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The Yellow Mountain
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The Yellow Mountain is located in the south of Anhui Province. It is one of the most well-known mountains
in China. Every year, thousands of tourists at home and abroad come to visit it.
It's a little far from the city. It takes you about three hours to get there by bus. Climbing the mountain may make you a little tired. However, on the way to the top of the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you. In the early morning, when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful.
You would be amazed by the wonderful scenery there. It is really worth visiting.
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黃山
黃山位于安徽省的南部。它是中國(guó)的名山之一。 每年，成千上萬的中外游客去那里游覽。它離市區(qū)有點(diǎn)遠(yuǎn)。坐汽車的話，大概要3個(gè)小時(shí)才能到達(dá)那里。爬山可能會(huì)使你有點(diǎn)累。然而，在向山頂前進(jìn)的過程中，你可以欣賞環(huán)繞著你的云海、奇松和怪石。清晨，當(dāng)太陽升起來時(shí)，天空看起來非常美麗。
你會(huì)驚訝于那里的美麗景色。它真的很值得去游玩。
亮點(diǎn)詞匯
1.thousands of成千上萬的
2.at home and abroad海內(nèi)外;中外
3.tired 疲倦的;勞累的
4.unique 獨(dú)特的;獨(dú)一無二的
5.amaze 使驚訝;感到驚訝
出彩句型
1.... is located in... ...位于.....
2.It is one of the most well-known...它是最著名.....之..。
3.It takes yo... to do sth.這會(huì)花費(fèi)...... (時(shí)間等)去做某事。
4.On the way t.... you can... 在...的路上，你可以...
5.It is worth doing sth.值得做某事。
高分點(diǎn)評(píng)
本文圍繞中國(guó)的一座名山一黃山展開， 介紹了它的概況、云海、奇松、怪石、日出等，呈現(xiàn)出絕美的山上奇景。作者的文筆非常出色，"sea of clouds" "unique rocks"等表達(dá)惟妙惟肖地展現(xiàn)了黃山之景。文中的句式多變，如“it”引導(dǎo)的形式主語句、動(dòng)詞的-ing形式作主語等，都是文章的加分點(diǎn)。
（二）
Beihai Beach
Beihai Beach is very famous in my city. The beach lies in the north of the city, about 8 kilometres away. lt's one of the best beaches in the city.
The sand on the beach is fine, soft and clean. And the water is clear with small waves.Therefore, it's very suitable for swimming and playing beach volleyball. Many people come here to spend their holidays. Everyone says it is a beautiful place to travel. Moreover, the people here are very friendly.
I think you all can enjoy yourselves here.
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北海灘
北海灘在我的城市非常出名。這個(gè)沙灘位于城市的北部，距離城市大約8公里。它是城中最好的沙灘之一。
沙灘上的沙質(zhì)很好，又柔軟，又干凈。海水很清澈，帶有小小的浪花。因此，這里非常適合游泳和打沙灘排球。很多人來這里度假。每個(gè)人都說這是一個(gè)適合游覽的美麗的地方。而且，這里的人非常友好。
我覺得你們都會(huì)在這里玩得很開心。
亮點(diǎn)詞匯
1.soft 柔軟的
2.wave 波浪
3.suitable 適合的
4.beach volleyball 沙灘排球
5.enjoy oneself玩得開心
出彩句型
1... lies in... ....位......
2.The water is clear with small waves.海水很清，帶有小小的浪花。
3.It's very suitable for.. 非常適宜做.....
4.Many people come here to spend their holidays.很多人來這里度假。
5.You all can enjoy yourselves here.你們都會(huì)在這里玩得很開心。
高分點(diǎn)評(píng)
本文將北海灘的美麗景色呈現(xiàn)在我們面前，充滿了作者對(duì)這一片沙灘的熱愛之情。 文章中的句子均簡(jiǎn)單明了，如表示位置的"lie n.."、描述海水的"The water is clear with small waves"，都清楚地描述了海灘的樸素之美，展示了作者扎實(shí)的語言功底。
相關(guān)話題滿分作文必背
（一）
Green grasses，blue lakes and beautiful mountains are waiting for you!Welcome to colorful nature pare!
There is a clean river. There are some colorful flowers. There is a beautiful mountain near the nature park. The air is fresh. The sky is blue. The clouds are white. The tree is green. The bridge is tall. The grass is green. I can run on the grass. There is a path near the lake. There are many fish in the lake. There is a forest in the nature park. There are many trees on the mountains. There are many flowers near the path.
Look! There are some birds in the sky. One, two, three…… oh! So many!
I like this nature park very much. I am so excited.
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綠色的草，藍(lán)色的湖和漂亮的山脈在這里等你!歡迎你來到色彩豐富的自然公園!
這有一個(gè)干凈的河流，有許多色彩豐富的花朵，有一個(gè)漂亮的山脈在自然公園里?？諝馐切迈r的，天空是藍(lán)的，云是雪白的，樹是綠的，橋是高的，草是綠的。我能在草上奔跑。湖泊旁邊有一條小路，有許多魚在湖泊里，有一片森林在自然公園里，有許多樹在山脈上，有許多花在小路旁邊。
我非常喜歡這個(gè)自然公園，我好興奮!
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Beautiful spring spring with light footsteps coming toward us, in this season for revival, everything around become full of vitality, let's find together followed in the footsteps of spring, the beauty of spring!
Spring thunder rumbled with continuous rain, rain moisten the whole of the earth. Feline winter in the land of grass after the baptism of the spring rains are scrambling to drill out of the earth. Although small, although very thin, although very soft but the grass is very strong, they will still stand tall, spring back to prevent the growth of the grass. The earth covered with a layer of green.
Spring is a colourful flowers blooming season, look at the shops opened, yellow primrose, blow the trumpet, as if to say: "spring is coming!" Yellow peach blossom zhankai smiling faces, this beautiful peach blossom for park added a lot of vitality, peach blossom has a lot of color, have a plenty of mei red, or pink, and white. The peach blossom is so delicate, mei red and pink peach blossom is so shy like a sensitive plant, not all of the peach blossom is temperamental. Look at that white peach blossom is that race to the open atmosphere, to meet the baptism of the rain. More let a person like rape, far look like the boundless yellow carpet on the shop. Spring is so beautiful!
Look at that, in the field a view of jubilation, farmers are permeated with smile on her face, trying to sow together. The distance of children put the kite, they release their dreams. It was a happy moment.
It was a beautiful spring, the spring of hope, joy of spring. In the spring, we also want to sow, planted the seeds of hope with hard sweat in it to make it a little bit of growing up, fly our dreams!
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美麗的春天春天邁著輕盈的腳步向我們走來了，在這萬物復(fù)蘇的季節(jié)，周圍的一切都變得生機(jī)勃勃，讓我們跟隨著春的腳步一起尋找春天的美麗吧!
轟隆隆的春雷帶來了綿綿的春雨，春雨滋潤(rùn)了整個(gè)大地。在土地里貓冬的小草經(jīng)過春雨的洗禮后個(gè)個(gè)爭(zhēng)先恐后的鉆出了大地。雖然很小，雖然很細(xì)，雖然很柔軟但小草非常的堅(jiān)強(qiáng)，它們?nèi)詴?huì)挺直腰板，春寒又襲都阻止不了小草的生長(zhǎng)。給大地披上了一層新綠。
春天是一個(gè)五顏六色、百花盛開的季節(jié)，看那迎春花開了，黃黃的迎春花吹起了小喇叭，好像在說：“春天來了!"一朵朵桃花綻開了笑臉，這美麗的桃花給公園增添了許多生機(jī)，桃花有很多顏色，有的是玫紅的，有的是粉紅的，還有雪白的。玫紅色的桃花是那么嬌滴滴的，而粉紅色的桃花呢卻是那么的羞澀像含羞草一樣，可不是所有的桃花都是那么的嬌氣?？茨前咨奶一ㄊ悄菢拥拇髿舛几?jìng)相開放，迎接春雨的洗禮。更讓人喜歡的是油菜花，遠(yuǎn)看就像鋪上了無邊無際的黃地毯。春天好美麗呀!
看那田野里，一片歡騰的景色，農(nóng)民臉上都洋溢著微笑，一起來努力地播種。遠(yuǎn)處小朋友放著風(fēng)箏，他們放飛了自己的夢(mèng)想。那真是快樂的時(shí)刻。
這真是一個(gè)美麗的春天、希望的春天、快樂的春天。在這春天里我們也要播種，種下希望的種子用辛勤的汗水澆灌它讓它一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)的長(zhǎng)大，放飛我們的夢(mèng)想吧!
（三）
A Spring Morning
It was early in the morning. The sun was just creeping(爬) out of the eastern horizon(地平線) and golden red was penetrating (穿透) through the white clouds and across the sky. The lakes, the trees and the bamboos looked as if they were all gilded. The ground was covered with tender grass, on whose blades some dew drops were glistening(晶瑩剔透) under the sunshine.
Birds flew around the woods singing cheerfully and restlessly. Some boys were quietly jogging along the path, while a couple of girls were reading aloud under the trees lining the bank of the lake.
A gentle breeze came up, wrinkling(使…起皺) the surface of the lake. It was really a beautiful and lively morning.
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春晨
清晨時(shí)分，太陽從東邊的地平線慢慢爬起，一片金黃透過白色的云彩，劃過天空。湖泊、樹木和竹林都似乎染上了金邊。地面上長(zhǎng)滿了綠油油的小草，小草的葉片上，幾滴露珠在陽光的照耀下晶瑩剔透。
鳥兒在樹林里飛翔，不停地歡唱。一些男孩子沿著小路安靜地慢跑，而一些女生則坐在湖邊成排的樹下大聲朗讀。
一陣清風(fēng)吹來，湖面掀起了漣漪。真是一個(gè)美麗動(dòng)人而又意氣盎然的清晨。
