Last Friday, our school held the annual Sports Day. The playground was decorated with colorful flags, and the loudspeaker played cheerful music. All of us wore our blue school uniforms and felt excited. 蘇州易優(yōu)吳老師中考語文閱讀寫作培訓(xùn)（TEL:181-1815-9898）
I participated in two events: the 100-meter race and the tug-of-war. First was the 100-meter race. When the teacher fired the starting gun, I ran as fast as I could. My classmates stood by the track, shouting “Come on! Come on!” Their voices gave me more energy. Finally, I got the third place—I was so happy that I jumped up. 易優(yōu)語文培訓(xùn)，蘇州閱讀寫作同步提升 http://www.zequeka.cn/miniform.html
After lunch, it was the tug-of-war. Our class competed against Class 5. We stood in a line, held the rope tightly and bent our knees. The teacher shouted “Start!”, and we pulled with all our strength. My hands hurt a little, but I didn’t let go. After a few minutes, we won! Everyone in our class hugged each other and cheered loudly.
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There were also other interesting events, like the long jump and the relay race. I sat on the grass and watched my friends compete. When they won, I clapped as hard as I could; when they lost, I went to comfort them. 蘇州中考語文提分，就找易優(yōu)吳老師，針對性強，提分就是快（TEL:181-1815-9898）。
At the end of the day, our class won the “Best Team Spirit” award. Holding the trophy, our teacher said, “Winning is important, but teamwork is more important.” This Sports Day was unforgettable. It taught me about hard work and friendship.
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標題 “Unforgettable” 點明情感基調(diào)，吸引讀者。內(nèi)容按 “運動會開場 — 個人參賽項目 — 集體項目 — 觀看其他項目 — 結(jié)尾獲獎” 的順序?qū)懀壿嬊逦?，“First”“After lunch” 等過渡詞銜接流暢。細節(jié)如 “同學吶喊”“手疼仍堅持” 很真實，體現(xiàn)團隊精神。結(jié)尾引用老師的話升華主題，有教育意義。缺點是 “接力賽” 部分可簡單描述同學表現(xiàn)，避免略過。改進建議：在觀看項目時，加 “我的好朋友小明參加接力賽，他跑得像風一樣快” 的細節(jié)，讓內(nèi)容更飽滿。（183 字）
