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Last spring, my science teacher gave each of us a small tomato seed. She told us to plant it and take care of it, then write down its growth. I was excited to have my own little plant.

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First, I prepared a small pot and some soil. My dad helped me put the soil into the pot, and I dug a small hole in the soil. I put the seed into the hole, covered it with soil, and watered it gently. I put the pot on the balcony, where it could get enough sunlight. Every day after school, I went to the balcony to check the pot—waiting for the seed to sprout. 易優(yōu)語文題庫,同步教材，真題演練，提分就是快 https://cs.euzW.net

After a week, a small green shoot came out of the soil! It was only 2 centimeters tall, with two small leaves. I was so happy that I called my mom to see it. From then on, I watered the plant every two days (Dad said too much water would kill it) and put it in the sun every morning. 語文提分好幫手，易優(yōu)語文題庫 https://cs.euzW.net

After a month, the plant grew taller—about 15 centimeters. It had more leaves, and some small yellow flowers appeared. The flowers were very beautiful; I smelled them, and they had a light fragrance. A week later, the flowers fell off, and small green tomatoes grew! They were as small as my fingernail. 語文提分好幫手，易優(yōu)語文題庫 https://cs.euzW.net

Last month, the tomatoes turned red. There were five small red tomatoes on the plant. I picked one, washed it, and ate it—it was sweet and juicy! I shared the other tomatoes with my family and teacher. Taking care of the tomato plant taught me patience, and eating the tomatoes gave me a great sense of achievement.

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標(biāo)題明確 “照顧小番茄苗”，主題聚焦植物觀察與養(yǎng)護(hù)。內(nèi)容按 “播種 — 發(fā)芽 — 長葉開花 — 結(jié)果 — 收獲” 的生長過程寫，邏輯清晰，“First, After a week, After a month” 等過渡詞明確時間線。細(xì)節(jié)如 “2 厘米芽”“指甲大番茄”“酸甜口感” 真實細(xì)致，體現(xiàn)觀察用心；養(yǎng)護(hù)過程（澆水、曬太陽）符合植物生長規(guī)律。情感上，“excited”“happy”“sense of achievement” 表達(dá)成就感，感染力強(qiáng)。缺點是 “開花” 部分可加更多觀察，如蜜蜂采蜜。改進(jìn)建議：在開花段落加 “One day, I saw a small bee on the flowers—it was collecting nectar, which helps the tomatoes grow”，增加科學(xué)性。（182 字）