)不打架;(4)上學放學的途中應(yīng)該注意安全;(5)遇緊急情況，立即報告警察或老師。
參考詞匯：管制刀具：restricted knives or things;洗澡：have a bath;打架：fight;緊急情況：emergency;交通安全：pay attention to the traffic。
寫作要求：(1)用詞恰當，要點全面，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范。(2)可適當發(fā)揮，80詞左右，開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。(3)嚴禁出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名和學校等相關(guān)信息。
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Dear students,
As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe.
We mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents’ permission. And, we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Furthermore, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers.
In a word, following these safeties rules above can make us live in peace.
Yours,
Li Hua
（9）
校園暴力
遇見或親身經(jīng)歷過校園暴力嗎？千萬別以為這是危言聳聽，在學校必須注意維護自己的人身安全。近年全國發(fā)生數(shù)起嚴重的校園暴力事件，某中學初三8班圍繞校園安全問題召開主題班會。假定你是班長李華，以How to protect ourselves in campus violence為標題寫一篇發(fā)言稿，主要包括如下內(nèi)容： 1．校園暴力事件已引起廣泛關(guān)注。 2．要求每個學生都學習相關(guān)知識，增強自身防范能力。 3．遇到校園暴力時要采取適當措施，包括：保持冷靜，判斷清楚自己的處境和可能的危險；盡一切可能避免人身傷害；及時報警。 注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)。2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 參考詞匯：增強—enhanceHow to protect ourselves in campus violence Dear friends, This year, some seriously violent incidents happened in campus, resulting in very bad results. That’s all. Thank you!
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How to protect ourselves in campus violenceDear friends, This year, some seriously violent incidents happened in campus, resulting in very bad results. The incidents of campus violence have drawn widespread attention in our country. As a student, we should learn some knowledge about how to deal with the violence and enhance the ability of self-protection. Of course, if we meet the violence, we should take appropriate measures to protect ourselves. At first, we’d better keep calm, judge the situation and be aware of the possible dangers. Then, we should try our best to escape or prevent the violence. At last but not least, we should call the police or teachers as soon as possible to avoid the physical injury. That’s all. Thank you.
《中考英語書面表達高分作文攻略（9篇）》添加時間：2025-01-13；更新時間：2025-03-15
