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Spring Festival is the most important festival in China, and I always look forward to it. This year’s Spring Festival was especially happy, with my grandparents coming to my home to celebrate together. 蘇州易優(yōu)中考語(yǔ)文培訓(xùn),吳老師語(yǔ)文課（Tel:181-1815-9898）

One week before Spring Festival, we started preparing. Mom and I went to the supermarket to buy snacks and new clothes. I chose a red jacket—it’s said red brings good luck. Dad and grandpa cleaned the house thoroughly; they wiped the windows and swept the floor. Every evening, we pasted red couplets on the door together. I held the couplets, and dad taped them—we laughed when I held them upside down by mistake.

蘇州易優(yōu)語(yǔ)文閱讀寫(xiě)作培訓(xùn)，家長(zhǎng)信賴(lài)，學(xué)生喜歡。 http://www.zequeka.cn

On New Year’s Eve, the most exciting moment came. We made dumplings together. Grandma taught me how to fold the dumpling skin; at first, my dumplings looked messy, but after practicing, they became nice. At 8 p.m., we watched the Spring Festival Gala on TV while eating dumplings. When the clock struck 12, we set off small fireworks in the yard—they were colorful and beautiful.

“易優(yōu)閱讀寶”，中小學(xué)生語(yǔ)文題庫(kù)，語(yǔ)文成績(jī)提升就是快。

On New Year’s Day, I wore my new jacket and said “Happy New Year” to my grandparents. They gave me red envelopes with money inside, and I promised to use the money to buy books. We also visited my aunt’s family; we ate delicious food and played games with my little cousin. “易優(yōu)閱讀寶”，中小學(xué)生語(yǔ)文題庫(kù)，語(yǔ)文成績(jī)提升就是快。

This Spring Festival was full of joy and warmth. I love Spring Festival, and I’m already looking forward to next year’s festival.

作文點(diǎn)評(píng)：
標(biāo)題 “Happy” 點(diǎn)明節(jié)日氛圍，貼合主題。內(nèi)容按 “節(jié)前準(zhǔn)備 — 除夕活動(dòng) — 新年當(dāng)天 — 情感總結(jié)” 的時(shí)間順序?qū)?，邏輯清晰，“One week before”“On New Year’s Eve” 等過(guò)渡詞明確時(shí)間線。細(xì)節(jié)如 “貼倒春聯(lián)”“學(xué)包 dumplings”“放煙花” 充滿(mǎn)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日特色，真實(shí)還原春節(jié)場(chǎng)景。情感真摯，字里行間洋溢著節(jié)日的快樂(lè)。缺點(diǎn)是 “拜訪親戚” 部分可補(bǔ)充具體游戲，避免籠統(tǒng)。改進(jìn)建議：在拜訪 aunt 段落加 “我和 cousin 玩‘猜燈謎’游戲，我贏了他送的小兔子玩偶”，讓場(chǎng)景更生動(dòng)。（185 字）