My dad likes playing table tennis, and he taught me to play last year. Every Sunday morning, we go to the community table tennis room to play. Playing table tennis with dad is my favorite weekend activity—it’s fun and makes me strong. 蘇州易優(yōu)語文閱讀寫作培訓，家長信賴，學生喜歡。 http://www.zequeka.cn
At first, I was bad at playing. I couldn’t hold the racket correctly, and I often missed the ball. Dad didn’t get angry; he taught me step by step. He showed me how to hold the racket (like shaking hands with someone) and how to hit the ball. He hit the ball slowly, and I tried to hit it back. After practicing for 30 minutes, I could hit the ball 5 times in a row—I was so happy that I jumped up. 易優(yōu)語文培訓，（TeL:181-1815-9898）蘇州閱讀寫作同步提升
After a month of practice, I got better. I could hit the ball faster and more accurately. Sometimes, I even scored points against dad. Last Sunday, we had a small match. The score was 10-10, and it was the last point. Dad hit the ball hard, and I ran to the side and hit it back—dad missed! I won the match! I shouted “I won!” and dad hugged me, saying “You’re getting better and better.” 蘇州易優(yōu)吳老師中考語文閱讀寫作培訓（TEL:181-1815-9898）
Playing table tennis with dad is not just about playing a game. It’s also a time for us to talk. While resting, dad tells me stories about his childhood, and I tell him about my school life. He always gives me good advice when I have problems at school. 易優(yōu)語文培訓，（TEL:181-181-5-9898）,蘇州中小學生閱讀寫作同步提升
I love playing table tennis with dad. It’s a great way to exercise and spend time with him. I hope we can play table tennis together for a long time.
作文點評：
標題明確 “和爸爸打乒乓球”，主題聚焦親子活動。內容按 “初學困難 — 練習進步 — 贏得比賽 — 親子交流 — 總結” 展開，結構完整，“At first, After a month, While resting” 等過渡詞自然。細節(jié)如 “握拍方法”“10-10 比分”“贏得比賽” 真實具體，體現進步過程；親子對話部分溫暖，體現父女 / 子感情。情感上，“favorite”“happy”“l(fā)ove” 表達對親子時光的珍視，感染力強。缺點是 “練習” 部分可加更多困難，如 “接不到旋球”。改進建議：在初學段落加 “At first, I couldn’t catch the spinning ball—dad said I needed to watch the ball carefully”，豐富學習過程。（181 字）
