Drawing is my favorite hobby. I started drawing when I was 6 years old, and now I draw every day after finishing homework. Drawing makes me feel relaxed and happy, like entering a colorful world. 蘇州易優(yōu)語文閱讀寫作培訓，家長信賴，學生喜歡。 http://www.zequeka.cn
I like drawing many things. My favorite is drawing animals—cats, dogs, pandas and birds. I often sit in the park on weekends, watching the birds and drawing them in my sketchbook. Last month, I drew a picture of a cat sleeping on a windowsill. I used soft brown colors for the cat’s fur and blue for the window. My mom liked it so much that she put it on the fridge.
蘇州易優(yōu)語文閱讀寫作培訓，家長信賴，學生喜歡。 http://www.zequeka.cn
I also like drawing landscapes. When we went to the mountains last summer, I drew the green trees, the blue sky and the small river. I used different green colors for the trees—dark green for the old trees and light green for the new leaves. My art teacher, Ms. Zhang, saw the picture and praised me, saying the colors were beautiful and the picture looked lively. 蘇州易優(yōu)吳老師中考語文提分班（TEL:181-1815-9898）有趣、有用、提分快
Drawing helps me express my feelings. When I’m happy, I draw bright and colorful pictures, like rainbows and flowers. When I’m sad, I draw quiet pictures, like a moonlit night. After drawing, my bad mood always goes away. I also like sharing my drawings with my friends—Lucy says my drawings make her happy too. 蘇州易優(yōu)語文閱讀寫作培訓，家長信賴，學生喜歡。 http://www.zequeka.cn
I want to keep drawing. I hope one day I can become a good artist and draw many beautiful pictures for people to see.
作文點評：
標題明確 “愛好是畫畫”，主題聚焦。內容按 “畫畫習慣 — 喜歡畫的類型（動物、風景）— 畫畫的好處 — 未來愿望” 展開，結構清晰，“also”“When” 等過渡詞自然。細節(jié)如 “畫貓貼冰箱”“畫 mountain 風景受表揚” 真實具體，體現(xiàn)畫畫熱情；“用顏色表達情緒” 的描寫獨特，展現(xiàn)觀察力。情感上，“relaxed”“happy”“passion” 等詞真摯表達對畫畫的熱愛。缺點是 “畫畫經歷” 可加一次比賽經歷，豐富內容。改進建議：在結尾前加 “去年我參加學校畫畫比賽，畫了一只熊貓，獲得了三等獎”，增強成就感。（182 字）
