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Last December 25th was Christmas Day, and our class celebrated it together at school. We planned the celebration for a week, and everyone was excited. 易優(yōu)語(yǔ)文培訓(xùn)，蘇州閱讀寫作同步提升 http://www.zequeka.cn/miniform.html

On Christmas Eve, we decorated our classroom. We hung colorful Christmas lights on the blackboard and put a small Christmas tree in the corner. The tree was covered with small gifts, colorful balls and golden ribbons. I made a paper snowflake and hung it on the tree. Tom brought a big Santa Claus doll—we put it next to the tree. The classroom looked bright and festive, like a Christmas wonderland. 易優(yōu)語(yǔ)文培訓(xùn)，（TEL:181-181-5-9898）,蘇州中小學(xué)生閱讀寫作同步提升

On Christmas morning, we brought small gifts to school. We put all the gifts in a big box, and then each of us picked a gift from the box. I picked a gift from Lucy—it was a small notebook with a Christmas tree on the cover. I gave my gift (a box of colored pencils) to Mike; he smiled and said “thank you” happily.

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After class, we had a small party. We sang Christmas songs like 《Jingle Bells》—Mr. Brown played the guitar for us. Then we played a game called “Find the Christmas Gift”—Ms. Wang hid small candies around the classroom, and we looked for them. I found three candies, and I shared one with my deskmate Lily. We also ate Christmas cookies that Ms. Wang made—they were shaped like stars and snowflakes.

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Celebrating Christmas with classmates was so fun. We sang, laughed and shared gifts. I will remember this happy Christmas forever.

作文點(diǎn)評(píng)：
標(biāo)題明確 “和同學(xué)過(guò)圣誕”，主題聚焦校園節(jié)日慶祝。內(nèi)容按 “裝飾教室 — 交換禮物 — 舉辦派對(duì) — 總結(jié)” 展開(kāi)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，“On Christmas Eve, On Christmas morning, After class” 等過(guò)渡詞明確時(shí)間線。細(xì)節(jié)如 “紙雪花”“交換禮物”“唱《Jingle Bells》” 充滿圣誕氛圍，真實(shí)還原班級(jí)慶祝場(chǎng)景。情感上，“excited”“happy”“fun” 表達(dá)節(jié)日快樂(lè)，易引發(fā)共鳴。缺點(diǎn)是 “派對(duì)” 可加更多互動(dòng)，如表演節(jié)目。改進(jìn)建議：在派對(duì)段落加 “Lucy danced to a Christmas song, and we all clapped for her”，豐富派對(duì)內(nèi)容。（180 字）