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提示：
1. 作為中國(guó)人而自豪：過(guò)去，我國(guó)優(yōu)秀的傳統(tǒng)文化影響了世界：今天，祖國(guó)在全國(guó)人民的努力下越來(lái)越強(qiáng)大，許多科技世界領(lǐng)先；…
2. 為實(shí)現(xiàn)“中國(guó)夢(mèng)”而奮斗：學(xué)會(huì)做一個(gè)懂感恩、守規(guī)矩、善良誠(chéng)信的人；不畏難，努力學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)、提高能力，將來(lái)成為一名…
要求：語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，可根據(jù)提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯；演講中不得提及生個(gè)人身份的相關(guān)信息，如人名、校名或地名等；詞數(shù)80—100，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。
Hello, everyone! __________________________________________________________________________
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That's all. Thank you!
【寫(xiě)作思路】
本文屬于材料作文，談?wù)撟鎳?guó)的偉大強(qiáng)盛以及為實(shí)現(xiàn)中國(guó)夢(mèng)我們應(yīng)該做的努力。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。
【參考范文】
Hello, everyone! As a Chinese, I am so proud of it. In the past, our great traditional culture made a difference to the world, such as sailing, communicating and so on. Nowadays, our country is becoming stronger and stronger by working hard of all Chinese. A lot of science and technology lead the world, such as high speed, Chang’e 4 and Hong Kong-Zhuhai-Macau Bridge and so on.
As a teenager, we should do as follows to achieve our Chinese dream. First of all, we are supposed to thank all the people who devote themselves to making our country wonderful. What’s more, we need follow the rules. In school we should obey the school rules. Only by doing these dimple things can we become a person that the country needs. In addition, we’d better not lie and be a honest man in order that all people can trust us. Last but not least, we should try our best to work hard and when face difficulties, we never give up. I am going to be a scientists. If I am a scientist, I will do more researches and let other countries admire us.
That's all. Thank you!
這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be proud of, make a difference to, such as, and so on, 比較級(jí)and比較級(jí), devote oneself to doing, in order that, try one’s best以及first of all, what’s more, in addition和last but not least等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。
（二）
假如下面是你們班教室里的照片墻，墻上記錄了中考前學(xué)習(xí)和生活的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴流，以及考前老師的溫馨提示。忘不了備戰(zhàn)中考時(shí)充實(shí)而快樂(lè)的時(shí)光，請(qǐng)你以“Preparation for High School Entrance Exam”（備戰(zhàn)中考）為題，寫(xiě)一篇80-100詞的短文。
1. 請(qǐng)闡述圖中信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名；
3. 字跡工整，語(yǔ)言流暢，表達(dá)正確。
學(xué)習(xí)區(qū) |
Listen to the teacher | 生活區(qū) |
Eat healthy food | 提示區(qū) |
Avoid making mistakes |
Take notes |
Exercise |
Learn to relax | |||
Finish doing… |
Have enough sleep |
Be on time | |||
… | … | … |
Preparation for High School Entrance Exam
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【寫(xiě)作思路】
這篇作文要求我們以Preparation for High School Entrance Exam為題，介紹備戰(zhàn)中考的時(shí)光。題目中用照片墻的形式呈現(xiàn)了備戰(zhàn)的具體內(nèi)容，并給出了一些關(guān)鍵詞，學(xué)生們應(yīng)依據(jù)這些圖片和關(guān)鍵詞，展開(kāi)合理的想象，充實(shí)細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，并用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。審題可知，這篇短文的主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括三個(gè)方面：分學(xué)習(xí)、生活和提示三個(gè)方面解析介紹，注意分清層次和結(jié)構(gòu)，合理安排各個(gè)方面的信息，注意上下文的銜接、過(guò)渡應(yīng)自然。短文應(yīng)以第一人稱(chēng)為主來(lái)敘述，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不要根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫(xiě)完整的句子?？梢院?jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，清晰、準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)自己的意思。而為了提升作文檔次，應(yīng)在文中穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。
【參考范文】
Preparation for High School Entrance Exam
High School Entrance Exam is arriving. I still remember the days when our teachers and students worked together to prepare for it. In order to get a good grade, we all listened to the teachers carefully in class and took notes at the same time. After class, we finished our homework on time. If we had some difficult problems, our teachers would explain to us in details. All the teachers encouraged us not to give up and keep on studying. Besides, to study well, health comes first. Our teachers told us to eat healthy food, such as eggs, meat, vegetables and so on. We also did exercise every day and had enough sleep. The teachers told us not to feel stressful and learn to relax. We must be careful in the exam and avoid making mistakes. What’s more, we must be on time. We all felt tired and nervous, but what a full and happy time!
這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己和老師們一起備戰(zhàn)中考的一段充實(shí)、快樂(lè)的時(shí)光。題目以照片墻的形式展示了備戰(zhàn)的過(guò)程和內(nèi)容，非常新穎獨(dú)特，分析照片墻可知，文章應(yīng)從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行介紹：學(xué)習(xí)、生活以及老師對(duì)學(xué)生的提示。這篇短文也正是按照這個(gè)思路進(jìn)行展開(kāi)敘述的。短文層次很清晰，敘述也很清楚。短文主要使用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，符合表達(dá)的需要，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，注意了動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式形式。語(yǔ)句通順，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。句子以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，也使用了賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句句型，調(diào)整了文章的節(jié)奏。短文中使用了一些較好的短語(yǔ)和句型，如I still remember the days when our teachers and students worked together to prepare for it.、If we had some difficult problems, our teachers would explain to us in details.、Besides, to study well, health comes first. Our teachers told us to eat healthy food, such as eggs, meat, vegetables and so on.、We must be careful in the exam and avoid making mistakes.等等。
（三）
假定你是李華，請(qǐng)你以初三畢業(yè)生的身份給學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。要求如下：
1. 重點(diǎn)分享你在處理學(xué)習(xí)困難方面的經(jīng)驗(yàn)以及你下一步學(xué)習(xí)或生活的打算；
2. 郵件不少于80詞，開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)；
3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的個(gè)人信息。
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【寫(xiě)作思路】
考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z(yǔ)表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【參考范文】
I'm going to graduate from junior high school. Looking back on three years of junior high school life, there are many gains and difficulties. I have many difficulties in learning English. At the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it. I am about to start high school life, I will continue to work hard, I hope you bravely face junior high school life, have a happy junior high school life.
這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ),如:So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs.，這些文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
（四）
假如你是英語(yǔ)校報(bào)的編輯李平，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以信息，給新入學(xué)的學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們寫(xiě)一封信，歡迎他們來(lái)到新學(xué)校，并對(duì)他們?cè)趯W(xué)校如何做合格的中學(xué)生提出建議。
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1. 歡迎他們來(lái)到新學(xué)校。
2. 介紹學(xué)校：
(1) 課程有趣；
(2) 有多名外教；
(3) 活動(dòng)豐富。
3. 請(qǐng)對(duì)他們?cè)趯W(xué)校如何做合格的(qualified)中學(xué)生提出具體建議。
寫(xiě)作要求：
1. 不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。
2. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。
3. 字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。
4. 至少80詞。
Dear new friends,
It’s my pleasure to write you this letter.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【寫(xiě)作思路】
這是一篇書(shū)信作文，內(nèi)容是關(guān)于學(xué)校生活的。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；提示內(nèi)容就是本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。這些要點(diǎn)構(gòu)成寫(xiě)作的基本框架。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象提出自己的建議。不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě)，要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題。在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。
【參考范文】
Dear new friends,
It's my pleasure to write you this letter. Welcome to our new school. Our school is clean and beautiful. The classrooms are big and bright. All the subjects are very interesting. I am good at English. There are many foreign teachers in our school. In our spare time, we can communicate with them and improve our oral English skills. Our after class activities are also rich and colorful. There are different clubs in our school. You can take part in all kinds of activities you like.
Now you are going to be middle school students. How to be a qualified middle school student? At first, you should follow the school rules. It's also important to have good study habits. You must listen to the teachers carefully in class.I think you should learn to share things with your classmates and help each other.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
（五）
回顧初中三年。有許多事令人難忘。校英語(yǔ)報(bào)如Have Your Say欄目正面向九年級(jí)畢業(yè)生征文。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你選擇其中一個(gè)話題, 并結(jié)合具體事例, 用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封信表達(dá)你對(duì)某個(gè)人的謝意或歉意，參加此次征文活動(dòng)。
要點(diǎn)如下：
say "thanks" to___________ | say "sorry" to_________ |
1. be not good at... 2. encourage me to… 3. make great progress 4…. | 1. argue with… 2. not talk to each other 3. regret doing… 4….. |
注意：(1) 短文必須包括你所選擇話題的所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)拓展；
(2) 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；
(3) 詞數(shù)：80-100，書(shū)信格式已給出；
(4) 首句供參考Looking back on the past three years, I’d like to say...
Dear ___________,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【寫(xiě)作思路】
這個(gè)作文要求我們從題目中給出的兩個(gè)話題中選擇一個(gè)，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封信表達(dá)你對(duì)某個(gè)人的謝意或歉意，參加學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)的一個(gè)征文活動(dòng)。題目中利用表格的形式展示了兩個(gè)話題的主要結(jié)構(gòu)，具體的內(nèi)容需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，并用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)、第一人稱(chēng)和第二人稱(chēng)為主來(lái)敘述。文章內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：首先確定一個(gè)話題和人物；然后具體說(shuō)明你感謝他或者向他道歉的原因，這是文章的主體部分，敘述應(yīng)詳細(xì)，合情合理；最后再次重申自己的感謝或歉意，并表達(dá)祝愿。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先文章內(nèi)容應(yīng)完整、充實(shí)，注意分清段落和層次；其次需注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯。句式結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)完整，可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，提升文章檔次。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句直接使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然。
【參考范文】
范文1
Dear Alice,
Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say thanks to you for helping me with my English.
When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English. I just hid behind my text book and never said anything in class. Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart. However, you had a patient talk with me and encouraged me to be more active in class.
Since then, I have worked harder and made great progress. I feel lucky to be your student.
Thank you again. Wish you goal luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文2
Dear Alan,
Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say sorry to you for arguing with you.
When we were in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get the first prize in the football match. I never stopped complaining to you that it was you who missed the goal. But you shouted back that you were not the only reason. You walked off angrily. From then on, we didn't talk to each other.
I have been regretting doing so. Soon we will graduate from our school. Let's forget about the past and become good friends again.
Yours,
Li Hua
這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，向自己的同學(xué)表達(dá)了感謝或歉意。第一篇作文是向Alice表達(dá)了感謝，并詳細(xì)介紹了Alice幫助自己學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的過(guò)程；第二篇作文向Alan表達(dá)了歉意，介紹了由于足球比賽失利，互相埋怨，產(chǎn)生矛盾的過(guò)程，并表達(dá)了自己的悔意。文章內(nèi)容都非常豐富，敘述也很完整、詳細(xì)。兩篇作文都使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確。注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式形式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的變化，如hid, said, won, lost等等。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)言得體、地道，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中使用了較豐富的句型和短語(yǔ)，如第一篇里When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English.、Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart.、Since then, I have worked harder and made great progress.。再如第二篇中When we were in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get the first prize in the football match. I never stopped complaining to you that it was you who missed the goal.、Let's forget about the past and become good friends again.等等。
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時(shí)光荏苒，初中三年轉(zhuǎn)瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比較，你會(huì)有很多變化。請(qǐng)以“I have changed a lot!”為題，根據(jù)以下要求與提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，具體描述你最重要的變化及其如何發(fā)生的。
要求：
l. 短文不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分；
2.不少于60詞。
提示：
l. What did you use to be like?
2. What is the most important change?
3. And how did it happen? Tell a story about it.
I have changed a lot!
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【寫(xiě)作思路】
本文要寫(xiě)我初中三年的變化，根據(jù)習(xí)作提示，首先要指出我最大的變化是什么，并描述出具體變化是怎么發(fā)生的，所以要針對(duì)自己某一個(gè)最大的變化來(lái)寫(xiě)，而不是泛泛地寫(xiě)很多變化；時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
【參考范文】
I have changed a lot!
Great changes have happened to me during the past three years. The most important change is my attitude to English.
I used to be tired of learning English. And I was not interested in it. I couldn’t remember the words freely or pronounce them correctly. Thanks to my mother, she often encourages me to learn it. Besides, with the help of my English teacher, I find a better way to learn English. I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help.
Now I like English so much that it is my favorite subject. Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am!
本篇文章，首先開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，我有很多變化，我最大的變化是我對(duì)待英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度的變化。第二段是文章的主體，先描述過(guò)去學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的狀況，其中用到表達(dá)過(guò)去常用的句型used to do ;在媽媽及老師的幫助下，我的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)生了很大變化，具體表現(xiàn)為 I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help.等。最后對(duì)以上變化進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并指出對(duì)于這個(gè)變化，我的心情如何，Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am! 整篇文章內(nèi)容符合要求，時(shí)態(tài)用云正確，思路清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。
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