中考英語作文：如何寫家庭成員
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題目My mother
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審題
看題目是全命題作文。媽媽是我們最親近的人，留下最深刻印象的應(yīng)該是對孩子的關(guān)愛和教育，當(dāng)表達(dá)的中心都差不多的情形下，語言的運(yùn)用是取勝的關(guān)鍵。
段落結(jié)構(gòu)
從題目看，my mother,沒有修辭詞，也就是作者想寫媽的任何方面都可以，但這樣歐容易主次不分，往往會(huì)進(jìn)行過多的外根損寫。般像這樣的寫人作文。 可以得兩句未要的外貌特征，面更多的是突出媽媽對我的愛和幫助，可以是泛面談，也可以通過一件事進(jìn)行描述，突出媽媽對于我的關(guān)愛。
核心詞匯
描寫人物外貌的常用詞語
middle-aged中年的 overweight超重的
pretty漂亮的 attractive迷人的
good-looking長得好看的 white -haired白發(fā)蒼蒼的
straight 1 curly / long/ short hair直發(fā)/卷發(fā)長發(fā)/短發(fā)
medium height中等個(gè)頭 slim苗條的
handsome英俊的 ordinary looking長相一般的
near-sighted近視的 well-dressed穿著講究的
描寫人物性格的常用詞語
honest老實(shí)的 good-/bad-/quick -tempered好/壞/急脾氣的
hot-tempered脾氣暴躁的 easy -going好相處的
reliable值得信任的 energetic有活力的
generous大方的 punctual守時(shí)的
stubborn固執(zhí)的 sensitive敏感的
open-minded思想開明的，愿意接受他人觀點(diǎn)的
hardworking / diligent努力工作的，勤奮的
strict嚴(yán)厲的 friendly友好的
kind / warm-hearted好心的 reasonable講理的
outgoing外向的 adventurous敢于冒險(xiǎn)的
bad-mannered無禮的 talented有天賦的
enthusiastic熱情的 traditional傳統(tǒng)的
naive天真的
描寫人物心情的常用詞語
happy ! glad / pleased高興的 satisfied滿意的
anxious焦慮的 eager急切的
exhausted精疲力竭的 surprised 1 astonished驚訝的
sorrowful悲傷的 難過的 stressed緊張的
worried擔(dān)憂的 curious好奇的
absent minded心不在焉的 disgusted厭惡的
calm平靜的 relaxed放松的
terrified恐懼的
●核心詞組
go to school 1 work上學(xué)/上班 do morning exercises做早操
cook delicious food煮美味的食物 be busy doing sth.忙于做某事
look after / take care of照顧 be kind to...對...慈愛
used to過去常常 read newspapers讀報(bào)紙
pick up開車接某人 be full of wisdom充滿智慧
get ready for ...為....做準(zhǔn)備 be worried about ....對....擔(dān)心
spend time doing sth.在做....上花費(fèi)時(shí)間
參考句型
. He was born in ... on ... .......出生
e.g. He was born in Shanghai on January 1st, 1982.他于1982年1月1號(hào)在上海出生。
. He looks like ..他長得....
e.g. He looks like a model.他長得像模特。
He is a/an .. with ..他是...的男子
e.g. He is a handsome man with a strong and tall igure.他是一個(gè)身材高大的英俊男子。
■He is a/an .. who...他是.的男子
e.g. He is a tall man who is hardworking.
他是一個(gè)工作努力的高個(gè)兒男子。
He is good at ..他擅長....
e.g. He is good at cooking.
他擅長燒菜。
■.. cares much about me in my life and study. ....在我的生活和學(xué)習(xí)中非常關(guān)心我。e.g. My mother cares much about me in my life and study.
我的媽媽在我的生活和學(xué)習(xí)中非常關(guān)心我。
While I am doing ... my .當(dāng)我正....時(shí)我.....
e.g. While I am playing the piano, my mother always sits beside me.
當(dāng)我彈琴的時(shí)候，我媽媽總是坐在我的邊上。
■He always .. and looks like .是....看上去....
e.g. He always appears serious and looks like a judge.
他總是很嚴(yán)肅，看上去像-一個(gè)法官。
■Whenever I talk about my family with others, .. is always the one I feel most proudof.當(dāng)和別人談?wù)撐业募胰藭r(shí)，....總是讓我感到最自豪的人。or
e.g. Whenever I talk about my family with others, my grandfather is always the oneI feel most proud of.
和別人談?wù)撐业募胰藭r(shí)，我的爺爺總是讓我感到最自豪的人。
. Since the day I was born, I have been the apple of ... eyes,自從我出生以來，...視我為掌上明珠。
e.g. Since the day I was born, I have been the apple of my grandpa's eyes.自從我出生以來，爺爺視我為掌上明珠。
習(xí)作
My mother
The person I have the most interactions with everyday is probably my mom.She is not a very tall person,but she is of the highest; place in my heart.She usually wears her hair up in a bun and she love wearing blue .That's how I recognize her in a group of people.I go for her whenever i need emotional support, for she is always there for me.. She always gives me useful advice. I love her deary, and I am grateful for everything she's done for her baby girl.
點(diǎn)評:文章雖不長，但開門見山點(diǎn)題，接著進(jìn)行外貌描中的位置最高，講到母親把頭發(fā)盤起來，一個(gè)干練自信的母著，作者說到了母親在她有困難的時(shí)候給予她的幫助。最后語言個(gè)性化，符合角色性格特征，人物刻畫得逼真形象。
相關(guān)話題精彩范文
（一）
A Happy Family
My name is Lin Min. I have a happy family. There are three people in my family, father, mother and 1.
My father is very tall, who likes to wear suits very much.He is very fond of reading. Even before he goes to bed, he always reads for a while. My mother is a thin lady with long hair. She often makes delicious food for me. | am of medium height with a pair of glasses. I take great interests in insects. I am very happy when my parents take me to the countryside, because I can observe the insects there.
This is my family, a family with lots of happiness.
參考譯文
一個(gè)幸福的家
我叫林敏。我有一個(gè)幸福的家庭。我家有三口人:爸爸、媽媽和我。
我的爸爸非常高，他很喜歡穿西裝。他非常喜歡看書。甚至在他睡覺前，他總會(huì)看-會(huì)兒書。我的媽媽瘦瘦的，留著長發(fā)。她經(jīng)常給我做美味的食物。我有著中等身材，戴著一副眼鏡。我對昆蟲很感興趣。當(dāng)爸爸媽帶我去郊外時(shí)，我很高興，因?yàn)槲铱梢栽谀抢镉^察昆蟲。
這就是我的家，一個(gè)幸福的家。
亮點(diǎn)詞匯
be fond of... .....喜愛....
go to bed 上床睡覺
fora while一會(huì)兒
make delicious food做好吃的食物
take interests in.. ....感興趣
insect 昆蟲
observe 觀察;注意到
出彩句型
There be.. .....
My father.. who likes to d....我的爸爸.....喜歡做....
Even before....he.....甚至...在....之前，他....
My mother is... with..我的媽媽有...的外表。
This is my family,a family with..這就是我的家庭，一...的家庭。
高分點(diǎn)評
本文先總說了家庭的組成，然后分別介紹各成員，最后以“幸福"的家結(jié)尾，層次分明，洋略得當(dāng)。文中使用了較為豐富的句式，如who引導(dǎo)的定語從句和before引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句，還有"with+名詞"和"be fond of"等各種短語。
（二）
My Grandmother
My grandmother is a kind-hearted person. Whenever people come to her for help, she is always ready to help them out.
She is well over sixty, but she still runs a garden. She grows all kinds of flowers and plants in her garden. You can always find beautiful flowers there. My grandmother has taken care of me, since I was a little baby. We are like good fiends and spend a lot of happy time together.
1 love my grandmother very much. Now she is getting old, and | want to look after her in the future.
參考譯文
我的祖母
我的祖母是一個(gè)熱心腸的人。無論何時(shí)人們來找她幫忙，程花園用種了各種各樣的花和植物，她已經(jīng)60多歲了，但她還打理著一個(gè)花園。我的粗母就開始照質(zhì)我，我們你總是可以在那里看到漂亮的花朵。從我還是小嬰兒時(shí)，
就像好朋友，一起度過 了很多開心的時(shí)光。
我非常愛我的祖母?，F(xiàn)在她越來越老了，我以后想照顧她。
亮點(diǎn)詞匯
?kind-hearted.仁慈的，好心腸的
?help sb. out幫助某人解決困難
?run a garden打理花園
?all kinds of各種各樣的
?look after照顧
?in the future在以后;將來
出彩句型
Whenever people come to her for help, ..
無論何時(shí)人們來找她幫忙，....
?She is always ready to....她總是很樂意.....
?You can always find.. there.
你總是可以在那里找到....
?My grandmother ..，since...我的祖母.... 自從......
?We spend a lot of happy time together.
我們一起度過了很多開心的時(shí)光。
高分點(diǎn)評
本文從三個(gè)方面-“祖母的熱心腸”“愛植物”和“對我的關(guān)愛”入手，對祖母的形象進(jìn)行了生動(dòng)地刻面。本文中短語的運(yùn)用是一大亮點(diǎn)， 如"com for help" ready to"run a garden"等.文章處都流靠著作者對祖母的深切感情，感染力極強(qiáng)，是另一大奪目之處。
中考真題解析
同學(xué)們，在初中三年的英語學(xué)習(xí)中，我們從課本中學(xué)習(xí)了有關(guān) “Family”、 “Be polite to sb.”、“Protecting the environment”、 “Volunteering”等話題和功能。假定你是李磊，請參考這些話題和功能，依據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇題為 “I’m Proud of My Family”的英語短文，向校報(bào)投稿，講述你的家庭故事。
要點(diǎn)提示：
1. 家人相親相愛，努力學(xué)習(xí)、工作；
2. 鄰里和睦，禮貌待人；
3. 愛護(hù)環(huán)境，從我做起：
寫作要求
l. 詞數(shù)90左有（短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
2. 根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及校名。
參考詞匯：Work hard；be friendly to each other；get on well with；protect the environment；be volunteers
I’m Proud of My Family
My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I. __
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【寫作思路】
這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息講述一下你的家庭故事。所提供的材料中命好了題目：I’m Proud of My Family。主要從1、家人相親相愛，努力學(xué)習(xí)、工作；2、鄰里和睦，禮貌待人；3、愛護(hù)環(huán)境，從我做起：這三個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。
【參考范文】
My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I.
My families love each other. (My parents love us and we love our parents.) My parents both work hard. My sister and I study hard at school, too.
My families are kind and friendly to our neighbors. We are all polite to each other. We get on well with each other.
My families try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. My mom and my sister usually bring a bag to go shopping. My father is used to taking the bus to work. I never order takeaway food.
My families are glad to be volunteers at any time. My parents often help the children in poor areas. (My sister helps in the school library twice a week.) Sometimes I read newspapers to the old people.
What a happy family! I’m proud of my family!
【名師點(diǎn)評】
【高分句型一】
My families try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. 我的家人盡力保護(hù)我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪械沫h(huán)境。該句話運(yùn)用了：try one’s best to do sth. 盡力做某事。protect the environment：保護(hù)環(huán)境。
【高分句型二】
My father is used to taking the bus to work. 我父親習(xí)慣乘公共汽車上班。這句話運(yùn)用了：be used to doing sth. 習(xí)慣于做某事。
總之，本文運(yùn)用了大量的簡單句，雖然沒有復(fù)合句，但是這寫簡單句把作者的一家人的生活描寫的入情入理，就像是發(fā)生在我們的眼前一樣。
滿分作文必背
一
I want to say 'thank you to my father
I’ve developed a strong bond with my dad since I was little.He lets me see things in my way and then gives me his view points. He has always been supportive for all the decisions I make. What I love and appreciate him is his patience his manner to listen to others and take them into consideration and his inner strength. I am so lucky to have the best father in the world as I know he would sacrifice everything for me. He is an excellent father. I love him so much. I want to say 'thank you' to my father,
二
My 'unusual grandfather
My grandpa is an interesting person. He is easy. going and looks a little chubby. I love him very much.
He is fond of all kinds of TV dramas. But now he has a favorite one. He is a big fan of the latest drama 'In the Name of the People'. He shows his passion in his own way: every time I visit him, he always tells me things in this drama and tries very hard to help me understand them.
Although he has a "strange" taste, he is still my great grandpa. He always gives me useful advice when I have problems. In order to let me know his advice well, he will tell me some very old stories of himself. When I make some progress, he will tell me not to showoff He also teaches me to do some cooking in my spare time. He is very good at cooking and the dishes he makes, in my opinion,are even better than those in big restaurants!
This is my "unusual" grandpa.We laugh together, read together and learn together. He is the best grandpa in the world. I will never let him down!
三
The person I admire most is my father
The person I admire most is my father. Although he isn't very tall, he always leaves people an image of a good man with his thoughtfulness. He is very helpful and is always ready to help others. One day, a boy who is one of our neighbors injured his leg carelessly.My father took him to the hospital immediately and paid the fees with his own savings. In addition, he works hard and tries his best to make our life better. He sets a good example tome.I think he is not only a good father but also a good teacher in my life.
