Winter holiday is coming soon, and I made a detailed plan to make my holiday meaningful and happy. I don’t want to waste time—instead, I want to learn new things and have fun. 蘇州易優(yōu)語文培訓，閱讀寫作同步提升 http://www.zequeka.cn/mIniform.html
First, I will study every day. I will finish my winter holiday homework first—math exercises, English reading and Chinese compositions. Then I will read some extra books. My dad bought me a book about animals, and I plan to read 10 pages every day. I also want to practice my English speaking—every morning, I will listen to English songs and repeat them, and talk with my mom in simple English.
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Second, I will play and exercise. I love ice-skating, so I plan to go ice-skating with my friends twice a week. My dad said he would teach me to skate better—I hope I can learn to spin on the ice. I will also play badminton with my brother every afternoon; it’s good for my health and makes me strong. 蘇州小學語文提優(yōu)培訓，就找易優(yōu)吳老師，20余年輔導經(jīng)驗，數(shù)百成功案例。（TEL:181-1815-9898）
Third, I will help my family. My mom is busy every day, so I will help her do housework—wipe the table, wash the dishes and fold the clothes. On weekends, I will help my grandma make dumplings. She taught me last year, and this year I want to make better dumplings.
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Finally, I plan to visit my aunt’s family in another city. We will stay there for three days. I will play with my cousin, go to the park with them and eat delicious food. I’m looking forward to my winter holiday—it will be busy but happy.
作文點評：
標題明確 “寒假計劃”，主題積極。內(nèi)容按 “學習 — 玩樂鍛煉 — 幫家人 — 拜訪親戚” 的分類展開，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，“First, Second, Third, Finally” 等過渡詞條理分明。計劃具體可行，如 “每天讀 10 頁書”“每周滑冰兩次”，體現(xiàn)合理性；兼顧學習、娛樂與家務，安排全面。情感上，“l(fā)ooking forward to”“happy” 表達對寒假的期待，傳遞積極心態(tài)。缺點是 “學習” 部分可加具體目標，如 “背 20 個英語單詞”。改進建議：在學習段落加 “我還計劃每天背 20 個新英語單詞，寫在卡片上，方便記憶”，讓計劃更細致。（180 字）
