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My favorite hobby is reading books. My mom often says, “Books are the best friends of people,” and I totally agree. Every evening after finishing homework, I spend 30 minutes reading, and I never feel bored. 蘇州易優(yōu)語文閱讀寫作培訓(xùn)，家長(zhǎng)信賴，學(xué)生喜歡。 http://www.zequeka.cn

I like different kinds of books. My favorite is storybooks, especially 《Charlotte's Web》. The story of Wilbur the pig and Charlotte the spider touches me deeply—Charlotte’s loyalty and wisdom make me cry every time I read it. I also like science books; they teach me interesting facts, like why the sky is blue and how bees make honey.

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Our school library is my favorite place. Every Tuesday afternoon, I go there with my classmates. The librarian, Ms. Li, is very kind—she always recommends good books to me. Last month, she gave me a book about space, and I learned a lot about the moon and stars. I even drew a picture of the solar system after reading it.

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Reading brings me many benefits. It improves my vocabulary and helps me write better compositions. It also takes me to different worlds—sometimes I’m in a magical forest, sometimes I’m on a spaceship. I feel happy and relaxed when reading. 蘇州小學(xué)語文提優(yōu)培訓(xùn)，就找易優(yōu)吳老師，20余年輔導(dǎo)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，數(shù)百成功案例。（TEL:181-1815-9898）

I will keep reading more books in the future. I want to read all the interesting books in the library and share good stories with my friends.

作文點(diǎn)評(píng)：
標(biāo)題明確 “愛好是閱讀”，主題突出。內(nèi)容從 “閱讀習(xí)慣 — 喜歡的書籍類型 — 圖書館經(jīng)歷 — 閱讀好處 — 未來計(jì)劃” 展開，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，過渡自然。引用媽媽的話開篇，增加親切感；具體提到《Charlotte's Web》和科學(xué)書，細(xì)節(jié)真實(shí)，體現(xiàn)閱讀廣度。情感上，通過 “開心放松” 表達(dá)對(duì)閱讀的熱愛，感染力強(qiáng)。缺點(diǎn)是 “閱讀好處” 可結(jié)合具體事例，如 “因讀科學(xué)書在課堂回答出問題”。改進(jìn)建議：在閱讀好處段落加 “一次語文課上，我用從書里學(xué)的詞語造句，老師表揚(yáng)了我”，讓好處更具體。（184 字）