Last Friday, we finished the final exam. When the bell rang for the last exam (English), I felt so relaxed—no more early mornings to review and no more homework every night. I couldn’t wait to enjoy my free time. 蘇州易優(yōu)閱讀寫作精華課，（tel:181-1815-9898）有趣、有用、提分快
After school, my friends and I went to the park nearby. We didn’t talk about exams—instead, we talked about our holiday plans. Tom said he would go to the beach with his family, Lily planned to learn to play the piano, and I told them I would go camping. We played frisbee for an hour; I ran so fast that I felt my legs were tired, but I was very happy. We also ate ice cream—my favorite was chocolate flavor. 蘇州易優(yōu)吳老師初中語文高效提分（Tel:181-1815-9898）
On Saturday morning, I slept until 9 a.m.—it was the first time I didn’t set an alarm since the exam. After breakfast, I watched my favorite cartoon 《Paw Patrol》. I laughed loudly at the funny parts, and my mom said I looked like a little kid again. In the afternoon, I cleaned my desk—I put my textbooks and notebooks in a box, and put my toys on the shelf. My desk looked neat and clean.
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On Sunday, I went to the bookstore with my dad. I bought two storybooks and a coloring book. Dad said I could read more books during the holiday to relax. We also had lunch in a small restaurant—I ate my favorite fried chicken and French fries.
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Life after the final exam is so happy and relaxing. I can do what I like and don’t have to worry about exams. I hope every day after exams is like this.
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標(biāo)題 “After the Final Exam” 點明時間背景，貼近學(xué)生生活。內(nèi)容按 “考試結(jié)束 — 放學(xué)后去公園 — 周六休息 — 周日去書店 — 總結(jié)” 展開，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，過渡自然。細(xì)節(jié)如 “睡懶覺”“看《Paw Patrol》”“吃炸雞” 真實還原考后放松狀態(tài)，易引發(fā)共鳴。情感上，“relaxed”“happy”“relaxing” 直接表達(dá)考后愉悅心情，感染力強。缺點是 “考后計劃” 可加具體安排，如 “和朋友約定去看電影”。改進(jìn)建議：在公園段落加 “我們約定 next week 去看 the new animation movie，我’m already looking forward to it”，豐富考后活動。（180 字）
