Every summer holiday, I go to the countryside to visit my grandparents. They live in a small village with green fields and big trees. This summer, I stayed with them for two weeks—it was a happy time. 易優(yōu)語文培訓(xùn)，蘇州閱讀寫作同步提升 http://www.zequeka.cn/miniform.html
When we arrived, grandpa was waiting at the village gate. He held my hand and walked to their house. The house has a small yard with many flowers—roses, sunflowers and lilies. Grandma was in the kitchen; she made my favorite sweet potato porridge. The porridge was warm and sweet, and I ate two bowls. 易優(yōu)語文培訓(xùn)，蘇州閱讀寫作同步提升 http://www.zequeka.cn/miniform.html
Every morning, I woke up to the sound of roosters. After breakfast, I went to the field with grandpa. He grows rice and vegetables. I helped him water the vegetables—he gave me a small bucket, and I poured water gently on the tomato plants. I also picked strawberries in the garden—they were red and sweet, much better than the ones in the city. 易優(yōu)語文培訓(xùn)，（TeL:181-1815-9898）蘇州閱讀寫作同步提升
In the afternoon, I played with the village children. We ran in the field, chased butterflies and flew kites. My kite was a big bird, and it flew high in the sky. The children taught me to make grasshoppers with grass—I made a small one, and it looked like a real grasshopper. 找中小學生語文題庫，就搜微信“易優(yōu)閱讀寶”
When I left, grandma gave me a bag of eggs (they were from their chickens) and a jar of honey. I hugged my grandparents and promised to come back next summer. Visiting my grandparents in the countryside is always happy; I love the fresh air, the delicious food and the warm family love.
作文點評：
標題明確 “去鄉(xiāng)下看祖父母”，主題聚焦鄉(xiāng)村生活與親情。內(nèi)容按 “到達 — 清晨農(nóng)活 — 下午玩耍 — 離別 — 總結(jié)” 展開，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，“When, Every morning, In the afternoon, When” 等過渡詞自然。細節(jié)如 “紅薯粥”“澆番茄”“摘草莓”“做草螞蚱” 充滿鄉(xiāng)村特色，真實還原鄉(xiāng)村生活；親情描寫（爺爺接站、奶奶給食物）溫暖感人。情感上，“happy”“l(fā)ove” 表達對鄉(xiāng)村和祖父母的喜愛，感染力強。缺點是 “鄉(xiāng)村夜晚” 可加場景，如 “看星星”。改進建議：在玩耍段落加 “At night, grandpa sat with me in the yard, pointing out the stars and telling me stories about them”，豐富鄉(xiāng)村體驗。（182 字）
