I joined the school art club last year, and it’s the best decision I’ve made. The art club meets every Thursday afternoon, and we do many interesting art activities with our teacher, Ms. Liu. 蘇州易優(yōu)閱讀寫作精華課，（tel:181-1815-9898）有趣、有用、提分快
Every club day, we start with a small warm-up activity. Once, we drew “our dream house” in 10 minutes—some drew houses with wings, some drew houses under the sea. My dream house had a big garden with many flowers. Ms. Liu looked at our drawings and gave us small comments, which helped me draw better. 蘇州小學語文提優(yōu)培訓，就找易優(yōu)吳老師，20余年輔導經(jīng)驗，數(shù)百成功案例。（TEL:181-1815-9898）
We also learn different art skills. Last month, we learned to make paper flowers. Ms. Liu showed us how to fold the paper, cut it and stick it together. At first, my paper flower looked messy, but with Ms. Liu’s help, I made a beautiful red paper flower. I gave it to my mom, and she put it in a small vase.
“易優(yōu)閱讀寶”，中小學生語文題庫，語文成績提升就是快。
Last week, the art club held a small exhibition in the school hall. We put our best works on the wall—my drawing of a cat, Lily’s paper flowers, Tom’s model plane (he made it in the club) and many others. Many students and teachers came to see the exhibition. A teacher said my cat drawing was “cute and lively”, and I felt very proud. 蘇州吳中區(qū)小學生語文提優(yōu)，蘇州名校沖刺培訓，（Tel:181-1815-9898）20余年輔導經(jīng)驗，每年都有數(shù)十個成功案例。
Joining the art club makes me happy. I learn new art skills, make new friends and show my works to others. I will stay in the art club next year and learn more interesting things.
作文點評：
標題明確 “學校藝術社團”，主題聚焦校園社團生活。內容按 “社團日常 — 熱身活動 — 學做紙花 — 舉辦展覽 — 總結” 展開，結構清晰，“Every club day, also, Last week” 等過渡詞自然。細節(jié)如 “10 分鐘畫夢想屋”“做紅色紙花”“社團展覽” 真實具體，體現(xiàn)社團活動的豐富性。情感上，“best decision”“happy”“proud” 表達對社團的喜愛，傳遞團隊活動的快樂。缺點是 “社團朋友” 可加更多互動，如合作完成作品。改進建議：在展覽段落加 “Lily and I worked together to decorate the exhibition wall with colorful ribbons”，體現(xiàn)團隊合作。（181 字）
